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Posted: 13 years ago
i m bookmarking this for reading
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Part 26

Love is like a rainbow,

The more you see it,

The more you realize,

What a miracle it really is.

Pinky 'we can't st…' She got horrified by looking at bleeding Neev at the back of Geet. Geet ' What is it Pinky?' Pinky was unable to say anything due to she was about to take her hand but before that Neev turned Geet by holding her from arms and said ' Hi sweetheart I am back and Awww look you found Pinky that's not fair. I put that as a present for you but on the condition that if you will let me enjoy you.' Geet 'You are sick Neev. Let me go.' Neev gritted his teeth 'No! today I will do it today no matter what. Now let's go' Geet move away from him but he just grabbed her hand and started to drag her from there.

They were not so far when Neev felt an extreme pain on his head due to the and was nearly unconscious. Pinky was feeling really dizzy due to weakness but she somehow got hold of a stone and she with her full force threw the stone at Neev.

Pinky ' Run Geet don't worry about me I'll be fine. You just run from there.' Geet was not sure she was coming towards Pinky but Pinky pleaded her Pinky 'Please Geet. Don't worry about me. Just go please' Geet without saying anything just ran from there. She ran into the woods as far as she could

Maan was just lost in the middle of the woods he checked the cottage but he didn't find anyone. He shouted Geet's Name but there was no reply. He was in going to shout again when he heard some breathing sound. He followed the breathing sound and saw Geet standing there.

Geet was breathless due to running. She could feel someone's presence there so she hid herself behind a tree and was breathing heavily. Maan came from behind and put his hand on her mouth to prevent her from shouting. She thought it was Neev but there was warmness in the touch. She slowly turned to face him and Maan put his finger on his lips and said ' Shhh! It's ok it's just me.' Geet hugged him tightly Geet ' Maan! Thank God you are here.Neev …' Maan 'I know Geet. It's ok Geet.' He also hugged her back. He was relieved that his Geet was ok. Geet ' We have to find pinky' Maan ' Yah lets go.'

Before Neev could wake up Pinky somehow managed to hide herself behind a tree.N Neev woke up and started to search for Pinky. He was boiling with extreme anger.'I have to finish this Pinky first. Where is she?' thought Neev.

Maan and Geet were finding Pinky Geet was about to shout Pinky's name but Maan put his hand over her mouth and said ' Shhh someone is coming.' The both hide them self's behind one of the tree. Neev was finding Pinky when he heard some sounds of footsteps he tried to follow the sound but it was lost after few minutes.

'There was someone I am sure. Geet my sweetheart is that you?' fear ran through her body. Maan still had his hand on her mouth. Maan was raged in anger but he knew that it was not a good idea to take any action right now. He just wanted Geet to be in safest place.

' Come out come out where ever you are. Oh come on Geet there is nothing to be afraid of. Ok then I go easy on you.' That was a limit for Maan and he told Geet to stay behind the tree no matter what Geet tried to argue but he stopped her. Maan came out of the tree. Neev 's expression were changed. He was shocked. 'How did you get here?' asked neev Maan punched him hard across his face. 'What were you saying?' Neev ' Geet is my fiance so you better stay out of this.' With that he got a kick right across his stomach. Maan was furious. Neev was nearly faint so Maan got up and was about to go when Neev took the wood in his hand and he knocked the wood on Maan's stomach. Maan put his hand around his stomach and with other hand he grabbed hold of the wood that Neev was holding. He turned Neev's hand at the back and released the wood from his hand. Maan then pushed Neev on the ground and started to beat him again he was nearly dead. Geet was scared that Neev might have killed Maan too so she didn't move from the tree.

Precap:

Maan in hospital……..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
from precap looks like maan is going to get hurt
update soon
will be waiting to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
he found her...phew...

ye neev ...i hope his chapter ends here...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part dear 👏
I know it ll b maan n I guessed it correctly 😃
glad pinky n geet were safe.. Maan in hospitsal 😳
Plz finish this boody neev n brijs chapter in next update
N give us some maaneet moments 😉
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope Pinky is safe.. loved the update.. hope Maan is not too seriously injured..
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Originally posted by: 3295

awesome update
loved it
from precap looks like maan is going to get hurt
update soon
will be waiting to read the next part


Thanks So much!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
U r going absolutely fantastic auj...

loved ur writing style and ur track...

U ROCK !!!!! 😛

thnxx for d pm 😊

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MishTy


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