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🤗 Hello .. Adad ... & Salam Namaste Maneetians 🤗
Ki haal chal?? 😉
Guess the Winds r blowing too strong these days... considering Someones PUNAR-Vivah is happening and Someone is away celebrating in Dubai? 🤔
But what better time for Winds to Blow...for its...
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Remembah ... we had an 'Oh eSs CON-test'???? 🤓
(sees Maneetians scratching head 😆 .. hota hai.. even i forgot till Dimpu n Jaz whacked me bleddy red 😆)
Sho.. 😳now that our AWESOME-licious.. to DIE- for Writers have done their JOB.. its time for us.. to do ours...
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*Entries*
Entry No. 1 - Real Love

Maan driving his car at a great speed his eyes where searching for his geet...its been two days she is missing.. he can't able to find her' he has seen her with a cute smile on her face, waving her hand and saying bye in the airport when he departure to London..After that he just heard her voice over phone and communicates through messages '

Now after a week he returned from London to meet is loving wife but she is missing which is a shock for him. He is now searching his geet for the past two days without a break he decided not to rest before he found his geet..

Her image is flashing in his mind a clear image of his cute wife' who is very beautiful'. Before a year he met her and he fell in love with her at first sight... he didn't believe in love at first sight he didn't even think about it before but now there is some thing in her which attracts him .he lost himself in that sight and fell in love with her but his love soon turns into anger when he found that she married to some one else and not him.Some tall guy is near her and he introduce her as wife to every one around him.. maan is broken in to pieces but fate has given him another chance'one late night its almost 1 AM he is driving his car in high ways he again seen her with a teary eyes and running towards his car he didn't believe his sight ..Is it his dream?? Where she is wearing a while salwar and running towards his car like angel but angel won't cry and she is crying' why she is crying? and she seems to be afraid of some thing he stopped driving and get down from his car but she didn't notice him and run as if some one is following her maan run behind her where she running more faster and at last she jumps before a huge van and remains in a half dead state'

Maan admitter her soon in the hospital and found that she is afraid of some thing he enquired her and came to know about her struggling life with her husband vikram who tortures her to the core. Who is basically a psycho? In the name of love he tortures her...He wont allow her to come out he always locked her in side her house and gives her a lots of mental as well as physical tortures which is visible in her face and her eyes tells all about her fears..it take lot of time for maan to convince her and at last he made her sleep but she wakes up in middle, shout and mummer in sleep due her pain and fears its taken lots of time for her to forget her tragic past..maan try to convince her but even after some months of there marriage she didn't forget the whole pain given by him..After a year also she didn't able forget the each and every tortures she got from vikram...Her fear full eyes tells him more story than her mouth about vikrams torture each and every cell in her body is tortured by him and she loose all her self respect and confident due to his mental torture..His words will always kill her like swords each and every time'maan now too remember the fear in her eyes when ever she got a scary dream about vikram. Now he kidnapped geet..How she will be now? With that psycho.. Is he tortures her even more..??

He afraid for her now'Is she well??Did vikram harm her?? Is she fine?? More questions is arousing in his mind which he didn't find answers yet...all of a sudden he saw geet again running in front of the car and fell down in between the road due to tiredness he cant bear this he not able to see her like this at last he grabbed his strength seeing her in that condition which is worse more that that night and made her comfortable giving water and made her sit peacefully and wait for her to open up.. After some time she started whispering gathering her whole strength "maan he is no more...vikram is no more he trapped me in our farm house he again try to torture me in the name of love but now I came to know what the real love is so I trapped him in the same word and killed him'" she gave a victorious smile as her tragic life is ended'.

Entry No. 2 - He and his wife
Sunset was attractive.But it did'nt strike my eyes.The day's work was over.I got my salary in my hands.My only intention was to find the best textile shop and buy the best dress for my wife.It was her birthday.I wanted to gift her the prettiest dress available in the shop.I wandered through the street.I saw a texitle shop and i got inside it.My eyes went through the sarees there.I picked up the one i liked the most.The person who was standing next to me chose a glittering red saree.
"Is it for your wife?"I asked.
"Yes.Today is my wife Geet's birthday.It's my birthday present for her.Tonight we will celebrate her birthday",he replied.
I was surprised.
"Today is my wife's birthday also.Tonight i am planning to surprise her with a beautiful dress".
"That's a pleasant co-incidence".
"What is your good name?"I asked.
"Maan",he replied."Your good name?"He asked.
"Dev".
"Nice to meet you".He shook my hands.
"My wife must be waiting for me.I have to leave now",he said.
"Carry on.Even i need to leave now.Otherwise i will not get bus.My wife will be waiting for me".
"You have to wait for the bus?I will drop you by car".
"No thanks",i refused his offer politely.
"Come on.On the way you can come home.You can share my wife's birthday cake",he forced me.
I could not refuse.
We went to his house.The front door was locked.
"Your wife is not here?"I asked.
"She is here".
"Then why is the front door locked from outside?"
He did'nt reply.He opened the door.We got inside.There was a yummy birthday cake there.
"Where is your wife?"I asked.
He took me to a room.There was a beautiful lady's framed photograph on the table.It was decorated with flowers.I was shocked.

I sweated.
He kept the saree near the photograph.
"Geet..this is your birthday gift.Happy birthday".Maan talked to the lady in the photograph.
"Your wife is no more?"My lips shivered.
Maan became emotional.Suddenly tears dwelled in his eyes.
"Three years back i lost Geet physically in an accident.But still she is here with me.I can feel her presense.I always celebrate her birthday.I celebrate all the festivals with her.She loves celebrations.For her,life is celebration".He became emotional.

Maan imagined Geet coming in the red saree he bought for her.He looked at her deeply.

She blushed.

