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Posted: 13 years ago
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Teaser: update tomz after my interview wish me luck n pray I get the job pleaseee

Maan sat with Riya aka Geet on the dining table after Riya(G) had put Muskaan strapped on her seat. Nakul had served dinner and Riya opted for the alo Palak.
'so Maan won't your wife join us' Riya asked
'no unfortunately Muski is scared of her and has not accepted her as a mum yet' Maan replied
Riya thought to herself 'good girl Muski because you know that bitch ain't your mum'
'I hope you don't mind me asking but you said you were glad your first wife is dead why?'
'I might as well tell you' maan narrated his story
'you still love her' Riya said happy in her heart that Maan loves her
'yes'
Riya was happy he was opening up to a stranger
'Maan not to interlude but if you loved her why didn't you trust her?'
'how could I? The proofs were aganist her!' Maan yelled
'if so then why did Geet deny them? She had the money and Amit was there she could have just walked out. Did you ever wonder? Have you ever found out how the money was transferred? The photo's could be morphed and so could the letters. Did Geet ever leave Muskaan alone? And about Dadima, you said CCTV in your house did you ever check it'
Maan was shocked and realized Riya had a point. Geet might be innocent
'and Amit, he must have loved Geet as you said you saw his eyes maybe for his twisted obsession or revenge for Geet marrying you he took part in this plan. Think for a moment if Geet suspected you and Naintara and what if pictures if you two were seen by her would she ever suspect you?'
'No she said that she trusts me forever and nothing is more important that my words ..if I said they were fake she will blindly trust me
'Riya could you look after Muskaan. I have to do some important things' Maan ran out. Riya smiled at herself for making Maan
think.


'Geet never pushed dadima down she was innocent' Maan gasped looking at thE CCTV.

'Dadima' Riya said as she grabbed her hands and out then aganist her cheeks. She had tears in her eyes
'dadima your Geet is back. I'm so sorry I've been away so long. This accident gave me a new face which will make it easier for you to ger justice and me to ger Naintara real face out' Dadima smiled through her tears.
'now dadima nO more tears. And now I will make sure you get the right medicine and treatment'
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Superb concept.luvd all prts update dis soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
do continue soon
amazing update
n awesum precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesum teaser n waiting 4 d update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mayank and Nupur smiled and hugged Geet as there plan started tomorrow.

Following Day, Maan walked to the front door as the door bell rang. Naintara had headed out early to run a few errands. Nupur sister, Gunjan was supposed to be the new threapist but after speaking to Nupur and Geet she agreed to let Geet go. Geet smiled as she knocked the door.

'Hi what are you doing here Miss Riya?' asked Maan surprised.

'I'm Muskaan new threapist' Riya AKA Geet smiled. Maan smiled too. He led her inside the room.

'So our second meeting hey' Riya smiled. But Maan's attention was elsewhere. He smelt a familiar smell. The same perfume Geet would wear. He smelt it from Riya.

'Mr Khurana' She asked. 'oh babaji I'm trying to make small talk and here he is not listening' Geet complained.

'What did you say?' asked Maan hearing the word babaji

Riya realised what she said

'I said Mr Khurana its our second meeting' She said wishing desperately Maan had forgotten what she said.

'uh huh yeah.' He sniffed again smelling Geet's perfume.

'Mr Khurana something wrong?' Geet asked.

'No your perfume, Its what Geet used to wear' He said. Geet aka Riya smiled atleast he remembered what she smelt like. He then noticed a ring on her finger. It was a ring he had given Geet on the same day of there anniversary.

'Your ring' He said

Geet looked down and realised and thought to herself, Maan is remembering her.

'yes, its pretty isnt it. Mayank Bro gave it to me. He said he bought it off a woman who sold collectables' Geet lied. Maan thought if Geet was dead and her ring was not recovered this may be the same ring.

'Riya could I see your ring please' He said. Geet gave it to him and he examined it and found that it was the same ring. It had the initals G and M in the middle.

'Mr Khurana,' She poked him.

'sorry here you are' He said. 'would you like anything Miss Riya'

'Riya please and a glass of water would be fine' She answered back. 'actually I'll go and get it myself why don't you go bring Muskaan.' She said as she got up and walked towards the kitchen. Maan watched her shocked as she walked towards the kitchen. He went and got Muskaan. Just as Geet returned.

'Don't mind me asking Riya but how did you know where the kitchen was' Maan asked.

'Urm.. well I'd guess it was there because your dining table is there so normally kichens are near the dining table' Geet said quickly gulping knowing she made a bad mistake. Luckily Maan looked conviced.

'So Muskaan, hi I'm Ge, I mean Riya. Do you want to be my friend' Geet said sitting infront of Muskaan. Muskaan jumped off her fathers lap and hugged Geet tight. Geet felt all her tears and motherly love coming back to her. The whole day Geet spent the day with Muskaan. She managed to make Muskaan talk a lot to Maan and Geet. Just like she would to her parents.

'Muskaan had never spoken this much before thank you Riya I think I'm getting my daughter back' Maan said with a tear in his eyes.

'Thank you Maan' Riya said getting up.

They went to Muskaan room.

'Hmm Mr Khurana, this room should not have been set up like this. The bed should have been next to the window and the toys should have been in this cupboard so Muskaan could reach them easily and the clothes..' Geet stopped talking to see Maan stare at her.

'Sorry, but the things you said reminds me of what Geet had said' Maan said.

'Wow Muskaan seems to like you a lot' Maan said as Riya put Muskaan down.

Riya got up to leave when Muskaan said

'Mama' And she held her hand tight.

