LastPart10 'True Betrayal'Thrd5 Pg4 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
very beautiful
awesome
sorry for lacking words to praise the update
brain not working
very busy with assignment n school 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wow !!!!!!!! annie
ended on a very good note ..

short but damn sweettt ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

"Our love is as intense as this Pain Maan.

His world seemed to stand still to hear those magical words from her mouth.

My destiny betrayed me and took my happiness away..!

She placed one hand on his bare chest as she spoke.

The same fate betrayed me and brought love in my life when I least expected..!

Her eyes were locked into his.

My heart betrayed me and fell in love with you..!

She bent a little and kissed on his heart and he closed his eyes in satisfaction.

My eyes betrayed me and shed those frozen tears..!

She lifted her head and placed kiss on his both eyes one by one.

My mind betrayed me and refused to hate you..!

She kissed his forehead and then hugged him as she confessed the truth.

You betrayed me and didn't tell me the truth when we met first time..!

Oh God..! Everything betrayed me but now I realized it was nothing but "TRUE BETRAYAL"..! Since there was no deceit in that betrayal"


Oh god!i em in luv with ur words..

awesum end or i must say the new beginning..!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
thank god i didn't have to kill you.it was out of the world.of course start a new ss.definitely with happy ending.i don't believe in sad ending.literally i hate sad ending.loved this ss.that was unbelievably awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
end...mann nehi vara...iss kahani me bohut kuch the jo tum dikha saktithi...nywy...superb like ur others...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
can t stop posting my love nd like for the true betrayal ..

loved it annieee

ended on a very super note


fabulousss



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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awsem part please give us epilogue and tell snehaj to give us accidently yours epilogue also

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wowww annie awesome awesome ending of awesome ss yar loved it a lot 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wow awesome update dear
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
I so luv dis ss!
1 of the best ss i hve read till date...

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