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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet z missing man . Her feeling in a poetic way.
Watching you from across the room
sends searing pain through my heart.
I think back to a year ago,
when I thought we'd never part.
My love for you just won't die down -
it just grows with each new day.
I wish you'd dare to look at me
and hear what I have to say;
"I love you and I want you back - "
but these words you just won't hear.
You don't seem to remember them -
all the memories I hold dear.
You were my first kiss, my first love
and now you don't even care.
How could you just blow it away?
We were the perfect pair.
you seem content to let me go
You're doing fine as you are,
while I'm still missing how we were.
We had the best love by far

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOOOW- just Awesooome! Thank for the post. You are a true poet ! Keep up the good work !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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keep up the good work...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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GOOD post and poetic lines
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful one.

yup geet is missing him..
until now,.,...she held her pain n tears..
but she finally broke into tears..seeing him walking away from her when she was in pain..ignoring her...this all made her sad...

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