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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Tu Jaane Na"



Part 1

The English translations of the update are in the brackets...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only''

Handa Niwas

It was yet another morning...Mohinder Handa's health was deteriorating day by day''It was now a month that he had not got up from his bed'.Pammi was as usual busy with her kitty parties'if felt as if her husband's health was of no concern to her'.the one who cares was her younger daughter Meera

Mohinder: puttar itne din ho gaye meri geet se baat nai hui'..jab bhi uska koi phone aata hai teri ma muje bina bataiye baat karke phone band kar deti hai [Its so long I had not talked to geet,,,whenever her call comes ur mother talks and just disconnects it]

Meera: bauji main samaj sakti hu par aapko pata hai na ki geet didi ko aapki aisi tabiyat ke bare mein nahin pata vo to yahi jaanti hai ki aap apne kaam main kafi zyada busy ho [I know dad but u know na that Geet di is unaware of ur health'.She knows that you are busy with your work]

Mohinder: par kab tak aise chalega [But for how long will this continue??]

Meera: main to khud chahti hu ki geet di ko sab pata chal jaye pata nahin ma ne kyu mana kar rakha hai [I too want that Geet di should know everything but don't know why mom has told her not to tell]

Mohinder: puttar mera ek kaam kar de'[will u do me a favour??]

Meera: Boliye na[ya sure]

Mohinder: Geet ki awaz sune bhi itne din ho gaye main kuch nahin bolunga tu use baat kar na bas ek baar main uski awaz sunna chahta hu [Its so long I haven't heard her voice to u please give her a call..I promise I wont talk but will listen only to her voice]

Meera: bauji par di to abhi apni classes bein busy hogi [but dad she might be busy with her classes at this time]

Mohinder: pata nahi babaji kya chahte hai'..kya pata kab ye pran iss sharir se nikal jaye'.muje meri geet se or kitna dur rehna padega [I really have no idea what God wants'.no one knows when will I leave away this body'wil I get a chance to talk to geet??]

Meera keeps silent as her father was in tears'..Well his inner pains were making him more and weaker day by day''But he had no answer to all this''

Khurana Mansion

Daadi: ye maan kaha chale gaye hai kab se hum unka intezaar kar rahe hai or unka hai ki kuch pata hi nahin [Where the hell is maan'.I have been waiting him since long but no idea where is he?]

Dev: daadi bro to office ke liye nikal bhi gaye hai [Grand mom Maan Bro has already left for the office]

Daadi: na jaane ye kab tak chalega'.maan kya se kya bante ja rahe hai [don't know till when will this continue'.Maan has changed so much]

Daadi: abhi unki umr hi kya hai'..hamara baccha jo hamesha hi hasta rehta tha'dusro ki pareshaniyan dur karta rehta tha aaj khud ek pathar dil insaan ban gaya hai [Is this the age to behave like all this?? A person who used to be so happy,,used to solve other problems has himself become stone hearted]

Dev: daadi aap please pareshan mat hoiye na sab thi ho jaega [grandmom u please donot stress urself'everything will be okay um sure]

Daadi: kya thik hoga beta'..hume to yakken hota jar aha hai maan hamse kahin hamesha ke liye door na ho jayein [what will be oka Dev'? I have a strong feeling that I will lose Maan forever.]

Handa Mansion

Pammi: meera tumhare papa ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab? [how is ur father's health Meera??]

Meera: mom apko apni faltu ki parties se fursat mil gayi bauji ka haal puchne ke liye [Have u got time to enquire about Dad's health]

Pammi: meera tameez se baat karo?? [meera just mind ur language u are talking to ur mom]

Meera: waise main apko bata du ki maine geet di ko call kar dia hai or vo jaldi hi wapis delhi aa rahi hai [just wanted to tell u I have called geet di and she is coming very soon to Delhi]

Pammi: kya'? Tumse aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha meera?? [What'who told u to do that??]

Meera: mom aap jo marzi kahein par main bauji ki aisi haalat nahin dekh sakti [mom u say whatever u want par I can see my father like that]

Meera leaves from there''..

Pammi(self thought) jis geet ko maine hamesha iss ghar se dur rakha vo ab phir iss ghar mein wapis'.? Main aisa kabhi nahin hone dungi [I have always tried and kept Geet away from this home'.I cant see her here once again'I will not let that happen]

Precap:

1. Maan Singh Khurana's reason of hatred😕😕

2. Doctor: aap geet ko jaldi yaha bula lijiye Unki haalat or bhi zyada kharab ho gayi hai vo sirf geet se milna chahte hai😭😭


Well how was the update friends???.please press like button and do comment it means a lot to me

I will be waiting'.😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
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Wow di intersting story line hai yaar...Mene bolla tha na unique..CS bahot hi badia hai...wase i want meera be positve and goood sis...vo apni maa ki baat bilkul na sune...chudel
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Awesome update
loved it
thnx for pm
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Awesome start dear plz plz continue soon silky...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Poor mr handa
Why is pammi trying 2 keep geet away
Can't wait 4 more
Can't wait 4 maaneet entry
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46


wonderful and emotional part...

Pammi is so selfish...don't care about her husband's health...
how can we expect her to love Geet...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
hi miniee
char sketch acha hi
pics osum hi
lekin rati DD ki sis cant digest i mean meri geet sabse choti its k for that
next title badiya hi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
awesome dear loved it
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
loved the update... please update soon:)

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