Kis Morrh Pe Milay Ho #4/Chapter 24/Epiloge P44/45 - Page 11

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First I thought I should stop this due to lake of time after 'Mere Papa Maan/Season one' ..evn U r Our half world...But I decided to move...n gonna update


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First I thought I should stop this due to lake of time after 'Mere Papa Maan/Season one' ..evn U r Our half world...But I decided to move...n gonna update


Kis Morrh Pe Milay Ho

U r Our Half world.

Updating till tonite

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Part 21


Maan followed her to her room

Maan: Geet I said stop…u mad girl…listen to me(he shouted from back)

Geet turned and looked at him

Geet: I m not mad…Don talk to me…go away Maan ( he closed door at his face)

He continuously knocked so many times but no effect.Maan again came to same place where all family members were gathered.

Maan: Maa tell me what's wrong with Geet…she always do what ever she wants..It is also true ..wo kabhi galat nahi hoti..but wo job hi karti hai..bilkul ulta hota hai jo main karta hu(he put his hands on waist as usual during frustration n anger)

Rano: Maan u never told us u lov Geet…u r here from days.

Maan: Mujhe bhi kahan patta tha k meri zindgi mujhe fir se jinne ka ek mauka deggi..(smile came to his lips)

Tina: Per mujhe patta tha ..kush kush..but I had no proof But mujhe kissi proof ki jaroorat he nahi paddi….u hav commited in front of us that u lov…Geet…

Maan: Ji Maasi…Geet hai he aise…koi usse pyar kiye binna reh he nahi sakta….per uska behavior mujhe kush ajeeb sa lagta hai..I mean if she wants some thing...she needs at the moment…aur usko agar wo cheese mil jaaye then it is also possible that she can throw that thing at same moment.Such a change in mood.

Inder: Even I don know what has happened to her…aise nahi thi Geet…

Maan: waise Papa ek baat hai..when our circumstances gonna change no body knows…I never thought that after Sangeeta …lif wiil giv another chance to me

Rano: Even We never thought…Maan..that out daughter ll get second chance after that biggest jerk…that's reason we all r afraid….what ll happen if u come to know real reason behind her sufferings….(scared)


Maan: Maa if u wanna tell me about her past relation I don wanna know….I hav nothing to do with it…Geet is ..I lov her…that's reality.

Rano: But Maan …not about relation but the biggest reality due to which our daughter is still suffering aur shaaayad..

Maan: Aur shaayad ? (😲)

Rano: May b u ll also do same with Geet what has happened before...?

But before she could say any more Sham Lal their driver came running ..."Inder Sir ..Geet baby…"

Maan: Kya hua Kaka..aap Geet ka naam aise kyo le bhag rahe hai...

Sham Lal: Maan Sir Geet baby car le kar chali gayi…isse pehle main car tak pahunch patta wo challi gayi.(breathless he said)

Rano: Kahan chali gayi...Geet..is ladki ko kya ho gaya hai kush nahi patta (she started to cry)

Inder: Yeh time kyo kahan ka nahi humme janna hoga uske pichay..

Maan: Ji Paa chaliye without wasting any time…Geet ka kush pata nahi kaab kya karre uper se she is too upset…n weak…

All three men left without wasting any time.

Rano: Tina yeh Geet ..kya hoga is ladki ka..pata nahi kyo aisa kar rahi hai…(she fell on sofa)


Tina: yahi to mujhe bhi samjh nahi aata pehle aisi nahi thi.(she was thinking)

Maan took side to Peer Baba ki dargaah ..Inder toward Chandigarh n Ram moved to commissioner office for further help.

Maan called Inder

Maan: Paa she is not here..

Inder :Even I hav crossed SBS Nagar….but no trace of her car…I m much worried now…she is not piking phone too.(he was much scared now)

Meera brought Daddi Maa …Dev..n kids home.Inder had reached Chandigarh n searching all possible places….Maan n Ram returened home.

Rano: Maan meri Geet ko kyo nahi le kar aayeh..

Maan: Maa mujhe yakeen hai wo aa-jaayegi….aap fikar mat kijiye...(he hugged him)

Till then Daddi Maa came with Aryan in her hands.

Maan was happy to see his kids n family after days.But this happiness was nothing in front of Geet. Aryan n Sandhya were much happy to find their father.

