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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

part 2
nice part...
Geet Vicky scene was cute...
cont soon...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Great update! Can't wait to read more!

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

awesome part
brilliant loved it
continue soon
me loving this FF now more
continue soon

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

kya entry likhi h MSK ki di wow i can imagine each n every movement of MSK with d lyrics n beats of d song wow di apne to sachchi dhamaal kar diya dat was really something unique...
aur geet ka radha ko portray karna wo aur bhi zyada amazing tha...luved d convo between vicky n geet it was really really cute...
every bit of d update was superb n amazing di...u r mindblowing...
luvya di...

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

wowww loved it

maan's entry n geet's dance was awesome

n vicky personal problem sorter ha ha

waiting for more

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

awesome update

loved the handas' and khuranas' interaction

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

hi dear..extremely sorry 4 late likes n comments ! Read part 2 nw only ! thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! so the Khuranas n handas meet! update soon

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Wow! What a kick ass update!

Clearly Geet is a Next Gen babe who can fuse the modern and the traditional aspects of her persona and relationships in such a seamless manner.

Yaar! Where do you get these ideas and dialogue from -- Personal Problem sorter!; "Vicks ki goli lo…khich khich door kar". Loved them.

I think, just like your previous FF, in this new one, you are going to focus on not just Geet's relationship with Maan but also with all the other key characters that are central in her life. That is one of the things I LOVE about your FF -- your dialogues and the way you paint the different scenes with your words, it is almost like I am part of this lovely family.

Keep writing as time will permit and we will continue to look forward to reading how Geet helps Maan regain his once numbed feelings and frozen emotions.

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

Lovely, Ritzy!
It was a wonderful read! Maan's entry with Geet's performance was beautifully blended, and I loved the way you've portrayed MaanEet, true to their real selves: Maan-angry young man and Geet-the bubbly vivacious girl! :D