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Here is the EPILOGUE of my os..I AM IN LOVE

It was a bright sunny morning..the sun rays hit Geet's face and she slowly opened her eyes..today was a very special day as it was Maan and Geet's one year wedding anniversary..Geet found herself tightly locked inside her dashing husband's arm..she smiled at his possessiveness..even in his sleep he does not seem to let go of her..then she remembered the passionate night..they made love..she blushed even more and hid herself in Maan's chest and gradually fell asleep again.

Maan woke a one hour later to see his life tightly locked in his embrace..he tightened his grip around her and slowly kissed her forehead. He did not want to wake Geet up as he knew she would be tired after their long passionate love making night. He simply adored his beautiful wife whilst she peacefully slept in his arm..after a while, although he did not want to let go of Geet..he had to..as he needed to make arrangements for their anniversary party.

...

By the evening Khurana Mansion was decorated grandly..everything had been supervised so well..the guests started to arrive one by one..and they all appreciated everything about the party from their welcome, to the food, to the hospitality and so on.

Dadi and the Handa's could not have been happier..everything had to be perfect..as today was they day to unique hearts became one..today was the day two lovers became husband and wife..Maan and Geet's love story was so well known not just in Delhi but all around India..and maybe one day their love story might be known with other magical love stories like Romeo-Juliet..Heer-Ranjha..

Maan and Geet were two separate individual who have now become one..they live for each other.. these two names will be etched in people's heart forever now.

...

The party was going on in full swing..everything was going perfect..slowly the lights were dimmed and the spot light fell on top of the stair case where the heavenly couple slowly approached from their bedroom holding hands.

Geet was dressed in a red saree which she designed herself and Maan was dressed in a black suit with black shirt and a red tie to match up with Geet.. they slowly descended down the stairs and were crowded by news reporters..after answering all their questions Maan and Geet took blessings from the elders who gave them all the blessing they could think of.

Maan did not leave Geet's side for a second..he introduced her to all his business colleagues who were very happy to finally meet the girl who had changed The Maan Singh Khurana completely..

Geet also introduced Maan to her friends..who were left gobsmacked after seeing The Maan Singh Khurana right in front of them.

After meeting and greeting all the guests..all the couples were called to the dance floor..Maan and Geet were in the centre of course and they dance beautifully together..Maan had his arms wrapped around Geet's waist and Geet had her arms around Maan's neck..she slowly hugged him and Maan simply tightened his grip around her..they sway like this till the music slowly came to an end.

The guests were fed lavishly..and they thoroughly enjoyed themselves today..after giving their gifts to the special couple they all slowly made their way out of the party.

...

It had been a long day..Maan and Geet were sat on their bed with gifts all around them..their room was filled with gift boxes and bags..they unwrapped a few and decided they will do the rest tomorrow.

Maan leaned back on the best rest and Geet rested her head on his shoulders..holding hands and simply living the moment of having the most precious possession right next to them..who they love unconditionally.

Maan: acha Geet tumne poocha nahi..ki main tumhare liye kya laya hoon?

Geet: mujhe aapke siva aur kuch nahi chahiye..agar aap mere paas hain..toh main samjhoongi gi ki poori duniya mere kadmoh main hain

Maan: (in awestruck) Geet main hamesha tumhare paas rahoonga..(he gave her a tight hug..coming out of the hug) lekin phir bhi main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon...hope tumhe pasand aaye

Geet: Maan aap mere liye kuch laye aur mujhe pasand naa aaye..aisa kabhi ho sakta hain kya..

Maan returned to the bed with sooo many gifts bags..he had brought Geet diamond jewellery sets..designer sarees and suits..make up kits..perfumes..a huge teddy beat that was holding a big red heart which read Maan Loves Geet..and many more things

Geet could not believe all this..she loved everything..Maan completely understood her tatste and brought everything according to that..she did not even realise when Maan had done all this shopping..she simply adored the hude teddy and gave it a tight hug and a kiss.