Maan cut the cake imagining Geet standing close to him.I got the share of the cake.Though the cake tasted sweet,i felt the bitter taste of Maan's tears.
Entry No. 3 - Pyaar Ka Dusera Naam
She was running and zipping through like the wind through the trees. With every step she took she felt she was constantly on the brink of tripping and sprawling on to the merciless and endless jungle. Her lungs ached as she ran, as if she couldn't draw enough breath. She couldn't hear his steps, but his menacing laugh she heard every couple minutes kept on reminding her how close he really was. Her legs would of failed on her a long time ago, but she was running only for one person, the only reason of her existence today! If she feared anything right now it was getting separated from him. But no matter how hard she ran, how hard she looked she couldn't find him.
"Keep running, Geet", his voiced pierced through her ears, as cold ripples of fear continued to run through her body, chilling her to the bone. "Run as fast as you like, I will still catch you", he laughed again, as she covered her ears and tried controlling the tears that were threatening to escape. Soon she freezes in place, her heart skipping a few beats as her world comes crashing down.
She screams, "MMMAAANN", but before she could run toward his bruised and bloodied up body that laid across the ground, her mouth gets covered by a white cloth, and the last thing she heard was a faint whispering, " Now no one can separate us. Not even your Maan. You will be only mine, only Vickram's now!" before she dozed off breathing in the chloroform.
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As his final words, "Now no one can separate us not even your Maan!" played back in her head it made her body and heart scream in pain, fighting to wake up and gain consciousness. She finds the will power and snaps awake, screaming "MAAANNN" from the anguish of losing him, from the fear of becoming separated from him.
Her eyes finally found his eyes and she couldn't help but now drown in them. Soon a tear escapes from her brown eyes. He was here. He was here with her. Although he was tied up, she was happy to see him bandaged up, and no longer bloody. She runs towards him and throws herself on his chest.
"Maan" she says taking him and his scent in. "He . . .he can't separate you from me! I . . .I can't live with out you"she says stuttering and trembling from the fear of someone taking her away from his arms.
" He is nothing but a coward, only can attack me from the back. But even if he was a man he wouldn't be able to separate you from me Geet", Maan says soothing her heart with his confident words.
"HAhahahaha" his menacing laugh again chilling her to the bone, making her fingers scrunch tighter on Maan's shirt. "If I was a coward I would have left you to rot in the jungle, but instead not only did I keep you alive I also cleaned you up. If you ask me I did you a BIG FAVOR", Vickram says nonchalantly.
Maan: oh yeah that's why you tied me up like a coward!
Geet couldn't believe she hadn't done this from the beginning; she starts to untie the rope around him."STOP GEET" she hears him say as he points the gun towards Maan's head.
Vickram: Come with me or else I will kill him!
Maan: No he won't he is a coward. If he wanted me dead he would have left me to die in the jungle. Don't go anywhere with him Geet!
Geet was just frozen and numb.
"Don't test me Khurana! The only reason why I kept you alive is for you too see me as I take Geet away from you forever as you wither in pain".
You had given me a lot of big talk. I want to break that ego of yours. And the only way to break you is through Geet.
" I am tired of this", Geet says finally as she stands up and looks straight into Vickram's eyes.
I am tired of pretending to be in love with Maan. I will go with you Vickram, because I can't believe someone loves me so much that he would even kill someone to get to me.
MAAN screams "GEET! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! You don't have to do this! WHY are you lying!
Geet snatches and grabs Maan's collar and says with venom in her voice, " EXACTLY I DON'T WANT TO LIVE A LIE ANYMORE MR.KHURANA! I only married you to get even with your brother Dev, for what he did to me! My love for you was a lie! This marriage was a lie! And you were so stupid not to see it. How could you think the same girl, who got her dreams shattered from a Khurana, could marry and fall in love with another Khurana?? If Vickram hadn't come along I would have been gone by now with all your money and you would have been on the streets with a broken heart just like your brother did to me!
" Geet" was all maan could utter in pain. He knew she was lying, but it still hurt. Geet looks over to Vickram who was confused, who didn't know what to think.
Geet: what? What's gotten into you all of a sudden? I thought you wanted me to come with you? Or was I just a game for you, which is now over?
Vickram: No I just can't believe it. My Geet is actually falling for me?
Geet starts to slowly approach Vickram, but he couldn't tell what she was up to and just took steps back trying to decipher if she was telling the truth until he get's backed up to a table.
" Well than would I allow you to get a taste of this if I was faking", she says as she starts to inch closer to his lips.
Vickram closes his eyes in anticipation, while Maan was screaming, "Nahiii Geeet!!! You are lying! You are trying to save me!!!DON'TTT!!! I rather die than see u kiss that coward!!! Geet don't do this to me. GEEETTT!!!"
Vickram was practically a centimeter away from her lips when his eyes shoot open and he whispers "ugh ughh Geeet".
Geet pushes harder and he holds his stomach more in pain. He lifts his hand up to find blood, his blood! He makes the mistake of looking up into Geet's eye who once again pushes the knife deeper into his stomach.
" let alone touch me dare you call me by my name again!
Even if I wanted to I couldn't give you what you want. I belong to maan. Not just my body but also my soul. Geet sirf Maan ki liye bana hai, Geet sirf Maan ki hai, aur Geet hamesha Maan ki rahegi! Samjhe Tum!!!
She says as she takes the knife blade out and shoves it back into his stomach, as he screams in pain. She had seen the knife on the table, and held this pretense in order to corner him and teach him what it means to mess with her MAAN. It wasn't just about her anymore, he was threatening to kill the love of her life, and for Geet that was crossing the line! Vickram finally falls onto his knees, holding his stomach, and looking at Geet with pain in his eyes murmuring, " But I loved you Geet" before loosing consciousness.
Geet turns around to find Maan lost in her. Lost in the love she had for him. She walks up to him without looking into his eyes, she didn't know how to after bringing such shameful words to her lips, and unties the rope around him. The guilt was killing her, and she was about to turn away from him, when Maan grabs her by the wrist and pulls her back as she comes crashing into his chest. Maan slowly raises her chin with his hand, and before Maan could say anything Geet blurts out " I'm sorry" looking straight into his eyes as tears welded up in them.
Maan: I knew you were lying from the beginning. Your eyes couldn't hide the pain each word was causing you. After all Geet is made only for Maan, hain na?
Geet just nodded in happiness as she controlled her tears of happiness. Maan gently cups her face and softly murmurs, "Kaise mujhe tum milgaye? I love you so much Geet!
"I love you too Maan", Geet replies with the same passion. By the look in his eyes, she knew what he wanted. " These lips belong to you, so no need of asking for permission Mr. Khurana", she seductively whispers before crushing her lips against his, claiming it to the world that she is and always will be Maan Singh Khurana's.
True and selfless love always triumphs. Selfish love, if it can even be called love, like Vickram's love, will always fail, and maybe will end you up in jail just like him. Especially when it is up against True, Selfless, and Unconditional love known as MAAN AND GEET, pyaar ka dusera naam!
Entry No. 4 - Safe in the arms of my Love

