Mere Papa Maan #5 /Epilogue Season One/ Pg26/MG/SS - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I dropped my idea to finish it as some friends..who really lik my work...I gonna update with heavy heart when don hav courage
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

I dropped my idea to finish it as some friends..who really lik my work...I gonna update with heavy heart when don hav courage

hey dear don't be sad i really like u r this ff and had read match makers prologue and really like it a lot but lil busy will read it as soon as i get some time plus have not tried u r other ff till now hell busy with exams and all will read and comment on it after i get lil time hope u understand 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eagerly Waiting for update...😍😍😍
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Edited by maanmania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

I dropped my idea to finish it as some friends..who really lik my work...I gonna update with heavy heart when don hav courage

U DRAMA QUEEN ..CHALO SAB CHORO OR UPDATE DO ...
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Chapter 27


After Two hours Mannat regained her consciousness.Found Maan Geet Daddi Maa holding Arya in her lap.She looked at Geet wth half closed eyes.For her Geet was one who lov her more than any one…Even more than Geet she had desire for Maan more.Her sub-conscious mind never understood this.Might b she was so small to under stand emotions.

Mannat : Maa….( she said in feeble voice)

Geet:Ha beta..Maa apke pass hai kaise ho aap ( she set next to her n kissed Mannat on forehead)

Mannat: Maa….hum gir gaye….humko pain ho rahha hai….( she was sobbing )

Geet:Beta..Mama ko bhi aapne darra diya per dekho abhi doctor uncle ne apko medicine di hai…aap jaldi theek ho jayogay..aur main hu naa apke paas ( she held Mannat's face in her hands)

She felt hardness of plaster on her leg.

Mannat: Maa …Mannat ki leg per ye kya hai?

Daddi Maa smiled: Mannat ki leg per chott lag gayi hai…wo jaldi theek ho jaaye isliye doctor ne plaster kar di leg…jaldi he aap acchi ho jaayegi….

Mannat: Sacchi Daddi Maa...(she cheered up)

Daddi Maa: Sachi..aap jayada maty boliye..apke forhead per chot hai..pain hogga…


Maan was standing lil bit away from her bed.But she was looking at him while talking wth Daddi Maa n Geet.

Mannat: Maa...'Mere Papa' humse gussa hai…? Pehle Mannat kho gayi …aur fir hum gir gaye…Hum sorry hai….( she made sad face looking at Maan)

Both Daddi n Geet looked at Maan…Maan was standing far away folding his arms came forward.He set on one side of her bed.

Maan: Nahi Mannat…u r not sorry..Papa is sorry…main aab aap per kabhi gussa nahi karuga….Apke Papa aapse bahut pyar karte hai…

Mannat: No ?


All looked at Mannat…why she said no.

Daddi Maa: No.!!!why u said this beta..Apke Papa sachi main aapse lov karte hai ( she was disturbed )

Geet: Ha beta…

Mannat: Shahid ne kaha tha 'mere papa mujhe bahut pyar karte hai' (she was tlking about Shahid's father)….Shahid k pass 'Mere Papa' hai…Aur Mannat ko Maan Papa tab hi lov karte hai agar wo Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan' hai…

Every body smiled at her innocence.Maan kissed her on cheek.

Maan: Ji beta Hum apke Papa…no no…Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan' hai…

Mannat: Sachi…?

Geet: Sachi…...apko to Maan Papa mil gaye…Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan'…to beta Arya apka bhai hai…to…Arya bhi to yahi kahega Maan Papa ko 'Mere Papa Maan'…Per apke Maa Papa to ek hai…Fir hue na hum...app donno k Maa Papa'..Jab koi aap se kahega..aap donno k Maa Papa kon hai..aap aise to nahi kahogay 'Yeh Mere Papa Maan' aur 'Meri Mamma Geet 'hai…

Mannat: Arya Mannat k bhayia hai…hum donno k 'Mere Papa Maan' aur 'Meri Mamma Geet hi'…( Tapping Maan's hand wth her fingers she said without lookin at any one')…

Daddi Maa: Dheere dheere Mannat samjh jaayegi k Arya aur Mannat k Maa Papa 'Mere Papa Maan' ur 'Meri Mama Geet ' 'Hamare Maa aur Papa' hai..Per sabse baddi Baat usko 'Meri Mamma Geet' to kab se mil gayi thi..Per Mannat k liye Maan ko 'Mere Papa Maan' kahne ka haq jo milla …wo kissi Pari katha se kamm nahi hai…Uske liye Papa kissi Pari katha k RajKumar se kam nahi…


Daddi Maa said slowly to Geet...

