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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

bada mazzaa aaya humain rulake...
but as much as i want to hate u for writing this. but somehow i cant coz this was too good...i mean i dont kno whom i wanted to console the most, whether it was geet for losing her beloved sis..or for meera who had been so selfless, inspite of having a rebvellious streak in her, she needed family support when she was battling her disease, but to save geet and her family from the emotional turmoil and sorrow, she chose to live in incognito...
well all i can say is this is best OS u have written by far...u r too good when it comes to descriptive narration subtle nuances and emotions...
take a bow twinnie...u just outdid urself...
loved it...and thank u for making me cry😭..ab aur kya bolun main...
reva

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

lovely OS
thanks for this awesome OS
really makes sisters relation so special

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome os had tears while reading.. I so wish i had a sister...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

congrats !!!!! 4 d new os ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

u know what i had tears reading this...
i dont have siblings at all, neither sisters nor brothers, so dont know how that feeling is...
all the love has always been showered being the youngest...
but seeing my friends' share the love and all other things with their sisters i always used to admire and look on...
reading this really made me emotional...
ur dedication of this OS to ur sis is so beautiful dear...
loved Maan in this...

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Radhika

@ridhz21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Beautiful update
I had tears when i was reading

thx for pm

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Miss-Riz

@Miss-Riz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

hey...very beutyfully written...awesome OS :)

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

wow it was awesome heartwarming :)

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

OMG !!!

u know i wasn't even going to comment ...cuz i didn't know what to say

i was completely stunned

IT was BEAUTIFUL!!

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

well wat all now i can imagine is my sister srini ( sarkh26 )

made me cry 😭

well the final part with kushi and meera conversation

well i am a girl who hate milk without horlicks and i hate bananas

it is my sister who eats my bananas and drink my milk

it is my sister who signed like my mom when i got low marks

it is my sister who know every nook and corner of me

thanks a lot for writing this os

for u srini ( sarkh26) from my choti heart ( as u call my pump as a choti wali )

i cant tell u how much i love u

i dont know whether there are words to describe

i cant tell you how much i'll miss you

i know that there are seldom words to describe

you are here to fight with me

you are here to hug me

you are here to make me jealous

i wonder whether this would continue forever

i dont wanna grow

n miss ur throws

i want u by my side

as a shoulder for my cries

ill love you forever

but my love for you wont remain the same

but it will increase day by day

and day by day ...

well thot of writing a poem which resulted in only lines

enough of my bak-bak

i just wanna tell u thank u for reminding me abt my love for my sister which is hidden deep in my heart the first thing im now gonna do is go and just hug her and cry

just felt like telling what i felt

if u want me to edit my cmnt

u can pm me

ill edit it

thanks a lot

P.S to srini : you better dont call my pump a choti okay

coz if it becums small u cant stay in it ...

Edited by niticool - 13 years ago