Maan: acha..teddy bear ko hug aur kisses diya ja raha hain..aur maine jo itni mehaat ki..uske ke liye kuch bhi nahi (he turned his face sideways jokingly)

Geet: are Maan..aap toh bura maan gayi..(she got off the bed and came in front of him and kneeled down..she took his hands into hers)

Geet: (lovingly) Maan you mean the whole world to me..without you I do not exist..main aapse bohot bohot pyaar karti hoon..I LOVE YOU Maan..!!!!

She leans forward slowly and takes Maan's lips into hers..she wraps her arms around his neck and kisses him ever so passionately..at first Maan was really shocked but he immediately responded by holding her back and passionately responding back to the kiss..her kiss said everything to Maan.

Maan: Mishti I know how much you love me..aur main bhi tumse bohot bohot pyaar karta hoon..I LOVE YOU Geet..!!!!

They share a bone crushing hug..and stayed like this for a few moments..after parting..

Maan: waise main mazak kar raha tha..the teddy is actually really cute

Geet: main jaanti thi..lekin phir bhi I played along..just to show how much I love you..

Maan smiles broadly and wraps his arms around Geet's waist again.

Maan: waise maine toh aapko apki gift de diya hain Mrs Khurana..par mera gift kaha hain?

Geet: hmmm aapka gift..uske ke liye aapko kam se kam 9 months wait karna hoga..

Maan: (confused..) matlab?

(Although Mr Maan Singh Khurana was smart with everything else..when it came to things like this he was very you know..hehe) 😉😆

Geet: (feeling shy) matlab aapka gift aapko 9 months baad hi mile ga..

Maan: (still confused and let Geet out of his hold) Geet aisa konsa gift jiske liye mujhe 9 months wait karna hoga..

Geet: woh gift kuch aisa hain..joh sirf main aapko de sakti hoon..(she slowly brought his hand to her stomach and placed it softly on there) hamari pyaar ki nishaani

Maan was speechless for a few minutes..he did not know how to react..he kept staring at Geet whilst his hand still rested on her stomach

Maan: (finally getting the courage to speak) Geet tum sach keh rahi ho?

Geet simply nods her head and hugs Maan..he holds her ever so gently not wanting to cause her any discomfort.

Maan: Geet aaj tumne mujhe sabse bari khushi di hain..I never thought I will ever see this day..I cannot believe it..main papa banne wala hoon...thank you sooo much Geet..mujhe itni bari khushi dene ke liye.

Maan slowly makes Geet sit on the bed and making sure she is resting properly..he adjusts her pillows for her..places the blanket on top of her and sits beside her..taking her hand into his.

Maan: Geet..doctor ne kya kaha? Sab theek hain na..(he asked anxiously)

Geet: haan Maan sab theek hain..aur hum dono ko kal doctor ke paas jaana hain..10am ki appointment hain..

Maan: okay..ab tum aaram se so joa

He makes Geet lie down and slowly pats her check until she falls asleep..he moves to his side of the bed and just watches Geet..until sleep invaded him.

...

Maan was nervously walking from one end of the doctor cabin to the other..waiting for the doctor and Geet to come out the check up room..it had been more than twenty minutes..and he was getting restless..if they did not come out within the next one minute he decided to walk in..it was his wife at the end of the day..just when he started to walk towards the room..the door opened and out came the doctor looking a little worried and Geet behind her.

Maan: doctor sab kuch theek hain na..Geet aur baby ko koi problem toh nahi hain na..aap chup kyun hain doctor

Doctor: relax Mr Khurana..ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain...sab kuch theek hain.. the mothe rnad the baby...no I should say..the mother and the babies are absolutely fine..(the doctor said smiling at the nervous looking couple sitting in front of her)

Maan/Geet: ji..??

