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interesting ...updt sooon eagerlyyy waiting ...thnx fo pm

Lovely start Annie... please update soon:)

Anshra appi... Awsum... Mindblowing...
M juz luvin d concept... Its sooo catchy n gripping... D way u write is juz fantastic... Ur poetries.. D way ur story moves... Its brilliant...

M in complete luv wid d character sketch... MSK n Geet have 1 thing in common pain... Wow... N letz c.. Hw their pain mingles 2 blosson luv n happiness... It wud b gr8 2 c...

I luvd Geet monologue... It ws sooo deep n painful.. Yet it ws sooo beautifully written...

I luvd it hw Geet ws thea 2 meet Maan in d party 2 meet Maan to venture her company to save it from bankruptcy standin against her own brother.. That shws hw strong she is...

N OMG... Brij is sooo mean n harsh... Emotionalessly.. He juz spoke ol dat... So mean... Urghhh...

Bt thx to brij.. Geet rushed from thea n collided wid Maan... 😉
N yippeee... Dis tym Geet recognised d pain in his eyes...

D last dialogue exchange ws fabulous..

Maan: Don't look at me like that..! He almost pleaded this time.

Geet: Because I will fall in love with you..? she smiled assuming him to be another guy who is trying to hit on her. But his answer shocked her to the core.

Maan: No because I will fall in my own eyes..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*clap* *clap* *clap* 4 dat...
I completely adored d last line... Dat ws d WOW moment of d update...

M really really excited 4 d nxt update..
Plzz plzz update soon...

Wow just awesme update..just lovd maan's reply to geet when she askd him'otherwise she fall in love with hm?'he he

thanx for the PM.. and loving it.. waiting for Maan's explanation..

wow...wonderful update...
well thought it was maan who had betrayed geet...but i am really conphused as to who betrayed whom...
the dialogues are also cryptic and cant make much sense out of it...cant wait to know...

do update soon annie

muahhh to u

awesome part