'I guess Riya if you don't mind stay the night'

'Mr Khurana, I think to help Muskaan I should live here for atleast a month. You have done your background check haven't you' Geet knew as Maan always did a background check on everyone who touched his daughter or came near his family.

'How do you know?'

Geet AKA Riya bit her lip.

'Urm you're a father, wouldn't you do things like this especially for your daughter' She smiled.

'Urm I guess your right'

'Anyways Mr Khurana'

'call me Maan'

'Maan, where is your wife?'

'Naintara she out shopping she has a party tonight'

'And Muskaan, doesn't she take care of her?' asked Geet.

'Not really'

Maan sat with Riya aka Geet on the dining table after Riya(G) had put Muskaan strapped on her seat. Nakul had served dinner and Riya opted for the alo Palak.
'so Maan won't your wife join us' Riya asked
'no unfortunately Muski is scared of her and has not accepted her as a mum yet' Maan replied
Riya thought to herself 'good girl Muski because you know that bitch ain't your mum'
'I hope you don't mind me asking but you said you were glad your first wife is dead why?'
'I might as well tell you' maan narrated his story
'you still love her' Riya said happy in her heart that Maan loves her
'yes'
Riya was happy he was opening up to a stranger
'Maan not to interlude but if you loved her why didn't you trust her?'
'how could I? The proofs were aganist her!' Maan yelled
'if so then why did Geet deny them? She had the money and Amit was there she could have just walked out. Did you ever wonder? Have you ever found out how the money was transferred? The photo's could be morphed and so could the letters. Did Geet ever leave Muskaan alone? And about Dadima, you said CCTV in your house did you ever check it'
Maan was shocked and realized Riya had a point. Geet might be innocent
'and Amit, he must have loved Geet as you said you saw his eyes maybe for his twisted obsession or revenge for Geet marrying you he took part in this plan. Think for a moment if Geet suspected you and Naintara and what if pictures if you two were seen by her would she ever suspect you?'
'No she said that she trusts me forever and nothing is more important that my words ..if I said they were fake she will blindly trust me
'Riya could you look after Muskaan. I have to do some important things' Maan ran out. Riya smiled at herself for making Maan
think.

Maan ran to his study looking for the CCTV tapes. He found the one from the top view but not the one which would show who pushed or how his dadima fell.

'Omg Geet did not push dadima' He watched the tape as Geet came running from the kitchen to the end of the stairs.

'Geet I'm so sorry' He said. Riya stood outside and heard him. 'But still you betrayed our love. But Riya said something I need to find out the truth.' He thought to himself.

Maan went back to the dining table and saw Riya cleaning up. He watched her as she cleaned the same way Geet did. He saw glimpses of Geet in her.

'Well Mr Khurana, I think its time I put Muskaan to bed. If you want I'll sleep with her' She said smiling. Maan who was in a confused state as well as guilt just nodded.

He walked out of the house and to his private den. Geet knew he will not be back for an hour and will be searching for answers.

'I know Maan your upset and I also know that you need to know the truth that your Geet loves you a lot and never did anything wrong. I wish you trusted our love'

Geet after putting Muskaan to bed creeped into Dadima room. She saw Dadima opening her eyes in confusment.

'Dadima' She said with tears in her eyes.

'Dadima its me your daughter. Your best buddy. The girl who loved your tales of dadaji and his gardening'

'Geet' Dadima croaked.

'Yes'

'Dadima' Riya said as she grabbed her hands and out then aganist her cheeks. She had tears in her eyes
'dadima your Geet is back. I'm so sorry I've been away so long. This accident gave me a new face which will make it easier for you to ger justice and me to ger Naintara real face out' Dadima smiled through her tears. Geet walked to the reports and was shocked to see how bad NT plans were.
'now dadima nO more tears. And now I will make sure you get the right medicine and treatment'

Geet was lucky that Maan had rang home and said he will be out of town for the night. Geet knew exactly where he was going and that was to find Amit. She had logged onto his account and saw he had detectives looking for him and Maan had gone to the central bank and ICT centre to find out about the money issue.

Geet picked up her make up and fake skin and put it over her face. She looked like her old face and skin with blood in it.

Mayank and Nupur had helped her as they sneaked in with wiring lights and everything needed to make a hauting look scared.

'NAINTARA' Geet boomed. Naintara who was sleeping looked up and saw Geet.

'Geet'

'Yes Geet. I came back for you Naintara. You have 3 days to tell Maan the truth or else…' Geet took a knife out and floated towards Naintara body. Naintara screamed. Nupur and Mayank tried to stop laughing.

'your dead your dead' Naintara whispered frightened sitting up bringing the bedsheets towards her.

'Yes because you killed me and my unborn child' Geet said.

'I…didn't '

'don't lie….' Geet said with a magical baby appearing in her hand with blood and gore.

PRECAP:

NT SHOOTS AMIT….as AMIT tells MAAN the truth but before he could say NT name.

MAAN FORCES HIMSELF UPON RIYA

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
fabulous update..i love this SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Loved it..
But does Maan really need to force himself on Riya? It could be shown mutual or Maan can seduce Riya????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Loved it..
But does Maan really need to force himself on Riya? It could be shown mutual or Maan can seduce Riya????



U do know Riya is Geet yh
And why Maan will well cos wait till friday x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
NT is such an Ewww
I so hate her
Loved Mayur here
Hope they help Geet
How culd Maan jus trust sum pics but not Geet
I so hate him also
N that Amit he shuld die in car crash😡
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NT will die of fear paka hahahaha
Loved how Geet made Maan realise all thgs in jus a day😆😆

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