FORBIDDEN LOVE ~2 updated prt19 on pg 130( 17/8)

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

great part
but who is this stalker now
plz continue soon

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

This update was terrific.. Geet is just so .. so.. strong. in how she does not want to give in to desire alone, her stubborn refusal to involve Maan in the stalking problem..

and I LOVE Maahi.. all the more because you chose Mohit Raina for it !

and now this man.. Maan.. hes enough to drive anyone crazy simply with how stubborn he is regarding what he wants.. and how he wants her.. the incredibly arrogant man simply does not want to see beneath this layer of his need for her..

I believe when he leaves for the project, that is when the stalker track will come to a head.. cannot wait...the tension between the two is so palpable..

do continue soon !

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Okay I feel terrible for Geet !!! 😭 🥺

More than her I really feel pathetic for Maan and his insensitivity 😡 irrespective of lost memory !!!

I LOVED Geet's ST of on the verge of breaking this facade of marriage as she cannot get used to this new maan !

and for good reason ... it seems Maan only zeroes on his "needs" or tries to convince himself the same ! *pity*

And as if to add to her woes this stalker ! 😕

Only plus point is Mahi 😳 for Geet at this time !

Nice guy 😛 {handsome too 😉}

Maan needs an introspection asap !

Edited by drashsree100 - 13 years ago

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Awesome part..loved it..i just hope geet is able to share her worries with maan..and maan helps her..loved them sleep so peacefully together..

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

nice part

thanks for the pm

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nafisa_kazi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Bindu, wow!!!! what an amazing update...thank u...

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Bindu chechi i was that close to cursing ur maan for being so insensitive and demanding geet... 😡 usme itna dum ki geet ko pareshan kare... but u saved ur maan from my wrath with the last line... e sirf mazaak kareth ho ka 😲... i really hope geet gets her reins in place... i love a bad maan but i hate when he takes these sensitive things over the top for geet 😡...

PS: no offense meant for ur writing chechi... i love u and your writing 🤗

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

dear...

4 PMing me dear.😊...

4 ur

updates..⭐️..

ur updates r really &

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just dear..😃.

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: glassdoor
If you are showing Maan's character to be the same as in the show, I feel Maan would never do the things that are mentioned in this FF. I think the actual GHSP handled Maan's memory loss fantastically well. It was totally inline with his character traits. He did not "fall" for a married woman like Geet. He showed her utmost respect and consideration. He even refused to do marriage "rasms" with her because it would get her hopes up and would not be right for her! He did not open up to her until he was absolutely sure that he had feelings for her. This is the way Maan would have reacted even if he had lost his memory a thousand times!

But the way you have shown is not inline with that.
1. First off he sleeps with a married woman. Someone like Maan would never stand by that or do that. He did not even sleep with his wife when the doctor said it was not allowed!
2. Second he equates a wife's needs to something merely physical. He does not know her but he knows what being someone's wife really means...
3. He proposed to have an affair with her and abandon it as per their convenience. Sorry to say cannot imagine Maan doing something like this.

i understand ur stand and u are not alone in ur opinion😊...
i do accept that the serial wala maan will not ask geet to have an affair with him, abt the rest i am skeptical coz the first time he made love to her in the hotel room he was intoxicated and the attraction for geet was there, along with the fact that he knew her to be his in some subconscious level...
it is just that i wanted to present this aspect of marriage that does happen in reality and took it when the opportunity came in this story... no offense meant to ur sensitivity😳
another reason is that i was bored writing abt a maan whose personality puts ur dream man to shame 😆(as i am sure many of my friends and i wud say abt the SR maan) and i have kept true to maan's character in Recycled Destiny too...so i have taken liberty with this Maan giving him shades of grey😉...
hope i haven't offended u😃
bindu.