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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
it sounds superbbb
bt isnt maan age too much 30??????
continue sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
interesting!!
please do start soon...
can u please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Nice strt
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
let maan should be 25years to match geet's age.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy
Me Waiting Eagerly For The First Part😆

And Age Doesn't Bother Me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweee
me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for mistakes, i didn't get time to check.

Part 1

"You can't simply leave from here. Do your work, you stupid assassinator. Kill me now." Geet yelled at the man wearing pink shirt.

"Rs 200 is less, so I won't do it" YASH yelled back

"What? I already gave you Rs 4,00,800. Can't you give me Rs 200 discount?" Geet cried

"No, my rate is fixed one. No discount in this deal. Got it?" YASH said with an evil smirk

"What the hell? There is discount for each and everything we buy at New Year season. Buy any products, we'll get atleast 5% discount. Can't you give me atleast Rs 200 discount?" Geet yelled again

"I don't understand today's generation, for a small problem you think of ending your life. You kids are sensitive." YASH said

"oyye hello Uncle, I didn't pay you Rs 4,00,800 for listening to your stupid advice. For the last time I'm asking you to kill me or else..." Geet gave him a murderous look

"My lawyer will meet you. " Geet yelled

"For what?" YASH asked

"Breach of contract" Geet said

"Really? Well I'm ready to face our so-called lawyer." YASH said

"err I hate you. I hate you hate you hate you" Geet yelled at top of her voice

" I never asked you to love me Chpkali" YASH said

"Don't call me that, you bander" Geet said with anger

"Don't call me bander then" YASH said back

"Deal." Geet said

"OK Deal." YASH said

"Now fast kill me. Please." Geet pleaded

"No." YASH said

"But you said deal?" Geet argued

"I meant that I won't call you Chipkali." YASH said

"A real man should keep his word" Geet said

"I will but before that give me Rs 200." YASH said

" You pighead, I don't have a single penny even to go back home. " Geet cried

"I will lend you money to go home" YASH said with irritation

"Give me discount of Rs 200 instead." Geet said

"I'm going to become insane. I'm going home" Yash said

"Stop right there." Geet said

But Yash started to run with the money. Geet was following him but Yash was faster. Yash ran across the street and disappeared into darkness but before she cross the road, she was hit by a car. She fainted on road. The car opened and a man wearing black jacket came out and picked her up in his arms and put her inside the car and drove off.

Meanwhile, Yash was far away from the place he was with Geet. Suddenly 2 guys came there and tapped his shoulder.

Yash : Done.

Pandey : Did you really kill her?

Yash : No but I got the money but I didn't kill her.

Manish: But why? She gave us money to kill her right?

Yash : Are you mad? Remember we are fake assassinators not real ones. We dupe people but don't kill.

Pandey : Right but what will happen to her?

Yash : Nothing will happen, I got her number and called her home informing them that she is here. Her family will come here and take her back.

Meanwhile, the man took Geet to an old Mansion which was situated in middle of woods. He laid her on bed and sat on sofa near it. An old lady came and stood beside him.

Man : wash her and put nightclothes on her.

Lady : Yes Ranvir saab.

Ranvir walked out of the room with an evil smile. Yash called Romeo to inform about Geet but instead of Romeo, Ranvir received the information. He asked Yash to take all money from her and leave her at that place all alone. He even brought chloroform to prevent her from making fuss but to his luck, she fainted in front of his car without any injury. He took her to his old Mansion where no one can find her. The old lady bathed an unconscious Geet with the help of 3 other maids. They bathed her in rose petal water and washed her hair with chocolate scent shampoo. Geet was still unconscious when they made her wear nightsuite.


(Geet's Night suite)

Ranbir was waiting for this night to make Geet his. He waited all these years for this night. After 2 hours, the old lady came to him and said that everything is ready. He was really happy and paid the maid extra money. Ranvir was about to enter the room but suddenly he got a call from his father asking him to meet him now. Ranvir had no other way than to leave, he asked the maid to keep food in fridge and keep notes stick on mirror, so that Geet will know where the food is and clothes are. He asked everyone to leave the Mansion except security guards near gate. He left the place reluctantly kissing Geet on forehead and promising to be back soon.

Around 1PM, a man wearing black mask came inside the room with revolver in his hand. His eyes were sharp and face was cold. He was about to shoot but he heard a sweet voice which made him stop and turn on the light. When he saw Geet , his heart missed a beat. An angel wearing a s*** nightsuite was sleeping like a baby. He was lost in her. He didn't notice her opening eyes. Suddenly he was pushed down by her and she sat on his stomach keeping her legs on his either sides.

"If you don't give me Rs 200 discount, then you are dead Mr Assassinator." Roared Geet

Pre-cap : MSK, the hot Assassinator

special Thanks to abinash079 and piya- .

Edited by Ash534 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update loved it
ranbir is so cheap taking advantage in unconcious condition
good to see the entry of maan
i hope here maan is not like a jerk like in revenge and zindegi
by the way where r the updates for revenge and zendegi😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome start !! :-) !!
Loved it !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
superb update. maan the assassinator??

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