~MAHSOOS~ THREAD 8 (not pg 153) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
seems maan enjoys her irritation on krpia being in their home
and now what happened with kripa?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
loved a update
do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
congrats...

part 66
nice part...
Armaan is impressed by Annie...
poor Kripa...
how i wish Angad is here...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
ok ok
finally i managed to read, comment & "like" the left out parts
you can do whatever with me for making you wait this long
*run Sara for your life*

the parts were long & beautiful but you know very well that i can't match up your writing quality ... i mean i always end up writing same thing in every FFs of every buddies of mine as i simply don't know how to put exact feeling through words
trust me, if i would have been that good ... i could have written atleast one piece of work by now
about the update, they all were damn cute ... the way you presented each emotion was really lovely ... but i am still angry on you for not PMing me about the update of "animosity"
in contrast, it was MIND BLOWING

do cont soon & do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
MAHSOOS PART 67



The cool breeze replaced the last night air from each corner of geets room. It looked all fresh and new. Geet walks in, maan still at the same position, listening. He could here noise of the tray and smell of food.

"food? We should go downstairs and join others" maan suggested. Geet instantly snaps and looks at him. She bends down and rests the tray in front of maan.
"I don't want you to have breakfast with kripa."
"hmm..."
"yes, that's true. I don't. I can't stand her. I -know , I- know she is going through tough time, but I am to- ... To endure her in my house."

Geet clearly expressed her anger and sat next to maan. He dips his hand on the plate, and sweetly hold the food in front of geets mouth. She did refuge but that soon ran way seeing how sweetly maan was trying to feed her.

"have you spoken to your parents geet?" maan wondered. He have left this conversation to late. It's time to push geet to make some effort. He have to admit that geets anger was surprising him with limits.
"no I have not" geet coldly replied, yet wasn't sure exactly what to think. Her mind always becomes confused when there conversation comes to her parents. Parents who have betrayed her. Although this betray do not hold a special dislike in her heart. Nor it matters if she forgives or not however, one point was certain, if this forgiveness does not take place soon, she will heart maan immensely by accepting this marriage is a mistake. This is something she could never risk.

Geet slowly looked at maan, with deep breath, "I - I was thinking to visit them sometime next week..."

Maan listens in concern. There were no happiness in her voice or the agitation to see the loved one. "geet- I want you to go when you feel like, not when you think, you have to... to win my trust. You already have..."
Geets brown eyes couldn't help it self to wide to have her husbands full view. Drink every corner of his feeling with her eyes. Her heart sank with thousand emotions. It was impossible to explain how her heart skipped beats after beats.
"maan..." after long gap of silence, she gasped out his name, thrashing the petite body against the rock hard muscle.

...

Later on at the lunch time geet and maan joined the table. Geet have her last annual trip from collage, just after the exam finishes.
"are you going?" maan wondered as they were eating lunch on the dark wooden table. Mostly every one have left.
"no; I surly can't. Oh- I just don't want to."
Maan knew her reason very well, it's because of kripa.
"geet, I really don't want you to miss out anything on the last few days of your collage."
"ha, but it's not a big deal and precise, I -I won't be able to stay way from you..."

Vicky who was standing at the background, he gave out a historic laugh. It was funny for him, even after 7 months of marriage they are thinking like a first time lover. Geet sye looked down while maan amusingly smiled, hiding his face with his finer.

"bhabi, Owo, shall we plan another honeymoon?" maan showed his embarrassment clearly. His face without warning became red hot. Now what can he say? Without having the knowledge of how there honeymoon looked like.- it is this embarrassing then how about geet? What she may be feeling.

Geet kicked vicky hard on his leg.
"ouch"
"well, maan, don't you think it's vickya turn to bring someone in his life, I mean, come to think of it... 20 is a very good age for marriage & responsibility." geet giggled as vickya laugh disappeared and soon he ran way. Marriage wasn't on vickya diary or plan, not at this point of time. Maybe in 10 years! Vicky consoled him self and walked out.

...

Kripa was wondering around, when she noticed maan and geet walking back to there room. Her heart instantly skipped several beats, but she wasn't sure was it because she have seen after so long or was it the pain of seeing him with another girl. She puled her body behind one of the pillar, and like a little girl, she kept looking at them, how maans hand was around geets waist, how they were laughing at something unknown, how they are perfect... But amazing if she was there.

...

Maan opens the door for geet to enter, then him self... He gently closed the door, and walked in to the study room..."
"dad have arranged a party this Wednesday!"
"hmm..." geet was busy replacing the old flowers with new one.
"it's for sharma; he have brought most of there lost business so the family at least can start from somewhere."
"that's is so nice of papa."
"yes, it's very nice"
"does that mean I don't have to endure that kripa any more?"
Geet excitedly, like a child.
Maan laughed, he could imagine, only thing that was buzzing around her head was in how long kripa would be leaving the khurana mansion.
"yes, perhaps... & dad have booked everything for your shopping, you can go with anny and buy what ever you 2 like..."
"nahi, how many time I have told you, I always want you to come shopping with me!"
"it's not just you, it's anny to and I can't see to judge!"
"I don't care. You are coming."

...

Kripa on the other side of the door was listening very carefully. She have lost to many things in this life, but now "not any more" she wipes the tears off that was crawling down her cheek. Promising her self, she will win maans heart. Without any tricks or turn.

...

Anny sat in her pink princess bedroom, the color really did not matter to her, if that made any difference but the feeling of colors was something special. She is weak, an not as active or strong as maan, however maan have taught her enough.

next- ( this part later today... :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
congrats on the new thread. and jst loved it. it was just amazing. continue sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
So Kripa upto her tricks agn..mayb she'l use Annie to win Maan.. Cn wait for the next one x
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
gr8 part. continue sooon. hate dat kripa to the core. itna kuch hone ke baad. she is upto something new. i guess geet won't leave her.
Edited by dh_riti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
lovely update... i hate tat kripa... wen will she be packed out of khurana's house
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 67
nice part...
whats wrong with Kripa...
she very well knows Maan will never accept leave accept will never ever consider her or her feelings then why is destroying her own life...
yaar if this is Kripa of KYPH then bring Angad the Rockstar...
i like AK so much...
cont soon...

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