My eyes were drowsy. I had no clue where I was . my head was spinning. With great difficlulty I opened my eyes. The last thing I remember was vikram dragging me away from maan, maan was shot, oh! My maan was in pain. I got up with sudden jerk and found myself in a king sized bed in a room with all luxuries of the world. This was defenitely not my home. "Maan" I shouted. " why do you always utter that sinful word " I turned to see the source of voice , I saw vikram standing with his arms crossed, leaning on the door. It was then I realized , I was KIDNAPPED.

" Don't fear me geet. You are in the safest place, no one can never come near you "he said advancing towards me with dirty smirk. I moved back in disgust. " you'll be mine FOREVER. We just have to drop the last bit of him from you." He said . I clutched my mangalsutar in fear he may snatch that. Later I realized it was not a mere black chain that was hanging on me but something more than that. I saw a lady doctor walk with him . He was talking with her about abortion. I was stunned. I caressed my stomach in disbelief and excitement. MY BABY. I am pregnant. My heart rejoiced the word. But soon the happiness in my face was replaced by worry as I saw the doctor close the door and approch me. "plzz don't kill my baby ''plzzz" I begged but she didn't lend her ear to my pleadings. I saw her walk towards the bathroom. Taking advantage of her absence I escaped. But was soon chased by the monster named vikram." Geet don't run or else'" he stopped on his tracks taking a gun out of his pocket. For some reason I believed that he would not shoot me and so I continued running. My legs were rooted when I heard the click of trigger followed by a gun shot . The next thing I know was that I fainted.

