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Posted: 13 years ago
great update di
Loved
wish Yash heard Maan and dev convo tu kitna maza ata
phew finally maan knows that she was talking about him as her boss
uff Maan kabhi tu puri baat jan liya karo deakho kitna kuch miss kar diya tumne
with ur knowing Yash and Geet made so many plan For IT and not for once u bother to go office agar chale jate tu pahle pata chal jata na ki that day Geet had blush on her cheeks for u only duffo
cont soon

thank u so much for posting before 9 DI
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
The way you described his emotions, specially in the last paragraph, after he comes to know that her blush was for him, that paragraph.. is just soo well written, those emotions are so vividly explained, that I just cant get enough of it.

That paragraph is the perfect precursor to a 'Behne De' sequence..something as strong yet fragile , ... The way behne de was shot was beautiful , and the most compelling aspect of the song was when Geet leaves and Maan realizes something, in wonder and alarm , and in wanting, he spreads his arms in the rain , and looks up.. That scene was superb, beyond words.

What your Maan feels in the last paragraph, gave me goosebumps.. I cannot wait for the next part muskaan .. seriously cannot wait.

How sweet is Yash.. the way he brings Geet into the conversation out of nowhere.. he just cant help but think of her as his daughter already. and he so quickly wants everyone to accept it too. 😆It's so endearing.

(PS: Dev's quip about signing papers only after reading them was really sharp.. felt hurt as Maan again reminded himself of her 'loose' character💔, .. hmm and I am not looking forward too eagerly to Geet and Prachi's pyjama party either. I cant stand that girl.)
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved the update. Awesome precap...behene de, so looking forward to it.

So now he is the boss of IT dept aur sab kuch Yash sir se chupana hai. You know Muskan, I don't think tumse koi naughty maine dekha hai; I thought I was but you take the cake. Looking forward to too much masti now. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE no separation now, let us enjoy Puchki, mishti for now.THANK U THANK U THANK U. Without you, this would have been the worst day. Love always.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMGGG I love the way he's so happy that her blush was for him. Cutest thing ever. <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh nw he understand tht tht blush ws for him... good good...
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Posted: 13 years ago

He thought...

wo nahi maanegi...
hmm... for what Maan Babu...
then all the bitter memories... and number of guys associated with her hit his mind... shakki Puchki...
Geet still thinks him as Best friend's BF...
Oh pagal lerki... now he is your hubby.. ab apni friend ko uss k ass pass b mat aney dena... ok!
and believe me... Maan gonna love this gesture of yours...
hey muski yaar prachi's episode is over na yaar...
ye dobara se start mat ker...
prachi called her for a party... hmm... now ab ye kya kerne wali hai...
Pyjama wala Dulha...ROFL...
hehehe...
Maan finally knew that he is her boss... and she blushed coz of him gave her tremendous happiness
that now he wanna flow(behne de😉)
finally... ek misunderstanding solve hui...

i hope prachi party ma bata de that they are just friends not BF and GF things...
kuch to acha kero prachi... itna bhi nai ker sakti to doob maro...
m super excited for next part...
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome, so finally maan babu ko 2 doubts tho clear hogaye ek tha dev, aur ek tha boss, waiting for the rest also to be cleared soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...awesome update bt sad dat dey didnt meet...bt in next update they will...hope he doesnt spoil der relation...pls dont send geet to prachi's home...it does not sound good...where is armaan?????????

m loving d story more and more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the waty the emotions are flowing,now i want a passionate geet,and wow maan knows he is her boss who made her blush.Will he start going to the office now,just to be with his puchki.
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Posted: 13 years ago
will you give more update today dear...
bolo bolo
wait keroo k soo jaon...?
although yahan pe subha ho gae ha...
log subha uth ker namaz perhte hain...
i am the one who prays... and then sleep...
tmhaare FF ne dekho mujhe kya ker diya...

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