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My heart turned sore,

As soon as I saw her cry,

Down in the alley I saw her pass by.

Her tear drops were opaque

Against her sweet face

She went away

Leaving me behind

On this footpath all alone.

Breaking apart from me

She left me alone

Didn't even care to thing about me

She left me on the road

Unable to control myself I ran behind her,

But she just went away

Helpless I can't find her

She's lost in the world of her own

Hiding her feelings

She went away

Leaving me behind all alone.

Down to heart

I cry and break down over here

Just as she left me

All alone

Down on the road


MAAN SINGH KHURANA

He is 26 years old M.D. of khurana construction.He is very rude and arrogant does not have feelings and does not care about anyone's emotion.He changed himself due to his past.He loved geet from his heart but she left him she betrayed him by telling him that she doesn't love him.Now maan hates geet and he doesn't want to see her face

GEET HANDA

She is 23 years in search of a job.She stays with her sister and her daughter and loves them a lot.She loved maan a a lot and now also she loves him but she left him due to some reason.

PARI HANDA

as suggested by aarthirajendran(thank u for the pic)

She three years old geet's daughter very cute and chubby and very naughty also but she loves her mom a lot

WILL BE UPDATING THIS FF ONCE OR TWICE IN A MONTH OR MORE IF I GET TIME

If you want PM please add this id to your PM list sweeties_pm

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Nav2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Not fair only two times in MONTH...LOL
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Originally posted by: Nav2010

Not fair only two times in MONTH...LOL

I WILL UPDATE MY OTHER FF ALSO THATS WHY
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice intro...
Continue soon!
Edited by Radhika Shah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting...
try to update more...
atleast once a week...
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing but sad storyline... many secrets...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Seems interesting, cont soon sweetie.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start..continue soon👏
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congrats !!!!! 4 d new ff ...

interesting concept ..

nice character sketch ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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oho!dats different..geet has a daughter..

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