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Originally posted by: sneha0504
Few things that I wish the current track to show and develop the story line in these lines...😊1.)Nandini is shown as a girl well atleast initially like she does not give two cents to the guys who mis -behaves with people around..2.)She can be shown to take advices from Adi, Pinky regarding work and knowing things in the office3.) She could get to know about Geet's struggle in Delhi during her initial days in Delhi through Adi and Pinky ..i.e like to stand up for herself in the office from various troubles flooding on her and still emerging as a winner.. Nanidini can take inspiration of her sister...Why in the name of developing a parallel track we get this.. we could definitely get parallel tracks whereDev is talking out something sensible to Daadima regarding his brother's situation.. and how could they help by staying behind...if I remember this is what he has told that he has staretd thinking about his family members too apart from himself.. I think he is thinking about starting his family-life again..than about his responsibilities towards his family.But we know that he just does the talking 😡We could also get Adi- Pinky subtle romance and cute gestures.. we could get some office scenes where people in MSK's office discuss various business related issues...Lucky can be shown a responsible brother and a responsible person rather than roaming around like a lost kid from his family and just eating and lazing around...Where are his promises gone to MSK that he is bada bhai and bada bhai pita samaan hote hain...Lucky could try to learn work from Adi atleast...How I really wished when a hand was shown on Dev at restaurant that it should be Nainatara...I really prayed that to happen...but nikla teen teen Dev aur hogaya satyanaash..😡
Bingooo👏👏👏,...very well written👏
CVs think that Parallel track = Love story...first they gave us nonsense AA-Love track and now Devini love track in the name of parallel tracks
What they fail to understand is other trivial issues can also b shown as parallel track here ...
Devini track can proceed with lot of maturity too rather than making it look like a college teen romance ...I would hv expected Dev to confess his past sins and then Nandu to dump her and then with NT coming ,mayb more drama added ..this also could hv been a good parallel track rather than watching Dev's 3D version trying to woo Nandu🤢
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