Doctor: ji haan..congratulations..mubarak ho..Geet aapko twins hone wale hain

Maan could not have been happier..Geet's happiness was evident on her face..she was on top of the world..she always adored babies..and now there were two growing inside of her. Maan gave her a tight hug and both thanked the doctor and made an exit from the hospital.

...

Maan passed on the news to everyone..they received many congratulation messages.. Dadima was on cloud nine..she will finally see the next generation..Mohinder and Rano were also very excited about the grandchildren..the office staff of Khurana Mansion sent Maan and Geet many good wishes..as well as Maan's business colleagues.

Time flew past..Maan took care of Geet every need..her weird craving at weird times..her mood swings..he never left her side.. he worked from home.. he fed Geet.. he put to bed.. read her pregnancy books.. he always kept her happy.. in the Mansion he made a special room for the new borns..he room filled toys..teddy bears..pictures of them.. this was going to be the room for the twins.. Geet could not have been happier.

...

Everyone was present at the hospital..Geet went into labour..the pain was unbearable for her.. Maan felt helpless that he could not do anything to save his Mishti from all this pain.. he anxiously walked to and fro around the waiting area..everyone was eagerly awaiting the good news..their eyes were locked on the door.

After ages the doctor came out smiling and Maan ran to her as fast as he could..they all literally cornered the doctor..bombarding her with questions.

Doctor: ek minute... aap sabko bohot Mubarak ho..and especially to you Mr Khurana..your wife has delivered to healthy and very very cute boys...Geet sabse pehle aap se milna chati hain.

Maan ran as fast as he could to reach to is Geet as quickly as possible..once he reached her room which was exclusively booked for her..he saw her waiting eagerly for him..she promised him that they will see their babies together. Maan walked to the bed and sat next to her and gave her a side hug..he knew Geet was weak at this point so he did not want to cause her any discomfort of any sorts..he gently pecked her lips..and they saw two nurses walking in holding their babies..the nurses gave the baby to the parents and quietly left.

Maan and Geet were both holding the babies and they could not believe it..there was no words that can express this feeling of seeing your baby..and they were feeling double happiness..they simply adored their little cutie pies and kept them close to the hearts.

...

Maan: Geet tumne naam socha hain?

Geet: yeh Aryan (she said to the baby she was holding) aur woh Rohan (gently caressing the baby's check that Maan was holding)

Maan: Aryan aur Rohan

Geet: kaise laga naam aapko? Aapko pasand hain na?

Maan: aisa kabhi ho sakta hain..mujhe yeh dono naam bohot ache lage.. Aryan Singh Khurana.. Rohan Singh Khurana..!!!

Dadima just walked in at that moment and saw the couple sitting close to each other holding the bundle of joy..she quickly grabbed her phone and took a picture..it was a perfect family moment..and moment that will be remembered their whole life.

...

After 5 years

Everyone was nervously waiting outside the labour room again.. Rano sat with 5 year olds Rohan and Aryan sitting either side of her.. Maan anxiously walked from one side to another..he finally sat down on the bench and Rohan and Aryan ran to their dad.

Aryan: papa hamari angel kab ayegi?

Rohan: haan papa..hum kabse wait kar rahe hain..

Maan: (bringing both them onto his lap) woh aapke paas bohot jald arahi hain..bus thodi dair aur wait karlo..

At that time the doctor came out smiling again..and before everyone started to bombard her with questions again..she went straight to Maan..

Doctor: congratulations Mr Khurana..your wife has delivered a healthy and beautiful little girl.

Maan knelt down next to the twins Rohan and Aryan and gave them both a tight hug.

Rohan/Aryan: yaaay hamari angel agayi..hain na papa?

Maan: haan beta..aap dono ki angel agayi..chalo mere saath..

He walked towards the private room where Geet was eagerly waiting for him and her two cutie pies.. he went forward and gave Geet a peck on the check and a hug.. he lifted Aryan and Rohan onto the bed and they both Geet a kiss and a hug. The whole family was sat on the hospital bed waiting for the nurse to bring the baby..

