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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Finally Geet said what she wanted to say to him. KILL MAAN? Yash was there to KILL MAAN???????

Gosh this is getting scarier and scarier. Plz update ssooon and fast. I have a requst coul you contioue with Maans pov a bit longer?

Amina

Edited by Kriyanshlover - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

part 17
OMG that was awesome...
Geet has let out everything...
so Yash is the guardian for Geet...
poor Maan...
stuck between duty and love...
well Rano didnt seem to have thought about love before...
cont soon dear...

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

How I love this update...What Geet said about her views on Bella and Edward (well, really her and Maan) is what I was thinking about when in previous update Maan was adamant that he is doing this for her own good. I can understand Geet's frustration b/c from her perspective who is he to decide what's good for her just b/c he is her guardian.

Another shocker was Yash was there to keep an eye on Maan, now isn't that interesting.
I'm enjoying your story telling...waiting for more Maan's POV.

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Awesome update!!

So Yash is actually an assasinator...And he is sent to kill Maan..😲

That lady Rano trains young kids to be assasinators...understood..But,why??

What is Geet's connection in all this..??

The answer that Geet gave to the twilight question did imply to Maan..Especially the last part...

By doing that I guess Geet has hit the final nail on Maan's coffin, though unknowingly..

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover
Finally Geet said what she wanted to say to him. KILL MAAN? Yash was there to KILL MAAN???????

Gosh this is getting scarier and scarier. Plz update ssooon and fast. I have a requst coul you contioue with Maans pov a bit longer?

Amina

No, not really. He's there inspect Maan, if he's actually doing his job. Yeah I think will. I thought I would get Maan's POV done with one chapter, but unfortunately not...well, for u its fortunate. 😆

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

great part lena :) it was very sad to see poor geet's heart being shred to pieces but i am sure maan must have felt 1000 times worse for saying those words to her in the first place. but what can he do? lol anyways continue soon hun :)

sangya :)

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

aaah u updated!

it was maan's perspective!

u unmasked yash!

geet had an outburst!...what's not to luv.

oh how i wish u keep on writing forever.

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
aaah u updated!
it was maan's perspective!
u unmasked yash!
geet had an outburst!...what's not to luv.

oh how i wish u keep on writing forever.

funny u say that. right now, i kind of wished i could stop writing forever.