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faria86

@faria86

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

waiting 4 the update plzz update soon 😊

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

oh no dont end it this was an awesome SS you are really creative 😊

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AmElOdI

@AmElOdI

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

just read the whole SS in a day...
loved it very much..

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LadyArwen

@LadyArwen

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

its an amazing piece of work... truly amazing...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

superb ending!

that was so touchyyy!!!

are you giving us an epilogue???

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

congo on fininshing a wondeful piece of writing ...

way to go gurl.

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

ossum dear
superb dear
really loved it to core dear
superb dear...
oh u ended it dear
cant even think that dear
it is most fav maan for me dear
becoz u always created a maan a destoyer
but he is in pain
superb dear
pls
pls
give us one epilouge dear
for our sake dear...
pls dear
i dont no even it ll be gud for epilouge or not
but i just wann to say is...
pls give the epilouge dear

waiting for the SS dear
and pls give the intro of DD

dear

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Mahwish

@Parrimuskan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

WoOoW anniee superb end of wordz but not their immense love...😊

Such a painfull yet filled with divine love...!!

Everythng betryal us but not the divinity and thats the truth which made Maan and Geet unite...❤️ ❤️

U r such marvellous and fantastic writer...
The magic of ur graceful wordz alwayz made me speechless...
Keep rocking sweeti...👍🏼
At every step we will be with u..

Love u... ❤️ ❤️