I woke up with pain in my head but the whole atmosphere was calm and soothing. I found myself covered in his protective arms. He was constantly caressing my back to assure me that he was there near me always. I snuggled close to him inhaling his scent to sooth my senses. It was then I remembered about that moron , I wriggled in fear , as if reading my restlessness he pulled me closer to him if that was possible and whispered in my ears" don't worry mishty he was shot dead by the cops''. Now no one can harm you ". I took a relief breath. Suddenly the thought struck my mind I was about to tell him when he silenced me by pressing his finger on my lips. " not now mishty our baby needs some rest " he said touching my stomach ever so lightly . I smiled seeing the glow in his eyes when he said 'OUR BABY' . He now started to caress my stomach smoothly and I dossed of into blissful sleep in his arms.
Entry No. 5 - Be Mine
In the utmost vehement manner, the ordinary girl was ripping apart his heart. She loves him. Indeed, she loves him! He knew with absolute certainty. Yet, why did she feign apathy? Maan scuttled after her, halting her hasty gait. He would not free her regardless of how deep those cruel words penetrated through his soul. Those tears she drowned in could not be more apparent. Then, why did she deny this attraction?!
She slipped away, attempting to evade his hindrance; in vain, however, for he thwarted her escape. The tortured man demanded answers as she continuously repudiated. Her evasion induced one question in his irrational mind: why did she deny this attraction?
Regardless of how difficult the process proved, she would not succumb to his persistency. She could not. Doing so endangered the fragile shell that protected her from Maan. Hence, Geet tried again to avert from him. And again, Maan grasped her wrist. In such a way, he held her that Geet became ensnared. He advanced until she could barely writhe.
As he pinned her to himself, Geet grew motionless. Distance ceased to exist since he rigidly refuted to their separation. What he desired was dangerous proximity: a proximity that could only heighten their irrational incognizance and snatch away their hastened breath.
"Stop." Geet managed to exhale the onerous load contained in her chest.
"I sought your reason for leaving me. Give me your reason." He demanded.
"Some reasons cannot be revealed." Geet could hardly mutter as she quaked in fear. How hard it was to simply avoid him. The man she fell in love with was persistent. He would follow her until the end of their lifelong path. He would cast away the obstacles that stood in their way. But some quandaries could never be discarded. "Just leave me."
He laughed sarcastically as if rendering her words as a joke. Geet gathered her hands and violently struck against his chest until he winced. However to her disappointment, Maan only retaliated. Maan pushed her forward until her feet slipped from the ground and her back hit against his navy blue covered bed. Automatically, she began pushing against him to rid his heavy weight off of her. Enraged, Maan grasped her wrists in one hand and thrust it above her head.
"Get off of me!" She squirmed beneath until he placed his hand on top of her head, holding it securely. She was paralyzed. Geet pursed her lips, recognizing the failure of her impact.
Maan's eyebrows furrowed with discombobulating rage. Ever so gently, Geet was shredding his sanity. He yearned for tranquility yet without her, such a desire appeared unimaginable and with her, such a desire appeared difficult'because Geet denied this attraction. And he asked again and again, why did she deny this attraction?
For fear, of course. However, only Geet could disclose this truth. She suppressed the urges building inside of her, thirsting to remain close to him. In the realms of Geet's world, there was so much more to fabricate rather than reveal. If she exposes herself to Maan, everything shattered, including the shell Geet enclosed herself in.
Yet, how could she not see how Maan felt for her? Nevertheless how ugly she claimed to be, Geet could barely comprehend the pearl he had foreseen inside the sequestering shell. The fear brought darkness to her eyes, to the point that Geet could not see reality before her eyes, that for once, someone could love her. So, how shall he prove it then if evidence is what she demands?
"Sleep with me." Maan proposed coldly. Geet's hair tightly interlocked with his fingers. She looked startled. "Perhaps that's the proof you need. Perhaps that will mend your insecurities."
"Insecurities'" It was the reason why she could not be with him. The word was a drill hammering into the wall of her membrane. This emotion of love Geet had felt before. She surrendered to her heart's desire, yielding to a man (coincidentally Maan's brother) who feigned every ounce of affection he emoted. Geet could not diminish the haunting past that crawled into her sleep. They were the scars to the mistakes she committed in her pathetic life.
These were the same damages that induced her heart to tremble in fear at the mention of Maan. Every sensation and every thought she possessed, they were all a reminder: the unfathomable pit Geet herself shoveled. Oh, how most ardently Geet loved Maan! But Geet could not cast away the emotions that had controlled her life for such a long time. She could not give up her heart when it was stolen once. However the restraining thoughts began to evaporate. They were replaced by dominating sensations that Maan marked upon her, as he gently leaned into her.
"Maan," Geet said before she held in her breath. Her heart palpitated with amplified proportions. Geet could not remember how long she suffocated. Yet, she knew the moment the suffocation ended: as his lips touched hers, blazing fire from his skin accelerated through her entire body. It burned from her limbs to the tip of her organs until Geet finally pacified. She found herself breathless but unable to relinquish their lingering contact.
Nonetheless, her moment of bliss soon crushed into bitter pieces. He broke away. In vain, Geet reached out since Maan still bound her head and wrists. Hesitant, his forehead touched hers; he, mutually unable to endure the distance. Together, they breathed in ragged rhythm. They gazed intensely into fiery eyes, seeking love.
"I dare you to deny this attraction." His words barely a whisper, impaled through her guarded soul. He was dancing the tango with her, slithering towards her, slipping into her heart, exposing the embedded sensation- the sensation she rebuffed. Does she dare to deny this attraction? He was not a fool! His lucid eyes perceived beyond the faade Geet prepared.
"Forget your past." Maan pleaded. "Let me be your one and only. And in return, simply be mine."
"I can't," Geet stammered, submitting to the vulnerability she protected so well. Tears trickled down her eyes. He released her hands and wiped away the sadness from her eyes.
"Just give me a chance." Maan sought.
*Continued*
Edited by Armu4eva - 13 years ago
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Entry No. 6 - Dil Hai Tumhara
She still sat dumbfounded at what had happened. What had transpired between them? A few moments ago she was an unwed expectant mother who was fighting for her baby's life and now she was Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. In all sense Maan had made her his! Maan ki Geet!
She remembered what happened at Pindy Queen's party. Nayantara had accused her of her ouster from the Khurana Mansion. She also held Geet responsible for her husband; Dev leaving her. She held Geet and only Geet responsible for the turn of events in her life.
She sat in the corner of her bedroom in the Outhouse recollecting that one moment when she had truly became Maan ki Geet!
Nayantara had pushed Geet of the balcony of the party venue and let go of her hand; when her Knight in Shining Armor had come to her rescue as usual! It was like a Tradition that when Geet was in trouble Maan would be there; by any means; by hook or by crook to save his Love; his Life! And today was no different! He was the only one who would hear her cries in the crowd; however distant they may be; either emotionally or physically; Maan would be always there with her. Maan would always be there to be her pillar of strength; to be her support and her Mentor. Maan would be always there!
When he had pulled her back in the familiar set of arms Geet felt her heart beating again and herself breathing again. Her intuition knew he would be there; her heart knew it all!
He literally took her in a rib crushing hug; hoping that nothing happened to her.
Maan: "Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to main aapne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata."
All she saw in his eyes was the fear of loosing her and plain hatred for Nayantara who dared to push her.
And Nayantara wasn't done yet; she again alleged that Geet was wrong. She was a blot on the society when Geet had dared to roar back when Maan wanted to talk. Geet continued;
Geet: "Ab tum is had tak gir gayi ki tum mere bache ko maarne ki koshish kar rahi thi."
And then Nayantara had questioned her dignity; her self respect; her character.
Nayantara: "Jo ladki mujhpe ilzaam laga rahi hai; kya uski shaadi huyi hai? Is bacche ko kiska naam dogi? Bolo Geet. Hai koi jawab?"
Maan: "Bas Nayantara'Geet kal tak akeli thi par ab nahi."
And Maan at that instant had broken a glass; with blood oozing from his hand; pulled Geet towards him and smeared blood in her partition claming her as his forever!
Maan: "Aajse Geet ke naam ke saath Maan Singh Khurana ka naam jud gaya hai. Aayinda se Geet ko kuch bhi bolne se pehle ek baar soch lo ki tum kisse baat kar rahi ho"
Recollecting the turn of events; she felt blessed; truly blessed but was scared of a relation with him. She was scared of a future with him. She was scared if anyone would hurt his Pride and Ego because of her. But then she remembered that here she was talking about Maan Singh Khurana and for her He would do Anything. Anything!
She couldn't let him take any decision that would hurt everyone. She needed to leave him and go; she had to leave Maan for their as well as his happiness sake. She was in tears now. The very thought of leaving Maan and to go away from him was killing her. Her heart was bleeding and her soul cried. But then she heard a knock on the door. She heard the door crack and there in front of her was Maan. Maan saw Geet there, he felt relived that she hadn't gone anywhere. He constantly feared that she would any day run away from his life before he could even stop her. His face showed a sense of calmness; relief and the love for her shining from his face.
Seeing her so exhausted he lifted her and placed her gently on the bed. He was about to leave when she held his hand; she had to confront him now.
Geet: "Aapne aisa kyun kiya Maan sir?"
He looked down at her with all love he stores for her in the world and spoke;
Maan: "Maine ye sab tumhare liye kiya. Kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon. Aur koi tumse badnaami kare ya tumhare gairat par sawaal uthaye ye main bardaasht nahi karoonga."
Insecurities and questions running in her mind she questioned him again;
Geet: "Lekin sab ke saamne aapne itna bada kadam kyun uthaya? Kyun apnaya mujhe? Ek baar to aapne baare main socha hota?"
He held her hand and gently kissed it. He held her chin and made her eyes meet his. He continued;
Maan: "Kya tum itna hi samajh payi Maan Singh Khurana ko?"
Geet: "Jee?"
Bewildered looks on her face; leave it to Maan Singh Khurana to infuriate her and pacify her in a matter of seconds.
Maan: "Maine isliye tumhaari maang bhari; tumhe apnaya kyunki main tumhaare saath apni zindagi bitana chahta hoon. Kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon. I love you Geet!"
She could see the genuineness in his eyes and the words he spoke. But her tears overtook and she asked him again. She squeezed his hand and questioned;
Geet: "Aap hamesha mera saath denge na?"
Maan: "Haan Geet main marte dam tak tumhara saath doonga."
A lone tear left her eye and traced its path down her cheek. He kissed the tear and enveloped her in a hug. He released her from the hug and then was just staring at her beauty; her simplicity and her charm. He continued;
Maan: "Geet maine tumhe apnaya hain. Tumhare saath aanewaali har ek pareshaani ko; har ek mushkil ko; har ek zimmedari ko; har ek sukh ko aur har ek dukh ko apnaya hai. Maine tumhe apnaya hai aur humara baccha tumhara hissa hai Geet. Isliye aajse ye baccha humari zimmedari hai Geet."
He gently took her hand in his and carefully removed the Kadas and placed a soft kiss. She just stood there. He then took over the necklace and once again he laid butterfly kisses along her nape and her bare neck! She had started to melt in his arms and he knew that! He just had to go near her to have her weak in her knees. She was responding to his touch. And that was just what he needed and he continued her assault on her. He then removed her Maang Teeka and left his marks on her. He had marked her as his! Only his! Only Maan! She was truly Maan ki Geet! And soon both fell asleep in each others arms.
It was morning and the sunrays woke Geet up. She got up; got freshened up and came back to see Maan standing right in front of her.
Another insecurity rising she caressed his cheek and asked him;
Geet: "Kya aap mera zindagi bhar saath denge?"
Kissing her forehead he replied;

