New ff pavitr rishta part 3 on pg 3

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Characters:-
Maan Singh khuraana:- a handsome good looking hot angry young man, the owner of khuraana constructions, loves his brothers , sister and daadi, they are his whole world, love them unconditionally
But never forgive cheaters and liars.

Dev Singh khuraana:- brother of maan Singh khuraana, loves Maan very much, lives in canada wife his nanitara.

Vikrant Singh khuraana:- second brother of maan khuraana, he loves maan too very much and he can do anything for him, lives in America completing his studies, want to become like Maan.

Anvesha Singh khuraana:- younger daughter if khuraana family, very pampered by maan and his two brother, Maan loves her much, she also lives in America with Vicky, also completing her education.

Geet handa:- a beautiful young girl, lives in hoshiyarpur with her parents completing her education, loves her parents, the only daughter of handa family

Mohender handa:- geets father lives his daughter very much, he is looking a boy for her daughter.

Rano handa:- geets mom, loves her daughter very much.

Meera kapoor:- best and childhood friend of geet, she is geet's sweetheart and can do anything for her.

Aditya chopra:- friend of meera and worked in khuraana constructions as a maan's accountant and also his right hand.

Sasha:- architecture of khurrana constructions, she luvs maan, but maan dont love her, she is very possessive about maan.



