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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Unfortunate Girl
Prologue:
geet was standing on d bus stop waiting for the bus...its very hot in Delhi ...everyone greedily looks at the air conditioned private CAR that goes by...
tears almost came to geets eyes..there was a time..yes ,there was a time there will be at least 5 cars waiting for her in front of her ban-glow
...ooh!!!who cares it was my choice to chose this life.
(..really..).someone laughed inside her.(..did u really had any choice...can anyone choose to be all alone in the world...can anyone chose to desert all thats precious to her).
ITS TRUE..there is nothing in her world that she can call her self not anymore...not even her name,she lost everything even her existence.(..how pathetic is that)
(No.no.no...everything will be alright...i will be with my mother once again ,she will give me strength to make everything all right...from tomorrow a new day will start..there is still hope..).
tomorrow is the day she will start in Khurana Construction...tomorrow is the day she will be reunited with her mother...tomorrow...

Character Sketch:
Geet:a rich girl who deserted everything in the name of justice...now has concealed her identity and living in secret...just now just graduated from delhi university from finance department...also holds a fascinating interest in architecture...surprisingly knows alot too..

Pari Chopra:daughter of the famous builder Mr, Chopra...Architecture student...geet was her paid friend...in other words she did all the project AND creative work for pari...which got her first class FIRST in university...cheating was strictly prohibited in delhi university...so she had to hire geet who is not even a architecture student...

Sadhna Shaigal:one of the founder architect of khurana industries..Adored like a daughter by Verer Khurana the founder KC and grandfather of maan.

Maan:the eldest grandson of the khurana's ...Md OF Khurana Empire...hates women due to his bad experience with his former girlfriend...very rude...guys u know the rest...na...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sounds interesting!!!
Please add me to your pm list and update soon
Saba xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesomeee prologueee!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls jaldi update kariyega😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome , Plss continue soon👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start yaar ..i loved it
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Hi...waitin' for the first part :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start... plz update part👏
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awesome pls add me and pm me when u update
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