The baby was finally brought to them..and she looked just like a angel.. in other words she was a complete replica of her mother Geet. Maan was on top of the moon..his family was now complete. They all had a family hug being careful not to hurt the baby.

Geet: (to Rohan and Aryan) acha aap dono apni angel ke liye naam socha kar raka tha ne.. ab toh mujhe aur apne papa ko bata dijiye

Maan: haan..come on guys..ab jaldi se bol do

Rohan: theek hain after three

Aryan/Rohan: three..two..one.... DIYA

Maan/Geet: Diya..kitna pyaara naam hain

Maan: Diya Singh Khurana..(he said proudly)

Whilst Diya rested in her crib..and Rohan and Aryan were watching her sleeping..Maan and Geet were simply watching their three lovely kids..their family was now complete..Maan was ecstatic and Geet was over the moon..being the mother of three lovely kids and the wife of a man who loved her and the kids unconditionally..what more could she asked for.

Maan: (hugging her) Geet thank you sooo much for coming into my life..I LOVE YOU

Geet: (hugging him back) thank you Maan for everythign..I LOVE YOU too..!

They broke away from the hug when they heard Diya crying..Maan lifted her up and brought her to Geet..he also lifted Rohan and Aryan on the bed too..after slowly patting Diya to sleep again..the family was silently watching their little angel..

Adi and Pinky walked in..to congratulated them when they witnessed the most beautiful scene ever..Geet holding Diya..whilst Maan sat next to her having his arm wrapped around Geet's shoulder.. and the twins Aryan and Rohan sat close next to their parents. Adi and Pinky both pulled their phones out and took a picture of this completed family..

Maan Singh Khurana and his family..!!!

(Imagine this picture is of Diya)

(Imagine these 2 as Rohan and Aryan)

A lovely poem written by Abreshmina

I cherish the day I saw you first
Eating golgappe,feeding your thirst
Saw you next and knew you were mine
You brought back in me a shine..!!

Days passed
And I loved you more
You Knocked lightly
And opened my heart's door..!!

Now you're officially mine
The world has seen it
Our souls are one now
Hearts beating when together we sit..!!

You gave the best gift ever
Bringing three cuties to me
Our love they signify
Deepening it like a sea..!!

Thank you sooo much Honey...love the poem...!!!!!!

THE END

(I hope you guys enjoyed this one shot..I hope you guys liked the epilogue..please do press the like button and comment..I love reading your comments)

Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Guys frgt 2 mention dat pm's will b given tmrw.. I updated this at half 10 at night so cudnt b bothered pm'ing..hehe

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Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow superb update
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome end or shd i say BEGINNING...
loved it...
MAAN singh khurana n his sweet lil family...
loads of hugs...
do write these often🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it dear...😳
a complete khurana family😛😳...
Thank Youfor this awesome os...
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Posted: 13 years ago
angel... Finally m hea...
Sry meri jaan... I knw m sooo late.. :(

Bt okay.. I'l cum to d updates...

D wedding update ws superb...
I loved d flashback.. It ws sooo cute...
Plus Maan cumin n seeing his bride 1st.. N den getin d kiss from his would-be wife...
Aww... Sooo cute...

I loved hw Maan submitted himself to Geet completely... Heehhehe... Awsum...
Geet k taraf se thora prob hua.. Hehehe... Maan hd to be in air to claim his jaan..
Bt it ws cute...

Cumin to d epilogue...
Wow.. Angel...
What a long n perfect epilogue...
Hw u described their anniversary... Den Geet givin d gud news...

Aww... Aryan n Rohan r such cuties n den their angel Diya...
I loved it all angel...

Amazin work...
I told u.. U wud rock...
Bless you..!! ;)
Love u angel...
Muuuaahh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice epilogue.Maaneet hav 3 kids now.Superb
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thank u 😃

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