Part:- 1
This is a story of small town girl called geet. She was very sweet, bubbling, and cute girl. She faces many problems in her life, she wanted to die but destiny had some other decision for her life. One day her parents decide that now she is 18 and we should get married her but geet wanted to Study further because she just completed her BA. She wanted to stand on her own feets. She wanted to become something in her life because life doesn't give another chance. She knew that if she get married then she will be never able to do anything in her life. Geet denies her parents and said " mom dad you know I want to do study, I don't want to marry now please" but her parents didn't listen to her and said " geet you know that in our family girls should be get married in age 18, we cant denei this fact and you also know that.". Next day her parents called the boys' family that boy was from a rich family and from a big city. He came with his sister, mother and sister-in-law. His name was dev Singh khurana and her sister-in-law name was naintara khurana. Geet's mother come with geet, she was beautiful dressed in sari and was looking so beautiful looks like an angle came from sky. She was really sad because she doesn't want to get marry now. Dev saw her beauty and just sitting there like statue, geet saw dev and looks away. Dev's family liked geet and dev also liked geet but somewhere geet was feeling that she is attracted to dev and liked dev but she doesn't want to pretend in front of anyone. Dev said " yes I like geet" and everybody were waiting for geet's answer especially her dad. She looks at her dad and giving him a weak smile and said "yes". Her dad was like that he is in heaven and giving a wide smile. Dev's family and geet's family congrates each other and Dev's family said the alliance is fixed and said "from now geet is our would be daughter in law, ok we should leave now and outside is also getting dark thank you so much." dev and geet looked at each other and smiles. Next day was not too good for geet but she was happy, she was thinking about dev and thought how handsome he was looking yesterday and smiled at herself. She was falling in love with him. After sometime her best friend meera called her on cell phone and said " I knew it you idiot I knew it that you will forget my birthday and why you will remember my birthday I think this is your best habit from past 4 years you are such a idiot I hate u geet" then geet said "ohhh please meera calm down relax sweety yes I did mistake every year to forgot your birthday but yesterday I was very tired that I didn't get time to even call you i am sorry sweetie please and yes HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my MEERA SWEETIE. Please forgive me this time and you know what my parents fixed my alliance." meera was in great shock, first she forget her BD and now another shocking news. Meera said " whaattt" geet: " yes meera". Meera: " and u didnt even bother to call me for a sec" geet: " I know u r angry with me but please try to understand yesterday was a very different day for me I was very upset and you know I wanted to study further but my parents didnt listen to me and they called boy's family and u know what that boy was a quite handsome somewhere I felt that I was attracted to him but I don't know is this attraction or love but.." meera: "geet you and love impossible I think u r just attracted to him nothing else. Geet: " what do you mean are u making fun of me regarding to love." meera: "of course not sweet heart but I am telling you if u r seriously in love with that boy u should do something like hmmm..." geet: " like what.." meera: " let me think.. And by the way what is the name of that lucky boy who is praising here by geet handa hmmm.". Geet: " dev... Dev khurana." meera: oh my my dev ok geet I have a surprise for u I am here in hoshiyarpur" geet: " whattt r u serious I mean when u came here and y didn't u tell me before u r totally stupid meera." meera: " ok now enough talking I am in xyz cottage me and our more friends are coming there I am waiting for u and remember if u late then no one can spare u from me not even ur dev" geet blushing to hear words UR DEV and said " ok I will be there on time bye sweetu and HBD once again" meera: " thank you sweetu chal byeee" geet: " bye" At night geet went to the cottage where meera was waiting for her . Both saw each other and hugged tightly. Meera: yaar kahan thi tum omg you look so changed tu tau buhat kubsurat ho Gayi hai." geet: " haan aur tu wesi ki wesi hi hai jhali." meera: any doubt." they all celebrate meera's birthday. All meera's friends went home except geet, both were sitting on the couch and talking. Meera:" aur bata yaar kitne Dino baad mil rahi hai tujhe dekh kar aesa lagta hai hai jese tujhe meri yaad hi nahi aati" geet:" aesa ho sakta hau mein apni jhali ko bhul jao, ek tu hi tu hai his mein apni har Baath share kar sakti hu"
Meera:" sau tu hai aur bata tere mami papa ko itni jaldi kya hai tere rishte ke aur tu abhi sirf 18 saal ki hai aur itni jaldi" geet: "tujhe pata hai na meera miene kabhi mami papa ki koi baat nahi taali aur papa ne kaha ne hamare khandhan mein larki ki shaadi 18 saal ki umar mein hi kar de jati hai isliye mein unhe naa nahi keh paye aur tujhe tu pata hai na ke papa dil ke mariz hai agar mein naa keh deti tu unki health par bhi Asar par sakta tha isliye meine bina koi argument kiye haa keh diya aur mein hu bhi tu unki ek beti aur brij bhai tu choti umar mein London chale Gaye the study complete karne. Meera:" tujhe pata hai geet tu buhat aachi hai humesha apni khushi se pehle dusron ke bare mein sochti hai acha chor in baton ko yeh bata ke tujhe woh larka pasand hai, kya usne tujhe se kuch kaha" Geet:"nahi yaar usne mujhe se kuch nahi kaha aur haa woh larka thik hai I mean dekhne mein tu sab kuch thik lagraha tha baaki ka pata nahi" Meera:" par kya tujhe woh pasand hai" Geet:"pata nahi yaar haan bhi hai aur naa bhi" Meera:" matlab kya tu use le kar confuse hai" Geet:" chor in baato ko khair nu apne baare mein bata Teri job kesi chal rahi hai" Meera:" haan yaar job tu achi chal rahi tujhe pata hai humara boss itna handsome or hot hainan ke bas tujhe kya batao humare office mein sari larkiya unhe DD kehti hai" Geet:" DD matlab" Meera:" dhak dhak itna hot Jo hai janti jab woh office aate hai tu poora staff aese hota jese pure office mein koi hai hi nahi" Geet:" kyun" Meera:" kyun ke poora office unse buhat darta hai". Geet:" darta hai par kyun kya tumhare boss koi bhoot hai". Meera:" nahi idiot woh buhat gusse wale hai unhe har kaam bilkil perfect chahiye hota hai no mistakes aur janti hai woh Delhi ke sabse ameer aur famous business tycoon hai aur aaj tak kisi ki himmat nahi hui ke woh unke samne unchi awaz mein baat bhi kare, he is angry young man". Geet:" tu aesi jaga kaam kese kar Leti hai jahan itna gusse wala boss hu tujhe daar nahi lagta". Meera:"daar tu daar ki baat kar rehi hai mera tu dil itna tez tez darkhane shuru hojata hai par pata nahi ke unhe aurton se chir kyun hai janti hazaron se zada un pe larkiyan fida hai par unho ne aaj tak ek bhi larkhi ki taraf dekha taq nahi he is not interested in any girl.". Geet got a call from home her mom was on the phone and said " geet where r u we r worrying here and u r impossible" Geet:" relax mom I a coming I was here with Meera she came here today, today is her birthday". Mom:" oh Meera kahan hai woh aur woh ghar kyun nahi ayi and by the way wish her HBD from my behalf and also from ur papa and when u r coming geet" Geet:" I am coming in half an hour so don't worry I will be there ok bye mom". Mom:" ok bye"
Geet:" ok meeru I should leave now and mom dad were wishing u HBD". Meera:" thanks yaar aur tu itni raat ko kese jaye gi chal mein tujhe drop kar deti hu". Geet:" arey nahi Meera mein chali jao gi tu rest kar see u tomorrow bye sweetu and HBD once again" Meera:" thank u so much yaar bye good night and have sweet dreams about ur dreamy dev". Geet:" Meera tu bhi na chal good night bye" both hug each other tightly and geet left.

