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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
how long this update will take Muski ...
i have to go out ...looks like will be able to read once I m back.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
waitin for an update!!
i love the song u ve added for this thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mymagic13


waitin for an update!!
i love the song u ve added for this thread


Which song??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

good night so javoo
aab kaisen neind aayegi
.. she winked
he shook his head .. bye..
she pulled the spread over head & fell thud back on the bed hugging the big pillow of his.

Maan switched off the lights in the hall & closed the self locking door & left. He didn't know wat he was feeling anymore!!!
his heart was bleeding burdened under his own misconception.. while a sweet happiness lingered around... magic of her words.. or was it just her..!!! na jaane kaisen khud ko har gaya..uske har ek ehsaas main..

he walked into the KM, lost.. unsure wat was happening around him. He straight went to his room, he looked at his bed..all he could see was her sitting cuddled up with puchki. He smiled & went to reach her... it was just her aks... he chuckled taking puchki in his hands. He painfully caressed the stitch right through the middle of the puchki... tears flooded down his eyes unknowingly... like he felt it was through her heart he stitched a deep scar never to be healed.. even if it did.. the scar remained for ever ... the feel shook his every heart beat... mid of all the trembling..his heart still felt strangely at peace having her so close. how was that even possible he wondered.

Next day morning was special he was there in her house with flower. He went like always but didn't know why he couldn't make it to her room, his heart was beating so rapidly it felt it could just jump out any moment.
In the room, she knew he was right there.. she bit her lips & pulled the spread over her head waiting for him to wake her up.. .. anxiety was making her heart too tremble.. she blushed so furiously like probably she was a new bride or something.
When he didn't come, she first peeped out of the spread & then sat up on the bed cutely making all kind of faces. Waisen tho rooz subha aake utta then hain.. aab dehko..
she tiptoed & saw through the key hole.
He was nervously walking up & down with the flowers in his hand
inhe kab se itni sochne ke zarurat padhi
she twisted her lips & went out... he almost jumped... well she had to pretend to jump...
wo.. main..main
she narrowed her brows & looked at him
he took a deep breath in, walking towards the kitchen & placed the flower on the dinning table
main breakfast banatha hoon
he cursed himself walking towards the kitchen.. breakfast banatha hoon.. wat is wrong with me..
she stood there wondering inhe kya huwa
teehk hain.. main ready hoti hoon
umm
he didn't know wat he was doing...

Geet came back dressed in her cute baby blue top & denim.
Puchki yeh teehk hain kya
he almost dropped the toast turning suddenly to see her & snapping out of his own confusion.
He looked at her blankly umm
her eyes didn't miss to catch the gaze of his... & then..their eyes met like it was for the first time ever, blush flared her cheeks... he was not taking his gaze off her... not a wink.. their heart began to beat in a different way if ever that could be possible. She shied & lowered her gaze pushing her curls behind... he was still lost in her.
Puchki toast she softly took it from his hand
sorry he snapped out
toast she repeated
yeh lo.. he just extended his empty hand
she blushed looking down
he got bit confused .. thats when he realized his hand was empty... he scratched his head making an idiot of himself & turned away pretending to make more toast.
They both came out their mahi moment when they heard geets phone ringing
her eyes widened .. yash sir ka hain
he peeped into her cell curiously
Geet ' good morning sir
yash ' u have forgotten me
Maan looked at her in shock... wats wrong with his dad!!!!
Geet ' nahi sir
yash ' do u even know its been how many days since I have seen u beta
Geet ' sir wo
yash ' mama ka charity show ho gaya na
Geet ' ji sir
yash ' phir
Geet ' sir thoda winding up baaki hain
yash ' belated happy birthday beta
she smiled ' aapk ko yaad tha
Maan made a cute face.. mera bday tho kabhi nahi yaad rahtha, humesha Daadi yaad dilathi hain
yash ' how can I forget ur bday sweety
Maan frowned.. sweety..equals mishti.. he made a cute complaining face to his mom.. looking up..
yash ' aacha suno aaj shaam ko office aana, main ne HR team ko kaha hain cake cut karenge
Geet ' ji sir
she cut the call & looked at Maan.. he was cutely looking up & busy complaining
she pulled his cheek .. challen
haila.. majnu.. tho flat dead.. forgetting all about his dads call
She quickly went & grabbed her bag & came out .. he was still standing there holding his cheek. She tiptoed.. & pulled his another cheek softly & giggled.. challen
he now held both the cheeks & nodded

they reached the venue.
Karan, raj & vishal were already there & seeing them karan hid something
Geet curiously went around ' kya hain?
Karan denied nervously
she looked at every one suspiciously
Maan looked at raj & questioned him. Raj looked away.. before anyone could say anything Daadi cam in. they all greeted Daadi with a wide grin
Daadi gave them the list of thank u mails to be send out.
Daadi then told some had to go & give a gift to Vidhya balan on her sets. Karan & vishal almost jumped forward. Daadi laughed & handed them the gift & address.

The moment every one left Maan immediately crabbed rajs neck... aab bol?
Geet cutely ' puchki deehre.. wo bolega kaisen
raj lifted his brows.. puchki.. & questioned Maan
Geet bit her lips
Maan ' phelen tu bool
raj ' kuch nahi karan is planning to propose Geet
Geet almost jumped more of a shock ' REALLY
Maan glared at her
she instantly changed her tone & said meekly ' really
raj laughed them
Geet ' wat r u laughing at
raj ' nothing
they all settled in the couch typing the mails.. raj again started laughing seeing maans halat
Geet ' wat??
raj ' nahi I was wondering how Maan will propose
Geet became very curious
Maan looked away ' muje nahi karna kisi ko propose
all that is rubbish
Geet looked at him making all kind of baby irritated face
raj laughed even louder ' yah right
uske liyen pyar ka ehsaas hona padtha hain
aur wo tujhe kabhi nahi ho sakta
Geet made a cute worried face ' wo kyun
raj ' I am sure he will first shout at her, fight with her.. may even have sex with her & fight with her again.. & then wonder probably he loves her
Maan almost coughed .. Geet looked here & there oddly
raj looked at them in disbelieve
she lost all hopes ' phir?
Raj ' phir kya tab taak koi ladki issen jhal payen tho.. uski kismat
hogaya tara bakwas
Maan snapped
raj muffled his grin - hogaya

Precap
Maan cutely jealous
-PREV part 144 NEXT PART 146 -
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on d new thread ! Waiting 4 d update 😍 . Awesome part loved it . Excited 4 next part 😳
Edited by siroilily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
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yaayyy for d first time in first page ok back to updt
haayyyeee it was so cuten gushy wushy types
awww loved yash geet convo what vl he do to maan when he comes to know of his doings????
haayyee that was so cute 1st maan nervous then geet pulling his cheeks cho cute!
omg raj teasing and maans halat fully distressed! lol!
karan proposing then almost their life history to geet raj u rock man!
ha ha maan j again!
cont soon!
u rock muskaan di!
Edited by ananya95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Fabulous part muski...

loved it...

Edited by huny.thebest - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
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omg..!! Its such a cute update
loved it
waiting 4 next
Edited by dipika009 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
OMG raj...love love love his taunting...omg i m still laughing with so much happiness...so true he is...kaise clearly apne dosto ko jante hain yaar...so so so ... i donno what i will say... too gd... so karan will propose n geet is already xcited...waiting waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
oh god maan s so cute..
i too feel like pulling his cheeks...
wow!it vl b a superb sight if karan proposes geet in front of maan..!
i wonder who vl give the answer..

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