Maan: "Tumhara Maan to bana hai sirf Geet ke saath khade hone ke liye."

It had been Maan who took her into his arms first. A moment later, he felt her hug him back and stayed enveloped in his arms listening to their hearts breathing in rhythm with each other.
"I love You" She said as she rose herself from his chest and whispered in ears. She stepped back and placed a gentle kiss on his cheek!
Entry No. 7 - Pyar, Ishq Aur Mohabbat
Geet is standing still with tears rolling down her cheeks, looking at the moon, lost in thoughts of Maan; "You said you loved me because you cared but at the same time you said you hated me. Why did you play games with my heart?". She goes to the prayer room; "Babaji, please forgive me, I never meant to slap Maan. Since the day I have met him and his love touched my heart, I am incomplete without him, so help me Babaji to prove that to him". She gets ready in the morning to apologize to him. Maan is driving by when he sees Geet calling out for a taxi in vain. He drives towards her, rolls down the window and with a straight stern face, without looking at her, asks if she would like to accompany him to the office. Geet whispers "yes dhust dhanav", and is happy she got an opportunity to apologize to him, so gets in quickly . As she puts her seat belt on, her hand touches his and they both look at each other lovingly'Maahii'.with an inner smile. Geet nervously recalls her slap and moves her hand away. Maan is sad and thinks to himself that "for what I have done, I deserve her hatred". Maan starts driving while Geet just keeps looking at him mustering courage to say something, instead she starts coughing. Maan is worried, stops the car and offers her some water. Geet sips some, but starts sweating. Maan removes her seat belt and puts some water on his hanky and starts wiping her forehead with his hand supporting her back. Geet has tears in her eyes and keeps looking at Maan, as she starts to faint. Maan immediately supports her and carries her to the back seat, lays her down, he is extremely tensed, takes off her slippers, her dupatta and sprinkles water on her face. He keeps whispering "Geet" all the time and says he is very sorry for everything. He places her head on his lap as he shakes her up a bit. Geet slowly opens her eyes and sees tears rolling down Maan's cheeks. She tries to get up, when Maan hugs her tightly and says "I am sorry Geet". Their hug gets more intense as they both weep and caress each other's back. Geet runs her fingers through the back of Maan's hair and says "I am fine now Maan, don't worry, I am where I belong". That brings a smile on Maan's face and he slowly moves his hands caressing her shoulders as they face each other. Geet wipes his tears and says "I am sorry Maan". Maan says "no Geet, it is all my fault". Geet puts her finger on Maan's lips and says; "chup bilkul chup". Maan holds her face with both his hands and nods a yes while he wipes her tears and she his tears. As they separate from their intense hug, Geet realizes she didn't have her dupatta on her and starts looking for it. Maan slowly puts it back on her while they both blush at each other. Maan carries her back to the front and tells her to relax, Geet smiles as she closes her eyes. As they drive to the office, Maan whispers to himself "I wonder if I am a good life-partner for Geet?,look at what I have done. I promised to protect her from all evil and love her forever, but broke her heart. I think I am forcing myself on her, need to give her some space". Geet hears everything, but just rests her head on his shoulders and thanks Babaji for helping her get her soul mate back.