Geet : Aur Main ?

Daddi Maa: Aap to hamari Pari hai…hamari Pari katha ki Pari..jo patta nahi kaha se aa gayi..aur hamare Dushat Danav ko is Raj Kumar main badal diya..

Arya started to cry…Geet took him from Daddi Maa

Geet:Daddi Maa…Is Dushat Danav ko hum shayad na badal paaye..(she laughed aloud)

After one week

Mannat came back home. But she had plaster on her leg.So she always cry to remove plaster..Daddi Maa's stories ..Her favorite food prepared by Geet…outdoor tour to park with Maan…..all tried to divert her mind from plaster.

Maan got real reason behind all this plan which his family used.n Daddi told him each n every thing...past he had forgotten n things which they did behind his back..Maan was shocked to know..past But he accepted every thing with ease n reason why Geet had to adopt this way.


Morning /MSK bedroom.

Maan getting ready for office. But he didn't noticed Mannat was awake.She was looking wth thief eye on him…Maan went out for breakfast.Mannat's devil mind ( to get that what she wants at any cost) as her father had made a plan..she had her eye on a lil pair of scissors….Maan placed on side table after arranging some files.. he used to cut some papers…

Mannat got up on her elbows ..wth elbows she slide her body back ward side table was now within her reach.She wth full force got it what she wanted.Papa dear's scissors..

She giggled…on her great achievement.But when she looked at sleeping Arya.She put her hand on her mouth.

Mannat: Mannat ko hasna nahi chahea…Arya uth jaaye-gay..Maa aa jayegi aur hamara plan fis…(she murmured) .

She came in rite sitting positin.Bent her one leg n bent her upper body toward her plaster….So this was what she wanted to do..she started to cut her plaster wht scissors.

But in this attempt…scissors cut her finger.She started to cry aloud.n her voice disturbed Arya n he also started to cry..lik both brother n sister were in competition.

Geet: yeh to Mannat aur Arya k ronne ki awaaz hai (she ran from breakfast table)

Maan n Daddi also ran behind .

When Geet opened door..Arya was crying as usual…Mannat's as usual same routine to cry in the morning…But she was holding her finger..blood on it.

Mannat looked at Geet


Mannat: Maa….? ( she showed her finger )

Geet: what's this Mannat….yeh chot kaise laggi …(she held her hand)

Maan n Daddi Maa also folled her…Geet kaise hua baad main pushe hai..tum Arya ko le lo... main bandage karta hu….

Daddi Maa:look at this scissors.

Geet: This is Maan's .how it comes here..?

Maan: Geet this was on table how it comes here…?( he shouted)

Geet: Maan why r u shouting …?

Maan: Maine nahi rakhi …yahan ?

Geet: It means u r blaming me….?

Maan: No Geet..main to yeh keh rahha tha..

Geet: No need to say any thing n don't creat drama in front of Manna.

Maanat: Aap kya fight kar rahhe ho…scissors to humne khud le thi plaster utaarne k liye…per humari figher cut gayi..(she showed her lil bit cut plaster n wounded finger )

Daddi Maa: he bhagwaan yeh ladki…bilkul Maan ki copy hai akal main bhi aur shakkal main bhi…(n she left)

Arya again went in deep sleep.But a cut became a issue in between Maan N Geet.

Is this a small issue or a starting of a big problem


hop if I decided to mov this once again ...u ll help me ..it depends how my dearies react.Plz comment n hit lik...those don wanna go wth this plz never visit again.



Sorry If I bored u..n if I used harse language ...this is for those who really lov my work n wanna get great updates


Lov


Jass 😲



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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey jass next time we want long update . thank god mannet is safe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: myramabin

hey jass next time we want long update . thank god mannet is safe



k i ll try as ur wish...😃 thax dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy New Year...

part 27
lovely part...
now Mannat will be the peace maker between Maan and Geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb but jass why to create probl btw maaneet i don't like this idea of creating probl btw maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi04

superb but jass why to create probl btw maaneet i don't like this idea of creating probl btw maaneet



actually i had decided to finish..so had no track .but to create next one i hav to adopt it...i ll not stretch it..let me giv some time n i ll update it regularly...promise if u dear ones r wth me

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