MG-OS-Do Ajanabi - Last Part & Epi-PG10 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it jyoti superb update
Waiting for next part cont soon
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Loved it jyoti superb update
Waiting for next part cont soon
Awsome thnx for pm
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simply awesome...👍🏼
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superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved it
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luvd it jst read in one go..
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awesome ... superb ...

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continue soon ...
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LAST PART

Next Day Morning

Geet was shocked to see the nail marks on Maan's back, she slowly started moving her fingers on the marks & kissed each & every marks with that soft touch of her lips Maan turned & took her in embrace.


Maan : hey I want the kiss on my lips & not on my back honey.


Geet : Maan nails marks there on your back, really feeling very bad SORRY.


Maan : Sorry for what? It proved that we both were totally out of control. I will forgive you on one condition.


Geet : Maan U & your endless conditions'' what is it now?


Maan : A morning kiss that too on my lips.


Geet didn't say anything. Both of them felt each others breath.


Geet : Don't be lazy if somebody comes then what are you going to tell them.


Maan: Dad & Mom not possible, Annie, I have already told her not to knock the door till 9.00 & Deepak (servant) will not dare to come near the door. So my dear wife still one hour is there in our hand so what say & raised his eyebrow.


Holding each other more tightly they both lye on the bed again.



A Very Short Epilogue'.

Though Maan & Geet were from same city they were unknown to each other. Maan was never interested to be in Media's lime light. He was in his world but never came across a girl in his life.

Whereas Geet was in her world, full of masti type. She wanted to go out with her friends after her final year Exams & she made it.

Maan after returning back to Delhi first & foremost he did that he collected all the informations of Geet. He discussed with his parents. Mrs. & Mr. Khurana were happy with Maan's decision & 2ndly she was the same girl Geet Handa whom they saw at Mr. Sharma's Party.

It was Maan's plan that he & his parents will meet Mrs & Mr. Handa in absence of Geet, so he told Ankit that along with Anju, Varun, Rashi, he should take Geet also so that he can meet her parents & discussed about the plan.

Do Ajnabi'..miley ek aise vaadiyon mein, unhe pata hi nahi chala ki kab kaisi unki dosti pyaar mein badal gayi'''''.


Aur aage jaakar shaadi ke rishtey mein bandh gaye'''


Hope u all like this OS...

Guys do comment...

Your Likes & Comments motivated to keep writing...




Edited by Jyoti121 - 13 years ago
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waiting for the last part... please pm me when you update...
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lovely story dear would miss it

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Superb Story
Keep writing such Stories

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