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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

congrats on ur new ff dear...its such a intersting...continue soon...

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Shilalipi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

part 1

Geet ..main bar bar keh rehi hoon..agar is ghar se bahar tera saya vi dikha..to main tujhe aj maar dalungi..said Rano viciously shaking her head holding her hair

ah chachi..main sach me bahar nahi aungi..kasam se..main avi jati hu.

ruk..jane se pehle khana paka ke jana,ghar chamak na chahiye,aur ha pure ghar me naye parde chader tang den..ye sab do ghante me ho jana chahiye..

ji chachi

aur ha..koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye aj sameera ko ladke wale dekhne aa rahe hai..agar unhone aj sameera ko reject kar diya..to dekna tera kya haal karti hu..

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geet tu kya kar rahi hai..saradin aram karti rehti hai..aur koi kam k liye bulao to maharani ko bukhar ata hai..kab se bol rahi hu mere nail polish laga de..main avi bohut busy hu..chided samera while reading a fashion magazine.

aa rahi hu di..bas ek minute..replied geet while put the chicken biriyani on dum..stirred the khir & set the table..

dekh aj ladke wale dekhne ane wale hai..aur avhi tak tune mujhe tayar nahi kiya..tu kya chahti hai ki wo mujhe reject kar de..

nahi di aisi baat nahi hai..she said while doing her hair

ha ha..sab janti hu main..jalti hai tu mujhse..tu nahi chati ki main itne amir khhandan ka hissa banu..akhir aisi khwahish ho vhi kyu na..main Mrs. DEV SING KHURANA jo banugi

di aisi bat mat karo..main sach me chahti hu..ki agar wo log acche insan hai to ap uss ghar ki bahu jarur bane.. told geet while she drapped her in sarrie

uff! i hate all these indian wears..specially this sarrie..URGH!

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ji ye mera beta dev hai..or ye uskabada bhai Rahul..waise rahul hai to mera bcchon ka daima ka beta..bt hum isse family mNTE HAIhumne to pehle hi kaha tha..ki hume bahu nahi..beti chahiye..jo pure parivaar ko pyaar de ..sabka khayal rakhe hume to sameera beti va gayi..aur hamare dil aur jit liya hai apke hato ke bane khane ne..wo kehte hai na..dil ka rasta pet se hoke jata hai..laughed pratham..

ji kuch lijiye na..meri beti sameera ne itne pyaar se sab banaya hai..

all this while mohinder kept quite..he didn't know what to say about the pool of lies these mother & daughter telling..he wished to be now with his sweet niece geet.rather than his daughter sameera..bt he couldn't do anything..it's about his daughter's rishta after all..dev beta.. said he..why don't u go with sameera & hv a little chit-chat

so sameera..u r looking beautiful in this saari..do u always were indian wear..i mean do u like indian wear..

i love it..specially saari..🤢

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wow!!u have done all these fine work in bedsheets & other things..

please don't embaress me by so much praising..it's onnly a little..🤢

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bhai sab ..bhabi..ab to rishta pakka ho gaya..ab sagai aur shadi ke trik vhi pakke ho gaye..to tay raha..hamarre ghar ke riwaz ke anusar ap log sameera ko ek hafte bad hamare saath mumbai vej rahi hai..baki ghar walo se vhi to milana hai.. aur uske bad ap log aa jana 15 din bad sagai pe..waise hume bahut khushi hoti agar ap vi sameera ke saath hamare ghar ate to..per hum samajh sakte hai..bhai sahab ka business hai..said pratham..being a little gloomy...

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wow mom!mumbai khurana palace me!!!par mom no ways i am going to learn all those rubbish like khana pakana & all..

don't worry sweat heart..i will send geet with u..😡

bt mom aise kaise.bina koi rishte ke us gar me..agar wo puche to me ye to nahi keh sakti ki main apne kam ussekarwane ke liye use apne saath..

are tu puri baat to sun...mere pass aisa ek ui hai jisse ye gwwt namki bhoot hamare sar se utar jayegi..aur uss ghar me tujhe muft ki nukrani vhi mil jayegi...aur koi ungli vi nahi utheygi..

.ye kaise ho sakta hai..

tu sun..dev ka ek bada bhai hai na ..uske saath...😕

rahul ke saath geet ki shadi!! nahi..ma ap ye kya keh rehi hai..ap janti hai main to soch rahi thi ki Dev ki jaga rahul ko shadi kar lu..lekin khurana to dev hai na..khurana property akhir use hi milegi😲😡

are pagli..main thodi na uss geet ke liye itna accha ladka dungi...😡main to dev ki apne bhai ki baat kar rahi thi..wo jo paralyzed hai..kya naam hai uska?????haan...MAAN...😲

precap-may be they will meet??!!😲

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nice part dear 😳
Waiting for Maaneet first meeting 😳
Thanks 4 d pm

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome update.

hate sammerra n her mom..

