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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii guys as all of u knw I am now showing how I would take the epi forward and stop the mistakes and rectify them

Link to epi 406
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1784490


Part 1.

Following morning Maan wakes up and thinks about last night events and decides to talk to Geet family members quickly. He walks out of bed and in walks in Geet with damp hair and opened with Maan's coffee. She puts the coffee down and looks at Maan and there is an eye lock.
'woh aap tayyar hojaye main Nashta tayyar karti ho' she smiles and is about to leave when she slips on her dupatta Maan grabs her and stops her from falling. Both look into each others ayes
Maan pulls her up and says
'Tum sach main chalti phirti disaster ho'. Geet looks at him in surprise as this is what Maan uses to call her when she used to fall before memory loss. They both come out of eye lock
'geet ab tum jaogi'
'ha main chalti ho' Geet runs out blushes and smiles. Maan smiles too.
Next scene dining hall
Geet is ordering the servants around. Dev comes and watches her with a smirk. He watches all of Geet antics. Nandini then comes and taps Dev on the shoulder. Dev turns around and looks at her he is irritated but smiles fakely
'morning. Aap tik to ho na. Mujhe pata hai ke aap shaadi ka challenge na hone par Torah sa pareshan ho na. Lekin aap chinta maj kijeye ek na ek din hamari shaadi hojayenge' she smiles
Dev smirks and thinks yeh Ladki bohot chipku hai. Chal acha hai mera plan to Aache se jaraha hai lekin shaadi to meri hogi lekin Geet ke Saat use main apna phir se banaloga'
Dev says to Nandini not to worry.

Next scene @ office
Adi comes with pinky to Maaneet who have just entered. Adi and Pinky goes into maan cabin
'aap boliye' pinky urged Adi
Adi looks at pinky and tells her to speak
Maan looks at them and asks is there any problem
'woh sir kya haina mujhe aur pinky ko dupair main do gante ke chuti chahiye'
Maan looks at them and asks why
Adi stammers and says 'woh main aapko ' he sees Geet and smiles and thinks
'mujhe pinky jii ke dad ko milna hai' he smiles
'ha merey dad se kyun' Adi nudges Pinky
'arey ha sir wo kya hai na ' pinky started and Maan stops her and tells her don't worry they can go after lunch but for two hours.

Part 2.

Maan gets a phonecall he looks at Geet and phones her and tells her he is leaving. Geet says okay and tells him to take care. Dev comes to office and sees Geet is alone. He smirks and goes and sits in Geet cabin and Geet asks him about him and Nandini and Dev gets irritated because she is not acknowledging him.
Geet feels hungry and wants to go for lunch but Adi and Pinky are not around and Dev volunteers to take her. Geet smiles and decides to order food in. Dev smirk dissapers as his new plan flopped.

Part 3
Maan Adi and Pinky are in the farida wall farm house.
'kya pata chala Phir' Maan asks
'sir jabse ab dono ki shaadi hue hai ab dono par kisi Ne naazar rakha hua hai yaha tak bi Kay raat tak' Adi says
Romeo then comes with mannisha and Pandey ji and Tasha
'sir humne ye reports mila hai aur Geet ko Kai baar private number se phone aya lekin kisi Ne baat nahi ke' Romeo says
'aur ha sir Dekho yeh photos kise develop karwaya ta mujhe apne Ghar ke pass photo wale ke pass miley' Tasha says
Maan looks at the pictures and was shocked it was pictures of geet in every move expression and her sleeping from marriage to Amritsar. And then they saw a picture which horrified then it was a picture of Geet with a blanket over her which said mera junoon mera pyar sirf mera'
Maan looks at them and then at the guys
'tu Hamara Shaq sahi ta koi to hai Jo Geet ke piche para hai. Agar mujhe us din woh poster Nahi milta to mujhe pata nahi hota'
Flashback to the go down where Maan was held bu mummy ji and he saw Geet pictures and posters and words saying mine belongs to me I will make her mine
Maan looks at everyone
'Humme is kamine ko dhonda hoga aur Geet ka khayal rakhna hoga'
'aur aap log sunlo Maan sir ke yadash Nahi gayi hai yeh hamare alava koi nahi janta'
All leave maan stays and says
'Geet main tumhe kuch nahi honey dhonga'

Precap for epi 408
Geet is waiting for Maan in office doors to go home together and feels dizzy. She faints and a shadow forms ova her
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Both parts were amazing
U brought a complete new twist 2 d show
Btw will u update d nxt one tmrw or monday?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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if only cvs can think on these lines show would hav been on another level but they think comedy circus is a better option

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