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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start piyaa
loved d CS
plzzz cont soon
w8ing...
Edited by renjini263 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept
waiting for the first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
BANNER CREDIT: SHIVANGI
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the first part of this FF do tell me your opinions regarding this part and type of suggestion is always welcome
love- Piya
PART 1

Khurana Mansion

Dev: Maan kaha hai Nakul? [Where is Maan?]

Nakul: Maan Sir apne kamre mein hai [He is in his room]

Dev: Thik hai [ok]

As Dev was heading towards Maan's room he could hear someone singing

"Bachna ae haseeno lo main aa gaya haan bachna ae haseeno lo main aa gaya

Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman apni adaa hai yaaro se juda ha ha"

[Beware beautiful I'm here now! Oh beware beauties I'm here now!

A lover of beauty but beauty's enemy my charms set me apart from my friends]

Dev: Kya baat hai Maan aaj kis par keher girane ka irada hai?

Maan: Dev tu kab aaya yaar? [Hey Dev when did u come dude?]

Dev: Jab tum haseeno ko bachne k liye keh rahe the [When u were busy warning the beauties]

Maan: Ab kya karu apna andaaz hi aisa hai kar ladki meri deewani hai [Now what can I do my charm is such that all girls are crazy about me]

Dev: Maan sudar ja yaar kab tak yun ladkiyon k saath flirt karta rahega meri maan ek achhi ladki dhondkar usse shadi kar le waise bhi sache pyar mein jo khoobsurathi hai wo ye short term relationships mein kaha [Reform yourself dude stop wasting your time in flirting and find yourself a good girl and lead a happy married life with her as it is the beauty of marriage is much superior than these short term relationships]

Maan: Pyar aur wo bhi sachha pyar Dev teri tabiyat toh thik haina pyar vyar ye sab kitabo mein ache lagthe hai asliyat mein aisa kuch nahi hotha [True love ha give me a break Dev these things have value only when you read them in books otherwise in reality love does not have any meaning]

Dev: Achha ek baat bata teri itne saare girlfriends mein se kya tujhe aisi koi ladki nahi mili jisse tu dil se apnana chahtha tha? [Ok tell me one thing out of so many girlfriends didn't you find a single girl whom you wanted to accept wholeheartedly?]

Maan: Nahi [No]

Dev: Kya? Tere 4999 girlfriends mein se koi bhi nahi? [What? Out of 4999 girlfriends not even a single girl?]

Maan: Galat bol raha hai 4999 nahi balki 5000 ex girlfriends mein se koi bhi nahi [Your calculation is wrong its 5000 ex girlfriends and not 4999]

Dev: 5000 ex girlfriends maine kise miss kar diya? [Whom did I miss?]

Maan: Sakshi

Dev: Ye Sakshi kaun hai? [Who is Sakshi?]

Maan: Wahi jiski shadi mein main aaj jaa raha hoon [The same girl whose marriage function I am going to attend now]

Dev: Teri girlfriend ki shadi ho rahi hai aur tu khush hai Maan kya tu kabhi bhi kisi ek ladki k liye commitment nahi dhikayega? [Your girlfriend is getting married and you r happy can't you show commitment towards a single girl?]

Maan: Aisi koi ladki bani hi nahi jispar mera dil sachmuch aajaye kyunki sab MSK ki deewaniyaan hai har ladki meri ek nazar se hi meri taraf khichi chali aathi hai [There is no such girl who will force me to lose my heart. All the girls are same since each one of them gets easily affected by my charisma my single look is enough to draw them towards me]

Dev: Agar duniyaa mein aisi koi ladki ho jo inn sabse judaa ho aur jispar MSK ka jadu na chale toh kya tu usse shadi karega? [If u find a girl who would be different and on whom your magic fails to work would u marry her?]

Maan: Aisi koi ladki ho hi nahi sakthi agar MSK chahe toh kisi bhi ladki ko majboor karde ye kehne k liye k wo mujhse pyar karti hai [Such a girl cannot exist if I want I can force any girl to confess her love to me]

Dev: Toh thik hai main tujhe challenge karta hoon mere choose kiye hue kisi ladki se tujhe ye ugalwana hoga k wo tujhse pyar karti hai aur agar tu issmein successful ho gaya toh main shadi ki baat tere saamne dubara nahi karunga aur agar tu issmein haar gaya toh tujhe uss ladki se shadi karni hogi [Ok then I challenge u I will choose any random girl for you and you have to make her say that she loves you if you win this challenge I will never talk about marriage in front of you but if u lose then u will have to marry that girl]

Maan: Manzoor hai waise wo ladki kaun hai? [I accept the challenge btw who is that girl?]

Dev: Ye toh main bhi nahi jaanta par kal batadunga [I don't know but I will tell u tomorrow]

Maan: Kal kyun? [Tomorrow?]

Dev: Kal Youngistaan India newspaper ki ek badi party hai waha pe kafi famous celebrities aayenge waha koi na koi ladki toh mil hi jaayegi jo tere takkar ki ho [Youngistan Today newspaper is giving a big party tomorrow and many famous personalities and celebrities would be present at the party I am sure I would be successful in finding a girl who would be a tough opponent to u]

Maan: Dekhlenge k aisi koi ladki hai bhi ya nahi [Ok we will see if u r successful in finding a girl or not]

Dev: Toh chale? [So shall we leave?]

Maan: Kaha? [Where?]