Aryan: Papa….Papa…(he started to cry opening his arms toward Maan)….Maa…Maa…Maama….(might he was calling Maa to Daddi Maa but When Maan noticed he grabed Aryan n hugged him tightly)

Maan: Baby u ll not loose ur mother once again…(he kissed him ) …

Every body was looking at him what he was saying..?..😲

Maan: Maa Geet aayegi aap dekhna….(he had tears)..He first typed a message n then called Geet ….Phone was buzzing but no answer….

Sandhya: Papa Daddi Maa ne kaha tha aap hamari maa humko wapis la kar dogay kahan hai maa (she said with much sad mood)

Maan:beta apki Maa ati hogi….just wait.(he assured her)

They hadn't their food..Maan forced every one to eat..Evn he himself.was not able to hav...but no body was ready.Around when door bell rung n servent opened door.

Every body was shocked except Maan he had smile on his face looking at Geet.

Maan: Aryan ur Maa is here baby (he said to himself n kissed sleeping Aryan)

Geet silently moved in putting face down.

Rano: Geet …kahan thi tum….koi aise ghar se jaata hai…aur tum na phone ka jawaab de rahi thi na he messege ka…sabhi tumko dhund rahe thay….(she said in one go)

Maan: Maa mainy kahan than a Geet aa jayegi…

Geet: main kyo na aati mujhe aana he tha….apse matlab(she busted on him)

Maan: mujhe se nahi per in se to hai…(Maan put Aryan on his arms n showed to Geet…n asked dozing Sandhya to come in front )

Geet looked in Maan's eyes n then snatched Aryan from him….

Geet: Main apne bachcho k liye aayi hu ..kya message kiya tha apne k mere bachchay fir se Maa kho beithay hai…unki Maa ko unki koi fikar nahi…how dare u (she busted )

Tina: Maan ne tumko messege kiya isliye tum aayi ho…Geet.

Geet: Ha main inke liye aayi hu…..yeh meri reality jaan kar mujhe apnaye na apnaye..per Maa aur bachchy ka rishta koi nahi tod sakta...(her eyes were wet)

Maan: Tumhari sachai….itna kamzoor hai hamara rihsta Geet k ..ek sach usko tood de….jis per kissi ka bas nahi..

Geet: Kya jaante hai aap ….kahna aasaan hai per usko digest karna mushkil hai…

Maan: u r rite..mujhe digest nahi hua..becoz mujhe nahi lagga k main usse dekho (see)...sochu(think) k isko digest kar sakta hu k nahi….becoz that matters nothing to me…I don't care that U hav Cardiac transplantation….(Maan taunted Geet first but when he said this thing easily every body looked at him with shock.)

Rano: Tumko pata hai beta…

Maan: Ji Maa Ram Uncle ne bataya...jab hum Geet ko dhund kar aa rahhe thay..per mujhe nahi pata tha k is baat ka itna badda issue banega...pehle to main jannaa nahi chaha tha..aur jab pata chal gaya hai mujhe koi farak nahi padta..(he had big smile on his lips)

Geet:apko patta chal he gaya..

Maan: Ji Miss Handa I know..per main isko koi mudda nahi banana chahta...aur isme tumhara aur kissi ka koi kasoor nahi problem to kissi ko bhi ho sakti hai


Daddi: Aur betay jab humko...Maan ko koi aitraaz nahi to aap kyo is baat ko le lar itna preshan ho rahi hai…Come here promise me abse aap aisa kush nahi karegi..(Daddi came in front)

Geet: Aap Daddi Maa hai na..maine apki picture dekhi hai…aap bahut achi hai..per yeh jaan kar k meri lif har time danger main hai aur main shayad kabhi Maa na baan pau aap mujhe apnane ko tayar hai.(she had thousands of questions in her eyes)

Daddi Maa: Beta ….kush mat sochiye….bas aap hamare gahr aa jayeaaa jisko apka intzaar hai…kon kehta hai aap Maa nahi baan sakti aap to Maa ban gayi hai…apka bachcha apke saamne hai…..(she touched Geet's face first n then Aryan)

Sandhya: Daddi Maa mujhe nataya wo mujhe aur Aryan ko Maa k pass le kar ja rahi hia..per Maa aap kahan thi…. (she came out from her sleep)

Geet looked at eight year old girl asking her Maa confidently.

Geet: Sandhya….(she came near to her n hugged her with one hand..n holding Arya with other)

Maan: Geet tumhara zakham abhi theek nahi hua…Arya ko mujhe do.. stitches remove ho jaaye fir isko chod kar mujhe uta lena (he was not aware what he had said but when he realsied he was blushing feeling ashamed.)

Sudden arrival of Meera was surprising why she came running.


mov to next page plz...😭

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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