Creative Thrd2:U can only be Mine,Just mine 145/6 - Page 42

mere bore hone pe khush ho rahi ho😡

Originally posted by: mchopra

amita: Then write a part and help us..

tata hai..main chali sone thodi der..

haila

give me some time will update one part

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

give me some time will update one part

Originally posted by: 111priyan

chalo thank god nd thank u 4 updating

shreya tu na sahi koi to update kar hi dega😛

my pleasure dear😳

Next Part:-from where Samanalyse end her previous update , hope I justice with my part
Recap :-
He felt terrible, seeing her revert to her cold, distant self. He immediately walked over and took her in his arms. She stiffened only for a moment before she melted into his embrace.

"I am sorry for shouting Geet. I will explain on the way."

Geet looked up at him, eyes full of trust, laid her palm on his cheek and nodded.

He smiled down at her and said, "I'll wrap the dosa so you can eat it on the way
next part:-
On the way, maan looking at geet continuously when geet said maan m fine don't worry , as per Dadi, she has right to angry on us ,look maan both of us r in right but may be situation is not, she is dadi ma and always dream of ur dulhan and ur grand marriage and after all u r not were most eligible handsome, hot bachelor of this city uff not in INDIA...
Maan smiles and said thanks for understand geet but ... when geet placed her finger on his lip and said shhh kuch mat kahiye jo hoga hum dono sath mein face karenge.
Maan nodded but he know what will happen in KM , He only his dadi ma ...he closed his eyes.
Maaneet reached at KM both try to be looking fine but both feel some kind of anxiety in side their heart ...
Both Enter the Mansion when dadi ma said ek min then said maan u can enter till we sort out this matter this girl will stay in the guest house.
Geet feel humiliate but for maan's sake she nodded and try to leave when maan hold her hand but geet said maan sun lijiye pehele , I'll be wait for u.
Dadi ma smirked and think too much confidence wait ...
After geet leaving from there , both maan and dadi sit on the couch .
Dadi ma:-I'll not waste my time on this just come to the point y u married her , how could u forget ur promise to me, how could u forget ur surname how could u do this maan, u r forgetting u r maan singh khurana , not a simple man, and love, what love, u just took that decision hastily and we will be see the consequence of this, for u , u ever give us any peace,maan come on ans me now.
Maan silently hear everything and re called his childhood and those lonely days, he just want to go from this situation , he want to shout he want to tell everybody how much he wants but his voice chocked , he couldn't ...
when Dadi ma shouts:- DAMN , COME ON MAAN ANS ME ,WHERE IS UR VOICE MAAN SINGH KHURANA , R U LOST OF UD VOICE OR ALSO WITH UR BRAIN . SHAME ON U...
then she left from there...
Here maan just sit there like statue , dadi ma word along with his miserable childhood coming in front of his eyes, he want to runs from this place, he wants...
he get up from there and enter his room and close the door and sit in the floor whole day.
Here whole day geet is waiting for maan to come there , she is worried now for maan, , one side her own insecurity another side her tension for maan.

Precap:- love vs MU

P.S Sorry for any mistake in hurry type all
tell me how it is

Perfect! 👏

I love how you brought out Dadi's character and making Geet sit in the guesthouse was a very good detail. And Maan doesn't know how to deal with the conflict and shuts himself up, which is his default mode, while Geet is waiting...I see lots of tension coming!

Nice update dear. Dadi is so cruel.

@reva thanks dear
@Samanalyse thanks dear I was worried about this part
thanks dear
yes tension is coming up
like maan said himself as he is weak but in which sense physically or mentally ,
right now maan can't over come from his childhood

@ anuandavi thanks dear
dadi is but I will not make her totally negative it's almost gray shade
but here is the challenge her bitterness or gray shade will win or maaneet's love
let's see