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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

congrats fro the new story
will read later

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#572

for new story

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

m so sorry dear... i couldnt made at yestarday to come...

suddenly guests apppear... and i had to attend them...

and then i was so tiered that i fell asleep...

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

introduction... seems quite painful... story ahead... too much betrayal

except that i loved these lines

When the same fate betrays you again to bring the happiness when you least expected it..

When your own heart betrays falling for someone you shouldn't..

When your own eyes betrays you and search from someone you dont want to..

When you are betrayed although it is nothing but true betrayal

and Sneha...

m you r fan.. Awesome poems yaar...

Amazing...

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

read 2 parts together...as usual again a superb starting...why maan will fell for his own eyes...coz his eyes reflects in geets eyes n geets eyes r so clear like crystal that he can read all her heart...as usual ansras fav rishi...plz show a pic of rishi...handas offers cancelling n malhotras accepting...why geet is nt involved with handas...who is geets past lov...waiting for now sher-shernis more confrontation...

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Part 1

Awesome Updatee

There is too much pain in both of their's past..

are they by anyways have interlinked past

Awesome

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Part 2

Awesome Ainee

Loved it

All the maaneet Conversation were just fabulous... Loved them...

their answers so spontaneous...

looks like watching a haseena moin or umera ahmed serial with mind cracking dialoges...

Maan invested in Geet's company... great

Rishi... was sooo funny... Sooo cute...

your favorite in every ff... but atleast he brings smile...

The poems...

haye Sneha... you are just tooo Awesome...

love your poems

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pop77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

I think Geet will sign the paper..She work for HIM...

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renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Awesome update!!!! loved both d parts plzzz cont soonn w8ing 4 d nxt part

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pearl_warrior

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Posted: 13 years ago

#580

Awesome update..

What an insult on Brij's face..He deserves it...Geet ko insult jo kar raha tha...That too infront of Maan...

Loved the way Maan was there for Geet...Supporting & holding her together..

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