The car makes a jerk and stops. Maan moves Geet's head off his shoulders to check on what is wrong. Geet slowly opens her eyes and sees that Maan is standing outside. She asks him why and he says they have a flat tire. She gets out of the car to check on it, but it starts raining and hailing so heavily, that before they could realize, they both get extremely wet. Maan tells Geet to get back in the car, but water is dripping all over - the front seats all get wet. Geet starts sneezing and Maan is all worried. He tries to wipe the water off her face, but in vain and she keeps sneezing the more.

He starts to take off his shirt and vest. Geet says "Maan, what are you doing". He says "Geet, nobody is around, so don't worry, need to keep you warm, otherwise you will catch a cold". He quickly lets go off his wet jeans and slides over to the back seat.

Sitting on the back seat, he lifts Geet up a little and as he pulls her up to join him, he gets rid of her salwar-top with her wet dupatta. He wraps his hands around her. Geet is comfortable, warm and content in the arms of Maan. Geet asks what will happen now and he says they will stay this way until their clothes dry a bit. Geet lifts her head up and asks him if he still feels she is not where she belongs. Maan looks at her lovingly and says he isn't thinking about her anymore, all he knows is he is where he belongs and his fingers caress her bare back digging into her skin as they hug again and take a cat-nap.

When they wake up, they are shocked to see it is dark outside. They smile at each other and Geet blushes as Maan gets theirs clothes back on. They step out of the car and Geet says she is hungry. As Maan looks around, Geet sees a temple and says she wants to go there and thank Babaji for giving him back to her. Maan takes her there and they both pray. Geet tries to ring the bell, but she doesn't reach, so Maan lifts her up and holds her hand, while both ring the bell together. As Maan is putting Geet back down, his finger scrapes the bell and starts bleeding slightly. Geet is worried, but Maan assures her it is not hurting. She tells him to go and wash it. He says he has a better idea and holds her hand and takes her to the inside of the temple. He asks her if she is really sure about spending the rest of her life with him. She says "koi shaq?". He then comes closer to her and smears the blood as sindoor. Geet is elated, yet shocked as this was totally unexpected. She hugs him and thanks Babaji.

It is very dark now and Maan wonders how they will get back. He sees a bicycle and gets an idea. They both run hand-in-hand towards the cycle. Geet tells Maan he is lucky to have a wife who is so slim, so they could ride a bike together. He pulls his jeans up a bit and sits on the seat leaving enough space for Geet. She says "glad that I am wearing a salwar" and places her legs; one on either side of Maan. She fits perfectly in there facing Maan just like the final piece of a puzzle. Geet puts her arms around Maan and holds him tightly as in a passionate hug. Maan scoots a little more closer to her, so he can reach the handle of the cycle. Geet is literally sitting on him and she naughtily brushes her nose against his. Maan says "how do you expect me to ride, when you are getting me all excited". Geet laughs and kisses his shoulder, then rests her chin on it and says "OK my hero, let's go". Maan takes off in a romantic style, but hits a bump which makes him honk and they both say "hmmm" as they ride along...

Entry No. 8 - Regression, Confrontation, Acceptance
She walked into her room in a trance' the sound of the slap still echoing in her ear'She Knew she was wrong'better ay he was angry and when he was angry she knew he would go to any length and today he went into heights if hurting her..

When she saw him dancing with someone else just to show her she or her presence doesn't affect him hurt her the more made her burn that he is touching another girl in front of her knowing the better of her the final blow to her hurting hear was when he lifted her and twirled her in air just the way they the moment of togetherness they shared for the first time the thin bond started getting stronger from there the seed of the flower called "LOVE" started to root up that one dance that one togetherness changed their life. He became more protective of her.

He swam across the pool thinking r rather regretting what he which he sudn't had. Her not understanding him after Dev's bail dint bother him neither she pointing fingers at him but the thing that mattered him was she din't want to help her some where it hurt his ego that he cudn't see her point of view which lead them in two different ways knwing that she is watching him in other girls hand yet not accepting it bothers her to see him with other girl boosted his ego and led him to hurt her more. He knew she left for them for him coz she doesn't want him to get hurt seeing her hurt and some where it bothered her but his male ego din't let it go off so easily and finally led him into forcing her later regretting it.

A new day it both wanted to apologize to each other for the way they behaved ' got up from their bed and got ready not knowing that the following days in their life will be changed forever. They made it to the office him still lost regretting and she like always thinking of ways to apologize. They stepped into the lift one after the other not realizing. She made her way to step out of the lift but alas it was late the doors of the lift closed the breeze filled him with her scent vice versa and made hem steal glances at each other thinking possible ways to apologize. She gathered her courage to confront him before she cud the breeze made her duppatta caressed his fingers' not wanting to make his mood more bad she slowly withdrew the cloth which was consoling him like it was her doing it but her sudden action hurted him making him think that she is feeling disgusted that her duppatta touched him. Those made him take decision which he was dreading from morning and finally decided in making it work on he left the lift as soon as the doors opened'

Sunlight hit here serene face which glowed with some sort of happiness which she never experienced ever before. She slowly opened her eyes disturbed by the sunrays to the beautiful sight of seeing her cuddled into the arms of her most treasured person in her life. His arms tightly wrapped around her. She freed herself from his grip and went inside the restroom to fresh herself'She stood near the wash room and saw her reflection on the mirror. She touched her forehead where her parting was smudged with his blood in his name taking the honors of calling her would be Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana.

She freshened and went to make coffee and tea for them. After mins she found herself waking him. He opened his eyes only to the most beautiful sight of his life. She gave him the coffee and went towards the dressing table and started dressing herself after combing her hair her eyes fell on her parting which was adorned with his name. he came next to her and hugged her while Maan kissing her forehead

Their eyes met when they parted to relieve the past week leading to horrible and pleasant incidents.

She wanting to apologize to him regretting her act of slapping him come what may and getting locked in store room him still regretting and her question him and he replying that she'll get her answers in the evening.

She apologizing to him and him thinking of setting her free according to them and selling the office.

Geet goes to meet Maan after she learns that the new MD has terminated all the current staffs. Geet confronting Maan tat can't she stand on her own leg for once and confessing that he affects her more

Geet challenging Maan to rehire all IP staffs in KP along with her and Maan accepting her.

He realizing that however he tries to ignore her she affects him.

Naintara back to take revenge on them. She teaming with Sasha without them knwing her intentions lock Geet in the storeroom with Maan who was questing her abt doctor check up.

Geet fainting in storeroom Maan tensed seeing her fainted opens up to her unconscious form of her affecting him and that's y he wanted to stay away from her.

Naintara next plot using Pindi queen who comes as new client. Geet knwing the full truth of Maan Naintara confrontation from Tasha.

Geet open confession of wanting Maan back in her life otherwise her future might get blackened like her past. Maan accepting her apology.

Maan and Geet playing with each other asking for confession of the most beautiful words.

Pindi queen asking help from Geet to arrange for the party as the planner din't make it to the venue. NT asking her to send Geet to the storeroom.

Maan calling her and openly flirting her asking her to confess. Geet asking him to come to her if she wants to hear wat he wants form her. Maan reaching the venue matter of time.

Maan saving Geet from the falling chandelier and shouting at Pindi Queen for being careless.

Maaneet sharing sweet moment Geet abt to confess but Maan not wanting her to. Geet sending Maan forcefully to attend meeting. Maan feeling negative vibes and not wanting to leave the venue.

NT openly trying to kill Geet Maan saving her on time. Maan shouting at NT. NT accusing Geet for being unwedded mother.

NT further accuse Geet in disgusting words pushing Maan to edge of his tolerance angered by her angrily fills her maang with his blood stunning every one and says that now Geet is name is now acquainted with Maan Singh Khurana and taking her from the venue.

Leaving NT dumbfounded and every one accusing her for her low ideas.

Maan bringing stunned Geet to the outhouse. Incidents blurring her eyes Maaneet speak thro eyes of y he took the sudden decision has he has family wat wud Dadima think.

Their thots e with the ring of Maan's phone ringing and Dadima on the other side. He talks to Dadima and goes near Geet and holds her face within his palms assuring her not to worry abt their future he held her arms and le her towards the KM for talking abt their future to Dadima.

They went to Dadima tho Dadima first was reluctant coz of NT later she accepted for their marriage knowing true intentions of Naintara.

Entry No. 9 - Mahsoos
He was the one who had returned her smile. The same smile that would reach all the way up to her eyes, carrying so much innocence and a twinkle of mischievousness. He was the one who had returned her laugh, the same laugh that could give life to a whole crowd. And yet here she was tonight, in front of the very same man who was now draining and taking back her laugh, her smile! Why did he even bother returning it in the first place, when he was just going to TAKE it back, and leave her in a more broken state than before?Kyun babaji. . .
She thought she could act strong and not let him see how he was not only breaking through her, but also shredding her very soul. Except she couldn't help the bleeding tears to escape from her eyes, as he slowly twirled another woman in his arms in the air, just like he had once done with her. She winces in pain, wondering if even through the loud music could he hear the echo of the loud terrorizing breaking sounds of her heart, and may be then he could have mercy.
"Maan" she faintly whispers was all that could escape from her quivering lips. He finally looks at her, and meets her eyes and just like always she did not fail in drowning in those intoxicating brown eyes, which were full of rage and hatred tonight. Again wondering how could the same man who had wiped away the tears when the whole world had turned its back on her, be the reason for her tears tonight?
She finally was able to break away from his spell and make her numb legs crippled from the pain move. She just ran not even having the time to pick up the pieces of her shattered heart, which did not go unnoticed by the people attending the business party and especially by Maan. He watched her wiggle her way through the crowd, but didn't give it much thought. Only one thing was running in his mind and that was, "I had told you Geet, your presence no longer makes a difference to me. Mujh pe aap tumahara koi asar nahi hota geet aur abi meine yeh sabit kardiya. Hamari beech mein koi rishta nahi hai Geet! koi nahi!" he says to himself as he also leaves the room, but one question remained. Who was he trying to convince, Geet or himself?
" Arre Mk" Sasha calls out as he leaves her on the dance floor, but he doesn't even bother to look back.
" Sasha. Meri matlab hai Ma'am, lucky youuu!!! You danced with DD. Hayyye, so dreamy. But he left you just like that, and that too after that behenji types leaves. You don't think he just danced with you to make her jealous did he?" Tasha whispers to her. Sasha just gives her a glaring look. " Sasha does not get used! Whatever be the reason I will make sure to deal with this bhenji so she doesn't come in my way anymore", she says giving an evil smirk.
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Fresh new tears spiraled down her cheek as his gnawing words played back in her head, "Mujh pe aap tumahara koi asar nahi hota geet kyunki main tumshe nifrat karta huin. Hamari beech mein koi rishta nahi hai Geet! So just stay away from me! STAY AWAY!"
" Stay away he says. I did!" she says as she sobs looking up to the full moon from the hotel hall balcony.
Geet: When I am trying to move on, trying to go as far away from him as possible, he is the one who comes after me. He comes after me puts more salt onto my wounds, and then so easily says to stay away! HOW!!!!
She takes out the bracelet and opens the small locket up, where the ring he had given her resided in. She lifts it up to reach her eye level.
Geet: His touch, his eyes, his smirk, his smell, his anger, his memories are haunting me. He says we share no relationship! He says my presence doesn't make a difference to him anymore! Kab tak? Kab tak hum aapne aapko jhoot bhoolegi? We do share a relationship even if it is hate. Par apko farq parta hai Maan! FARQ PARTA HAI!!!
She wipes away her tears and decides to go back in and talk to him. She was tired of playing this game! She was tired lying to each other! And it was time for Geet Handa to end it!
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Maan sits in the car and hits the accelerator, the car roaring into life as he speeds away into the rainy night. The skies were pouring rain, as if letting out the tears of pain that Maan Singh Khurana held within. There was something bothering him, except he didn't want to admit to himself what it was. Maybe that is why he was running away? It wasn't long before her image pops into his head. The memory of Geet smiling and laughing danced right before his eyes, but then he sees himself, the demon, coming and swiping that smile right off her face. Maan breaks so hard that all four tires would have popped do to the immense pressure.
He busts out of the car and just screams, "KYUUUN!!!!" he screamed toward the sky with eyes shut and arms trembling with rage. The winds, which had picked up speed, were slamming the rain against his burning body. But still it was not enough to extinguish the fire and turmoil coursing through his body. No matter what this girl always made him feel wrong, made Maan Singh Khurana think what he did was wrong!!! She makes him forget his heartbreak and pain, and instead starts to burn in her pain, especially after seeing her tears. He opens up a couple buttons of his shirt, and then takes off this taveez, bringing up to his eye level, as it dangles in the air. There was no point in lying to himself anymore. Geet still had an affect on him, and this taveez that he still wore around his neck, proved just that. He tried, but he can't get himself to separate himself from this taveez, as if it's a part of his soul now.
Maan: Haan mujhe farq parta hai Geet. But it doesn't matter. It is better if I stay away from you now. Mein tumhe azaad karti huin Geet.
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Geet walks back into the party, but she couldn't find Maan. Before she knew it a hand blocks her path.
Sasha: Who are you looking for Geet?
Geet: Koi nahi.
Sasha scoffs. " I didn't know you lie also. I should have expected that from a cunning person like you! Mk has left, so your plan of trying to get back into his life will have to be put on hold. Actually I am here to cancel it forever. Aren't you ashamed of yourself? After the scene you created in his office, after the allegations you put on him, after bringing so much distance and pain into his family, your still trying to weave your way back in? Akheir tumhari Hasiyat kya hai? Who the heck are you Geet? What gives you the right to do all this? At first I just thought you were after his money, but now I know the real reason. You couldn't find someone else who is willing to give a name to your child, so now your back to square one of trying to put yourself and child on Mk haina Geet!!!
Geet was tearing up hearing such allegations, and the gossip they immediately erupted among the people. "Aisa nahi hai. . ." was all Geet could mutter before getting interrupted by Sasha.
Sasha: Aisa hi hai! You couldn't give a name to yourself, so then how do you plan on giving your child a name? This is why you are desperately in search and planning to entrap Mk! Let me remind you, that I am not going to let that happen. I won't let Maan's status and life get ruined by the burden of the two of you! Get out!! Get out of his life Geet if there is any shame in you left!
Geet held in her tears. She felt so alone and just looked down away from everybody's stares and accusations. "BAAASSS" a voiced roared in fury! Sasha trembles in shock and fear, while Geet could recognize that voice even under water. Geet looks at him with pleading helpless eyes, she wanted to run into his embrace so his warmth, his heartbeat, could make her forget where she was, make all the pain fade away. He storms inside squeezes hard on the taveez making his hand bleed, and just smears his blood on her maang!
"Agar himmat hai, phirse poocho! And if I may ask who the heck are you to ask GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA anything? Next time think twice before opening your mouth and see who you are talking to!
With that said he drags her out of the party. Geet still numb just follows him. The skies were still raining as they go outside. Geet stops in her tracks causing Maan to stumble back to a halt.
Maan: Geet get inside the car you are getting soaked.
Geet just looks at him waiting to hear more, waiting for him to tell her what her heart wants and needed to hear, waiting for him to end this unbearable separation between their hearts.
Geet: Now what relationship do we share Maan? Nifraat ya phir pyaar? Jawab doh mujhe!

