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Posted: 13 years ago

the dark underworld of the hyena's thoughts...have come to life as he succeeds in steeling the song away...causing a separation of two bodies...but never the connection of their spirits...while the song and the beast linger in unconscious memories...they wake eachother out of slumber by calling out their love's name...as the river images flow through his mind...the beast will not allow injury to keep him away from her...and the song will not succumb to evil when told not to mention her love's name...for to stay quiet and death will become one and the same...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Whoa!!!sylvie!you are back with your daily poems!😳

aww!!!loved your way of picturising the whole plot!! referring the dark underworld to the evil and insane villian!i really loved the last line of your poetical summary of today's epi!😳

for to stay quiet and death will become one and the same

beautifully written baby!!!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Jaipri, sush1974, rania786, Angel-33, RukhluvMaan, aanappin, maneetshauna, Ash1991, asmina_r, Shruti_Goyal, -mansi95-, riza792, todayzstar, Naz_Angel, --Thush--, maaniqra, Naz_Angel , Vidushi89, CutieTeju, singh24 ,

awww...thanks for reading it and liking it🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

welcome back sylvie. really missed ur poems.i am silent reader. usually i dont post i really like ur poems and used 2 miss it .i also miss kashish's analysis. can anyone tell me where is she?

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Originally posted by: sush1974
welcome back sylvie. really missed ur poems.i am silent reader. usually i dont post i really like ur poems and used 2 miss it .i also miss kashish's analysis. can anyone tell me where is she?

awww...did you change your id name?...was always here...just not inspired to write...nice to know you enjoyed reading them🤗...btw what is kashish's id name?😳