Precap:- her saviour


Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nicee start please do pm me after you update again!
if it's possible can you write most of it in english just cuz i don't know hindi and i don't wanna stop reading this amazing ff :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome... I so don't want geet to marry idiot DEV 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys I am not getting any comments plz do comment then I will cont further thnx 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start
love it
plz add me2 ur pm list im sending u a buddy request
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Part:-2

Geet:" Meera tu bhi na chal good night bye" both hug each other tightly and geet left. Geet was walking alone on the road for searching a taxi, she feels scared because she was alone no one was with her, then some goons were in the jeep they saw geet and start calling her, geet gets scared and start ignoring them keep walking then they stooped jeep in front of her, she gets more scared and start running she kept running until she get some one for help but that was impossible the goons were following her and she kept running, she was sweating but kept running and finally one goon caught her hand and pulled her towards him and all goons trapped her around a circle, geet was crying and said:" please mujhe Jane do let me go please please". One goon: " tum Jesi lakdi ko koi bewakoof hi Jane dega par hum woh bewakoof nahi hai Kuhn guys". They all laughed loudly. Geet" please help someone koi hai please meri madad karo koi hai". Geet start screaming and they all laughed loudly, one goon went towards her geet starting went backwards and said" mere kareeb mat aana dor raho mujhse please" she start screaming loudly and crying, he took her dupaata and throws it. Geet closed her eyes and thought now everything will be finished, she's not going to survive today, everything is gone now but when that goon throws her dupatta the same time someone caught her dupaata said " us larki ko chor do" geet opens her eyes and saw someone standing there with her dupatta in his hands and his eyes were fully red with anger Goon:" oye tu kon hai chal nickel yahan se" Guy:" meine kaha chor do use warna acha nahi hoga". Goon:" agar tu apni bhalai chahta hai tu chup chap nikal yahan se aur tu hai kon, boyfriend hai iska haa" and they all laugh loudly Guy:" haa hoo tau kya kar lega tu ab tum sab logo ko akhri baar kaho ga ke niklo yahan se warna ab ki baar meri zuban nahi balke mera haath chale ga, niklo yahan se". Goon:" lagta hai tujhe Teri zindagi se pyar nahi hai ab tau tu gaya" he went towards him and try to punch him but he caught and turn his hand to his back he was screaming from pain then the same time another run towards him and try to punch him in his stomach he punch the first goon and then punch another one both fell on floor, he beats them both with his foot, the other goons were got scared, they sat on jeep and run. The other two goons were on the floor with unconscious state. Geet was crying and covered herself with her hands, She was feeling ashamed without her dupatta. The guy saw her thought why I said I am her boyfriend I never said this before to anyone else, she is so beautiful, her face is so innocent but why I am thinking all this, these all things are rubbish just rubbish. He was fighting with himself what is happening to him. He went towards her she looked up into his chocolate brown eyes, he wore white shirt and tight blue jeans, he was so handsome, so hot and good looking, both were looking into each others eyes, the guy thought what a beautiful eyes she has. She's looking so pure, there was something in her eyes that he liked, he never thought like this for any other girl but she was different,totally different there was something special in her. He looked at her lips which were trembling with fear. He came from his trance and covered her with her dupatta. She also looked down and feels embarrassed the way she was looking at him, the guy gets angry and said:" what the hell of u think your'e doing here late at night, what do u think of yourself haa tell me, u know how dangerous this place is, and u r here at night. Geet was just listening him with he eyes wide open, she was actually shocked, she thought, before he helped me and now he is scolding me. Geet was very scared, the words were just stuck In her throat, she was sobbing and the guy said:" can u speak or not" geet:" woh...woh mein... Mein yahan". Guy:"whattt he shouts at her beacause she was not speaking, geet gets scared from his anger and start crying said:" woh mein wapas ghar ja rahi thi tabhi yeh log aagye aur...". Guy:" listen stop crying, I hate those people who just always crying, I hate tears and emotions, these tears always make a person weak. Come I will drop u home I don't think so I have to give you a invitation card. Lets go". geet:"but.." Guy:" listen I am not here for all night so let's go otherwise I am going" the guy gets irritate with her non stop crying, guy said under his breath:" this girl will make me crazy she is not moving a bit from her place and then finally he shouts :" are coming or not because I am not going to tolerate this stupid attitude of yours So you better get hurry" geet gets more scared from his anger and looked at him with shocking face, he gets more irritate and hold her arm and took her to his jeep said:" now sit"geet quietly sit there guy:" finally thank god" he asked for her address and she gave him he droped her at home, geet didnt even get a chance to say thank you to him for saving her because he just drove off. Geet quickly set her clothes and everything because she didnt want to her parents to know anything. She went inside and saw her mum in the kitchen when her mum saw her and asked geet:" geet where were you you know I was so worried and your papa also". Geet:" mmhh huh mom where is dad" mum:"in the room you looks so tired wait you go to your room I will come there with a milk ok:". Geet:" huh ok". Mum:" wait geet what happened is anything wrong you are looking worried is every thing okay hhmmm" Geet:"yeah mom I am okay I am tired I am going to my room I am feeling sleepy". Mum:" okay go I will be there within a minute". Geet went to her room and went to bathroom and took a long bath and came outside and saw her mother with a milk Mum:" cmon geet now drink this milk". Geet quietly finish her milk and put her head on her mother's lap and said :"mom y papa and u are sending me so far away from u I don't want to leave u both please mom and she just start crying and her mother also had tears in her eyes and said: dear every daughter have to leave one day". Geet:" lekin itni dur kyun bejh raho mujhe" mum:"beta please stop crying you know I can't see tears in your eyes and you know today Dev's mum called us and said that thay want you and dev married quickly because that also have to go back to Canada so we all fixed your marrige next week" geet shocked:" what next week It's so early" mum:" I know dear but they want so me and ur papa couldn't say no to them now stop thinking and go to sleep" she kissed her forehead and left the room, geet thinks about all the day, this day was actually bad for her and that man first he saved her he helped her and then he talked to her so rudely how can someone be so rude but he saved my life from that goons I should said thank you to him anyways let it be. Geet drift off to sleep and praying for a good tomorrow, the other side that guy went home with his angry face, he was fighting with himself, why that girl is coming in his mind again and again why dammit why, I hate tears I hate emotions, Maan Singh Khuraana hates everything. The guy was maan Singh khuraana. Maan:" maan us ladki ko apne dimage se nikal de, sirf apna maqsad yaad rakh" he went to sleep with fighting himself over that girl. After five days wedding preparations were taking place like as haldi rasam and sangeet. All were very happy especially geet's dad he was very happy for his daughter geet. Geet was also happy, she get up and hug both her father and mother they both also hug her back tightly they were going to miss their daughter badly because they pampered her a lot and also loved her very much, they were sad because their geet is going so far away from them, her dad were crying more then her mom because he loved her too much but he never showed his love for his daughter but today he was crying his heart out and loving her daughter and telling him that how much he loved her, all three peoples were crying their heart out, after one day dev and his family arrived at geet house for wedding, every place were decorating with flowers and dev was sitting there in wedding attire after sometime geet came down stairs in fully bridal attire she was looking gorgeous just like angel all people ere praising her beauty here was lot of happiness in this house but the other side the maan Singh khuraana with full attitude searching for some one here and there, he thought there will be no use to searching here I should go back to Delhi now. He was about to leave when he got a Call from his accountant that he have to stay here for two days more maan gets very angry and said why then his accountant said there is a meeting with of this village panchayat and he said ok and asked when is meeting he said tomorrow sir and maan said ok and he cut the call. To the other side geet and dev get married both were happy but geet and her family didn't knew that their happiness will be ruined tomorrow because her marriage was a fake marriage and everything was just fake dev and his family came to geet house just for money because dev needed money and they all decided that they will get married dev to geet and after that they will take all her jewellery and runs from there but poor geet she was so much happy she didn't knew that her happiness will be no longer tomorrow her destiny played a big game with her which she was never expected, there was a time to bidaai of geet she was crying like a kid she never wanted to go from there her parents were also crying like hell and finally her bidaai took place and geet dev and his family reached hotel because they had flight next day that's why they stayed in hotel and took geet to her room which was decorated with flowers then dev entered and saw geet sitting on the bed with her face covered under her veil. He came there and sit beside geet and opened her veil and saw her blushing and beautiful face dev kissed her forehead and said:" aap buhat khubsurat lag rahe hai" geet shied dev turns off the light and they slept.

Precap:- Mom:- "leave from here geet just go away"


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Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part bt poor geet

hey y didnt u pmed me?
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Superb FF... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb part!
cont soon pleaseee
thanks for having most of the update in english
i really appreciate that!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update.

feel bad for geet

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