SS 'True Betrayal'Thread1 - Page 77

Originally posted by: anshra

omggg

i am dead

their serials

have so much depth

i am a very poor writer

re😆

luved ur comments

now i want to write more of this SS

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi Annie..thanks 4 da pm dear! congrats on the new SS! Awesm start! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Jus read prologue, part 1 n 2 nw! Interesting SS! Well written!

Originally posted by: backy

OMG i am in love with this FF!!!!

incredible!!!

plz cont soon!!!

esha

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

will wait for your msgs...

and yeah you know na... these power cut restrctions...

though i come online via moile..

but its really slow...

especially this new mobile...

i was so used to with galaxy... that was fast...

but m bit careless about things

it fell from my hand a number of time...

sensitive set... i ruined it..

and as a punishment my father brought me this nokia c 5...

dheet set hai... kitni bar gira chuki...

isko kuch nai hota...

and god gprs itna slow hai

takes ages to switch from one page to other...

sometime i even sleep ... waiting for page with heavy graphics to load

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

well true betrayal... kafi sad ound kerta hai...

but i dont think you will give any sad endings..

especially when you gave two winks...

hehehehe

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

i love your dialogues dear... plus they are professional writers...

and you are new to the field...

if you keep on writing...

you can send it to production houses...

but for story to telecast on Pakistan national T.V...

it must be free from kisses and intimacies...

i wonder... how would sacred sin sounds without kissess...

lolz

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Wonderful update !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

I loved the dance , their convo of feel n verbal 😳 and share of pain !!!

now Geet in Maan's office bounded by contract ! 😉

Its lovely

Thanks for pm .