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sehrish79

@sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PRATHYUSHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome update dear👏👏
i hate this sameera nd rano😡
do continue soon

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

hey dear lovely story, pls add me in your pm list 😊

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allibr

@allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

till part 1
interesting concept and part...
Sameera and her mom are really good for nothing...
poor Geet...
so Sameera's mom is planning to marry Geet off to Maan...
hope the family gets to know about Sameera...
cont soon and pm me...

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Shilalipi

@Shilalipi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

part 2

sameera!!!akhir app aa gayi beti...ye kaun hai apke sath.???.asked Pratham...

ye..ye wo... wo..maine suna tha ki maan veerji aur aunty ko nurse ki jarurat hai..to meri jan pehchan ki ek nurse le aayi hu..ye bahut acchi nurse hai.😡.said sameera while sitting on the sofa of KM hallroom

geet got tears in her eyes..she knew that her Chachi & sam hated her..bt did they hated her so much that they refused to accept any relation with her???

beti app ka naam kya hai??😊

ji Geet..replied geet meekly while bending to take blessings from him

are are..ap ye kya kar rahi hai..pratham hold her in middle & said..hamare yaha betiyaan pair nahi chuti..

uncle wo pata hai..main geet se hamare coolege ke pass ek chota sa moholla types hai..waha pe mili..jab main waha welfare association ki taraf se gayi thi..mujhe iski halat dekhi nahi gayi..aur maine use hospital me nurse ki naukri laga di..waise wo man to nahi rahe the..lekin thank god jo mere chachu doctor the..(that's the 1st truth she said)uski waja se usko naukri mil gayi..😡

geet beta ..apke parents kaha hai..??

ji wo ..wo..ek accident me unka dehant ho gaya..geet said while controling her sobbing & tear..which was due to all those humiliating words by sameera..

oh! i am so sorry beta..

koi bat nahi uncle..

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beta ye ha rahul ki ma..aur mere savi bacchon ki daima.. meena

namaste betaji..

namaste aunty

ye hai tumhare sasuma betaji Namrata..agar aj wo thik hoti to apko gale se lagati..said pratham..in a gloomy voice..oe chaddo..ab to ap aur geetbeti aa gayi ho na..ab koi chinta nahi..

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aur ye hai maan..

hello..

hi! said sameera a little too excietedly..thinking (wow he so handsome..too bad he is paralyzed..nahi to iss se hi shadi karti main..us dev ko kaun dekhta hai..hmpp!! aur meri kimat dekho.. jinko mera husband hona chahiye tha wo dono mere veerji baan gaye ...aur phas gayi us boring dev ke sath)

well their talk didn't progress much..it was little weird😆.. with sameera all extra sweet & maan not even giving vab to her 😆while geet was still in namrata's room ..as it was time for her dinner & 1st of all she was her parent's child indeed ...serving sick people first..

dad i am going to my room..dev & rahul will be coming from office anytime now...& i think i am done..

but beta u haven't yet met..

goodnight dad..

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oho babaji..!!kitna late ho gaya hai par pata hai na babaji apko..mai to itne der namrata auntyji ke saath bat kar rahi thi na...aur phir kitni jaldi kha vi liya..bt uncle ji kya keh rehe the???mujhe kisi se milna baki hai??!! par maine to sab se mil liya hai..haina babaji?/ nakul bhaiya..sarala masi se vi mil liya dinner ke time..waise dinner se yaad aya..dev bahut acche hai..sameera di ko bahut khush rakhenge..she was mumbling to herself..jumping from one topic to another..while walking in the desertred semi dark corridoor to her room...then suddenly..she fail on some thing..well ...to be exact...someone...who was on chair??!!!

she landed directly in his lap...she was sure that the person was he..as she felt rough stuble..while falling..

dekh ke nhi chal sakti????he barked..

main kya karu??main kaise janu ki iss waqt koi chad ke ghar me jane ke raste me baitha rahega???

tumhari himmat kaisi hu mujhse...his words died on his throat when the moonlight came from behind the cloud(open corridor) & he felt lost in her glowing face..big black innocent eyes..

when maan was stopped shouting at her she tried to argue back..

agar appne mujhe ate hue dekha to side me vhi to...

geet felt her voice chock when her eyes fell on his eyes...she saw something in his eyes..she didn't knew what was it..bt she felt warm...after a long time of darkness & cold...

precap-maan meting his new nurse😲😲

sameera's harasses geet😡

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago