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Sehar

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome...
loved it ...
like all other works by u...
love,
Sehar

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant update👏

Loved the poetry⭐️

Maaneet conversation superb⭐️

Loved the way geet confessed her love to maan..⭐️

Mind blowing dialogues👍🏼

Awesome ending👏

Eagerly waiting for new ss😊

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was indeed a beautiful short story Annie...even I loved it a lot as it was very very intense from get go.

Please do write something new as I really look forward to reading your stories

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome..too good..really very well written...keep it up...job well done...nice...simply wonderful...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

no words to describe.. just this 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

well that was a ss so i am not gona complain that u ended it...

loved the way u have written abt the love from their pain...

something diff from wat u hv written so far

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome.
Amazing.
Loved it.
Congrats...you completed one more story.

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afsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was such a nice ending

Loved it

Waiting for epi😉

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Priya Doss

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update...

still i don't feel like reading the last part...infact its like the beginning...

will u write an epilogue😉

please do update sacred sin too...am bored of being good...wanna do some or witness any sin😉

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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

I read last three parts at a stretch and should admit my eyes are moist not because of their pain but because of the beautiful writing skill you possess. This is one of the best Maaneet story I ever read, so much of emotions to go with...will wait for your next story dear...

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