Maan: We can discuss this at home, first get into the car, you are going to get sick.
" Now you care? So it is okay for you to bring me pain, but it is not okay for others? It is okay for you to decide when you want to help me and when you want to hurt me? It is okay for you to decide when you want to kick me out of your life and when to make me a part of it? It is okay for you to hate me, but then make me yours? It is okay for you to fill my maang and then not say anything, not end this separation that still exists between us? IT IS ALL OKAY FOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA HAIN NA?" she says with tears threatening to spill out as she walked up to him and scrunching the collar of his shirt for her answers.
"Kyun kar ra hai ho yeh sab meri saat Maan? Why can't you have mercy on my poor heart?" she says as tears trail down her eyes. She knew he did this because he loved her and not because he was doing this to save her from the accusations, but she wanted to hear it. She wanted him to end the separation.
She brings her eyes down and lets go of him taking in defeat, but before she knew it she gets slammed against the car, and finds her lips getting crushed by a familiar warmth. She succumbed in defeat and let his lips to devour her. She wanted to forget where she was, wanted to forget how to breath, and only his touch, his mouthwatering scent could do just that. Only his touch could stitch back the pieces of her heart and make all the pain fade away.
Maan finally breaks away, and huskily whispers near her ear, " Did you get your answer?" He then slowly trails his lips down to her cheeks and wipes her tears away with them, torturing Geet's senses to no ends.
"No I didn't get my complete answer. He needs to finish giving it to me" she mischievously whispers as she pulls him back taking in his lower lip. Maan smirks at her naughty answer and just listens to the order. He starts to get a little more aggressive, pushing her more up against the car, and Geet returning it with the same passion. They stayed like that under the raining sky, letting each other find themselves in each other's heartbeats and ending the separation of their hearts. When it comes to love sometimes the answer can't be put into words. For some it is easier to let the person feel it, to mahsoos it! 😳
H a P p Y V o T i N g
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Entry No. 3 - Pyaar Ka Dusera Naam

Entry No. 7 - Pyar, Ishq Aur Mohabbat

😳 😳

This was a very tough decision to make...all the entries we excellent👏 👏
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reserved...
will read them all and vote...
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my votes are for OS # 5 and OS #7😃

great job on all the entries👏
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Great Job Guys !! I Loved all of them 👏

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woot woot!! was waiting for this!! aab aaram se read karungi...phir vote karungi...im so excited to read the wonderful pieces!
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