SS 'True Betrayal'Thread1 - Page 35

Originally posted by: meena..

annie

for new ff

update

for you

very much

keep it up

for u

very very much

Originally posted by: piya-

Congrats on ur 1ST SS Annie😃

Concept is different lagta hai dono ko badi gehri chot lagi hai

continue soon

love-Piya

Originally posted by: drashsree100

for "True Betrayal" 👏 🥳 🥳

Its sooo EXCITING 👏 👏 👏

Loooved it ⭐️ 👍🏼 👍🏼

Thanks for pm

Eagerly awaiting the Next 😍

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

congos on new ss di
umm really interesting it is
so geet standing against all odds!!!!
against her own bro
n both maaneet in pain
wanna knw wht happens next

Originally posted by: rushamaan

Awesome start...superb update!

loved Geet Monologue

LOVED THIS PART
Don't look at me like that..!
Why?Because I will fall in love with you..?
No because I will fall in my own
eyes..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting for next

update soon

Originally posted by: surbhijn106

Plzz uPdate soon yar n u were saying about devil in love part 2 when u will be pOsting that story waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Anshra appi... Awsum... Mindblowing...
M juz luvin d concept... Its sooo catchy n gripping... D way u write is juz fantastic... Ur poetries.. D way ur story moves... Its brilliant...

M in complete luv wid d character sketch... MSK n Geet have 1 thing in common pain... Wow... N letz c.. Hw their pain mingles 2 blosson luv n happiness... It wud b gr8 2 c...

I luvd Geet monologue... It ws sooo deep n painful.. Yet it ws sooo beautifully written...

I luvd it hw Geet ws thea 2 meet Maan in d party 2 meet Maan to venture her company to save it from bankruptcy standin against her own brother.. That shws hw strong she is...

N OMG... Brij is sooo mean n harsh... Emotionalessly.. He juz spoke ol dat... So mean... Urghhh...

Bt thx to brij.. Geet rushed from thea n collided wid Maan... 😉
N yippeee... Dis tym Geet recognised d pain in his eyes...

D last dialogue exchange ws fabulous..

Maan: Don't look at me like that..! He almost pleaded this time.

Geet: Because I will fall in love with you..? she smiled assuming him to be another guy who is trying to hit on her. But his answer shocked her to the core.

Maan: No because I will fall in my own eyes..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*clap* *clap* *clap* 4 dat...
I completely adored d last line... Dat ws d WOW moment of d update...

M really really excited 4 d nxt update..
Plzz plzz update soon...

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

wow...wonderful update...
well thought it was maan who had betrayed geet...but i am really conphused as to who betrayed whom...
the dialogues are also cryptic and cant make much sense out of it...cant wait to know...

do update soon annie

muahhh to u

Originally posted by: Trisha4evr

1st of all congo on ur new work...
And for d update i have no word coz m still in a trance...
BEAUTIFUL is just a lame word 2 say of this SS...
Plz jayda chota mat banana coz i become addict 2 ur works...