Dev: Teri ex girlfriend ki shadi mein [For the marriage function of your ex girlfriend]

Maan: Are haan chal chalthe hai [Oh yes common let's go]

Meanwhile,

Office of Youngistan India

Amrita: Ye Geet kaha hai Meera? [Where is Geet?]

Meera: Mam Geet bus aathi hi hogi [Mam she is on her way she will be here any moment]

Amrita: Usse pata haina k kal humare newspaper ki kitni important party hai hum ek new supplement start karnewale hai aur ye ladki hai k isse koi fikr hi nahi [She is aware that we are launching a new supplement tomorrow and we have also organized a grand party for it seems that this girl is least interested]

Geet: Mam ab aapne topic hi inta boring choose kiya hai k interest aa hi nahi raha [Mam the topic that u have chosen is so boring that I am failing to develop interest in it]

Amrita: Lo aagayi maharani [Here comes the queen]

Amrita: Geet tumhe ye topic boring lag raha hai? [You feel that this topic is boring?]

Geet: Aur nahi toh kya Mam aap k pura supplement Pyar jaise boring aur bakwaas emotion ko dedicate kar rahe ho [Off course Mam you are going to dedicate that entire supplement for a useless emotion called Love]

Amrita: Geet pyar sabse khoobsurat jazba hotha hai aur waise bhi tum ye baat kaise samaj sakthi ho tumhe toh ye sab time pass lagta hai haina?[ Geet love is a beautiful emotion but how are u supposed to understand this as for u it is just time pass]

Geet: Mam ye sachayi hai ye pyar vyar sab bakwaas hai agar aajkal k life mein kuch exist karta hai toh wo hai infatuation ya attraction [Mam this is the truth nowadays love does not hold any importance the only thing that can exist is infatuation or attraction]

Geet: Har ladka I love u toh aise kehtha hai jaise k wo restaurant mein coffee ya chai order kar raha ho [Every guy goes on telling I love u effortlessly as if he is ordering a coffee or a tea from a restaurant]

Amrita: Tumhe toh kafi ladko ne I love u kaha hogana [There may be many guys who would have told u these 3 words]

Geet: Haan par main toh unn ladko ko apni jheb mein lekar ghoomthi hoon Geet Handa chahe toh wo kuch bhi kar sakthi hai ladko ko wo apni ungliyoon pe nacha sakthi hai [Yes there have been many but I really don't care as I simply carry these boys in my pocket. If Geet Handa wishes then she can make any man to dance on her fingertips]

Amrita: Geet tumhe challenges pasand haina toh main tumhe ek challenge dethi hoon mere choose kiye hue ladke ko I Hate U bolne par mazboor karke dhikayo [Geet I have a challenge for you I will choose any random guy and u would have to force that guy to say He hates u]

Geet: Kya matlab? [What do u mean?]

Amrita: Abhi tumhine kaha tha na k tum ladko se kuch bhi karwa sakthi ho toh kal ki party mein kafi bade bade celebrities aayenge unn mein se ek ladka jise main chose karungi tumhe uss ladke ko majboor karna hoga ye kehne k liye k wo tumse nafrat karta hai agar tum aisa kar paayi toh ye supplement mein tum jo chahe likh sakhti ho main tumhe nahi rokungi [Sometime back you were telling me that if u wish u can make any guy to dance on your fingertips so I just wanted to check this. Tomorrow many big personalities and celebrities would be coming to our party among all of them I would choose a guy for you and you have to make him confess that he hates u. If u win your challenge then u r free to write anything in our new supplement]

Amrita: Par agar tum haar gayi toh tum iss supplement k through sabko ye bataugi k sachhe pyar k maaiyne kya hothe hai [But if u fail then u will tell the importance of true love through our supplement]

Geet: Mujhe manzoor hai aur waise bhi I love u toh kafi ladko se sunn chuki hoon I hate u sunne mein ek alag hi maza hoga [It's a deal then it would be interesting to hear I hate u from a guy for the first time]

Amrita: Wo toh waqt hi bataega Geet k tum pyar ki pavitrata ko jhutlane mein kamiyaab hothi ho ya phir khud kisi k sachhe pyar mein dhoob jaathi ho [Only time will tell Geet if u would be successful in demolishing the purity of love or whether u yourself would get drowned in the world of true love]

Geet: Keep dreaming Mam kyunki aaj tak aisa koi ladka nahi bana jo Geet k dil par dastak de sake [Keep dreaming Mam as there is no man in this world who can knock the doors of my heart]

Amrita had a smile on her face

PRECAP 1: Dev: "Wo Geet Handa hai Maan tujhe uss ladki se ye kehlwana hoga k wo tujhe pyar karti hai" [She is Geet Handa you have to make her confess that she loves u]

PRECAP 2: "Amrita: " Wo Maan Singh Khurana hai Geet tumhe usse ye kehlwana hoga k wo tujhse nafrat karta hai" [He is MSK u have to make him confess that he hates u]

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
superb dr...
waiting update more😉
hey m first wow...
anyways wanna see how geet n maan make each other dance on their finger tips😆
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
ossumdear
shurywat he pyaar aur nafrat ke beech mey
ossum
loved it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
nice update😊😊😊😊😊
great part so both didn't beileive in love intersting
let's see who will win 😉😉😉😉😉
update next part soon
will be waiting

Edited by 3295 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
nyc update dear...

Wat a challenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
PIYA
FIRST CHAPTER WAS SUPERB
CANT WAIT FOR THEM TO GET TOGETHER AND MEET EACH OTHER
WHAT A BET ON BOTH SIDES
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
very interesting start ab starting hi love hate ke beech hui hai


Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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