Eternal Return: Ch 9-16 summary; 26/July/2015; pg 101 - Page 8

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible

Ur r bak with another dark thriller

i like the variety u give ot ur readers

i got hooked to ur writing with the

witty and hilarious geet and maan

in soup for the...

and then u started dishing out these

psyche thrillers ,which kept me awake

alot of times to think who did it and all

somehow u do get under the skin of the

readers and make them very restless till

they get to the end of the story which again

sometimes u leave it open .no closure

hmm im gonna have sleepless nights

again but it worth it

Thank you...I don't think I have left any finished story open ended. Yes, it will be open to interpretation... am glad you like the OS that I write...

Originally posted by: spvd

is it part 2 or 3?
prologue is part 1?
nice part...
but twas so gross...
who is the murderer?
so cruel...
whats wrong with Maan?
cont soon...

Sorry Deepa...I counted prologue as chapter 1 in my word document where as index says different. I will fix it over the weekend...

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

repressed memory...that is the only thing that came into my mind when i read abt maan's state...

to run away frm something...or when we don't want to remember something dreadful in our past...we repress it...n it seems by seeing the murder...it was triggered...

n the 9 years wiped out...hmmm...there is something imp missing...

punishment..now that was interesting...i want to analyze it...but i am going to resist the temptation...😆

nice part...

we got to know abt the relation between them...

yet i wonder..has he come to her b4...in the form of patient...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

1) Well that's how far the pop culture psychology go. It could have been extreme stress which has made him remember
Or like suspects, is he imagining things??

2) Do tell me please...😊

I wonder if solving the cases, will help Maan to disect his past

Hello. :) So, I'm terribly, in a 'can't wait' phase so you better update soon, miss. :| This is one hell of a gripping series, did i read your previous series of the same, genre, i remember having started it - did i complete it, if not, then here's me resolving to read it in due course of time - you do manage to intrigue your readers, hun! :P

Anyways, I'm loving it by far - though the parts are extremely short. do you know it took me 17 minutes to read them all? - and I freaking can't wait to read more.

nice part...the story is getting interesting...i think maan has gone through an same situation and thats the reason his memory has been wiped off... loved the little comfortness between maan and geet😉

OH GGOD

Nice update...
Maan gained partial memory of his childhood...
The target has always been a child and its parent in each case till now even in case of maan.
Continue soon...

but why the title 'Eternal Return'???

Dark mysterious past...ooh...