SS: Letters from a Father ON HOLD TILL DEC - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii muski..
read the update..
it was smply awesome..
but i didnt get the PM...😡
i have a feeling that after reading the updates that will show geet's dad'd letters, i am going to bawl my eyes out...
i think some highly emotional stuff in on the way...and i am preparing myself to be weepy😆
BTW, will b waiting for the next part
reva

i did PM😕 wait maybe i messed up sowiieee😳 will be more careful next time😳 . . .well trust me I CANNOT MAKE ANYONE CRY😆 . . . yes but emtional stuff, yep . . . Lemme go write FO now😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Congrats on the new SS!
interesting concept
hope theres some good maaneet scenes as well
con't soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
so all abtt defences & how they sacrifice relationships 4 their duty 2wards country
awww maaneet r married
geet hates her father omg
loved how maan convinced her to read d letters
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Muskan that was Fabulous...

I got so emotional reading this first part... now I dont know whats gonna happen in the remaining part... ...

I'm eagerly waiting for the updates...please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Congrats on new SS🥳
loved the concept ...waiting to read more
cont. soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Had fate been favorable I would have been a proud daughter claiming to be the fourth generation of my family in Army. I have always been on that side of the line where I took pride in the fact that my father had a greater duty to fulfill than just my needs, my brother's wishes or my mom's desires. I took pride in letting him know during the weekly or fortnightly Exchange connected calls that I did so and so all alone, so that he had one less worry to plague his mind.

But then I also saw kids around me, same environment, same lifestyle, yet a different take on our father's service. The ones that felt cheated, ignored and abandoned. Those who felt they were short-sold. That they had to give up more than that got back in return.

And I could never feel any empathy with them. I simply felt that were blind to the simple logic that our father's were giving us a legacy, a right to hold our head high, a lesson in humanity and an example to follow.

Maybe I have been blind to what those on the other side of the line feel. Maybe there is more to their anger and indignation. Maybe your SS would throw some light.

But all said and done, I am still very proud to be on this side of the line, where my father's duty, his absence, means more to me than his mere physical presence at my annual functions. I wouldn't want to be born as anyone else, but a daughter of an Army Officer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Great start! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Teaser

In these letters I wish to write what I have been meaning to tell you in person but like your mother once told me, you have inherited your stubbornness from me, and I am certain you wouldn't even let me near you let alone listen to me. Moreover, even if you would have given me a chance, there would have been no guarantee you would sit through it all, without walking out on me. So I am writing these letters to you. I want my daughter to know about her father's life . . . my life.

Your mother feels that in the wake of duty I have neglected you and her, but believe me when I say it was not intentional and not in all literal sense 'neglect'. Service has and will always come before self, my family included. Now, please don't chuck the letter away if you haven't already thought about doing so. It's a father's earnest request, please read through it.

Baby before I begin, you have to know and believe . . . I loved you and I loved your mother' so very much. It wasn't lack of love which separated us, you may though blame it on destiny, rest I have an explanation, if you may call it one but I would want to start from the beginning.

I was born and brought up in a small village on the outskirts of Ludhiana. No don't worry! I won't bore you with a detailed description about my childhood, just one incident which later on proved a turning point in my life. It was the year of Indo-Pakistan war: 1971 . . .

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
i liked it... do update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Fabulous teaser...update soon n pm wen u do! 😉

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