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sumaiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLO GUYS

BELOW YOU SEE 3 Different FFS..

In order

1. Uncharmed

2. Kahiin to Hoga

3. The Resident

I would like you to vote on which FF should be commenced from next week..

The remaining FFs.

1. Don't mess with me

2. Unknown Consequences...

Are still on going

But Unknown Consequences might end soon..x

So VOTE

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

UNCHARMED

Prologue

Maan walked into the room in anger. He turned to see Geet getting dressed for another day in the Khurana Mansion.

'I warned you not to go' Maan yelled at Geet. Geet turned to face him and said

'You no longer tell me what to do understood' Geet yelled back. Maan grabbed her shoulders and banged her aganist the wall and said hoarsley to her

'For God's sake Geet I'm trying to save you, protect you, I Love You'

Geet schoffed at his remark.

'Save me, yeah right, we both know why I'm here, I've read the prophercy, that the first child born by me and you together will be the most powerful being. You just need me so i can have your child' Maan grabbed Geet closer and store into her eyes.

'Let go of me your hurting me, haven't you hurt me enough' Geet said.

'Hurting you, Geet your hurting me, Can't you see how much I Love you, and the prophercy makes no difference to me, i just want you to love me'

'Love, Love, I loved the Maan who was a normal human being, I loved the Maan who was sweet and caring, I loved the Maan who was not a darklighter' Maan put his head down.

'Geet please listen nothing has changed, I still love you and i know you still love me otherwise you would have left me by now'

'Have you ever let me go?' Geet said.

'Geet its for your own good i can't protect you out there' Maan said.

'We both know why I'm not leaving. Its not because I love you, its because what happened to Meera, i don't want it to happen to Pari'

'so your trying to save your sister'

'yes thats why i'm here otherwise god knows what you would have done'

'Geet, please Pari is like a sister to me'

'Bull shit. your a darklighter, if you found Pari then you would have killed her. I'm only staying here with you for you so you don't hurt Pari'

Maan turned to leave the room then turned back and looked at Geet and asked

'Geet we were so much in love what happened to us' Maan asked. Geet looked at him and Maan at her and then Maan left the room.

'I still Love you Maan, but i can't let you ruin my family' Geet thought to herself.

CHARACTER SKETCH

Characters

1. Geet -An Angel

A Beautiful angel, who saves innocent people from death. She saves people who are going to be killed by evil demons and darklighters.She has so many powers as she is angel.

Day time job is that she is a cafe waitress

She falls in Love with Maan and her whole life changes.

2. Maan- A Darklighter

He kills innocents who are a threat to the Evil Demon leader. He kills witches and angels who are a threat to the evil in the world.

His latest assignment is Geet and he sets out to kill her. He has no mercy.

He falls in love with Geet and his life changes

3. Pari- Geet's sister and half Angel half witch

She is able to track locations of innocents. She can move things with her mind. She can freeze time. She helps Geet in her work. She is younger than Geet.

4. Meera- Geet sister, has no powers but the abiity to read minds and see who are evil beings and who are not.

5. Naina Devi-

Grandma of Geet Pari and Meera, whose death unlocked her granddaughters powers and showed them what powers and what duties they have

6. The Evil Leader,

He wants to take over the human world but finds it difficult due to angels and witches so he sends Maan to kill them his most trusted assiliant.

more characters to be introduced later

PART 1

THIS FF IS BASED IN UK!

Part 1

Somewhere in Manchester

'Meera' a voice said. A girl turned around. She was working in a busy call centre as the head office manager. She was wearing a white shirt with a black waist coat and and a short skirt. Her hair was tied back into a high pony. She was wearing black heels. She walked towards the person who called her.

'Yes James whats up?' She asked quickly as she had a lot of work today. 'Today' She said impatiently stamping her foot.

'Phone call its from St Mary Hospital in Paddington London' He replied as he handed the phone to her and walked away. Meera picked up the phone and then heard something that shocked her out of her wits.

'I'll be there' She said. She sprinted to her cabin grabbed her keys and phone and rushed out. Her staff was confused at what happened to there boss who was always joyful but strict with work. She stopped at the last office before leaving and quickly stepped in. Sitting there was one of her close friends Jenny.

'Jenny, an emergency has cropped up I have to leave can you take care of everything and lock up.' Meera asked swiftly. Jenny noticed tears in her eyes. She knew the only people who can make Meera weak is her family. 'Go' Jenny said softly putting a hand on her shoulder. Meera ran out to her car and started driving fast towards the M6 Motorway to Birmingham to get the other M40 motorway to London. 'I just hope everything is fine' Meera hoped as she drove like a mad woman down the motorway.

Somewhere in Birmingham

'now that's perfect' Geet said as she put finishing touches on her black forest gateau she made for the caf she worked in. Geet was one of the well known caf waitreses in Caf De Rouge. She put a smile on everyones face. She often sang songs for customers as well who praised her. She also often did cooking as well. Everyone was a fan of her food. Geet's dream was to one day open up her own restaurant and serve her dishes there. But since she still had one more year of University to go, she worked part time to pay for her expenses as she didn't want Meera to toll any trouble for her as Meera already took care of her fees. So Geet would take care of her own spenditure. Geet smiled as she took the cake out to the Mantlepiece placed it down.

'Now that is what you call pefection' Someone said from behind her. Geet turned around to see her best friend Karan. She had known Karan since she started University. They had been best friends since ages, 'Thanks Karuuu Saruuu '

'Geet please not that name again geetu peetu'

'Karannn don't'

'GEEET phone call for you line 2' Joe the owner of the caf said who treated Geet as a daughter. Karan went and sat down. Geet walked to the phone. She heard the other end. Her hand started shaking. Joe and Karan noticed. She dropped the phone.

'What happened Geet?' asked Karan.

'I need to go home back to London now'

'But Geet its night and the trains are on strike today'

'KARAN I DON'T CARE I WILL CATCH A FLIGHT FOR ALL I CARE MY FAMILY NEED ME' Geet shouted. Karan offered to drive her. Joe bid her farewell.

4 Hours later Meera arrived at the hospital. It was very busy. She went to the reception.

'Excuse me' she said. The receptionist was busy on the phone. She signalled to Meera to wait for one minute.

'NO I DON'T have a damn minute. Now you tell me right now where is Mrs Handa!' Meera screamed. Another nurse came running down the hall. She fired the receptionist.

'This is not how you do customer service. This is the 5^th time you been on a non official call your fire and you Miss Handa, come with me, your sisters Geet and Pari are already here'

Meera followed the nurse. Geet had arrived one hour earlier.

'Di' Pari said when she saw her. Geet and Meera hugged her. Meera stroked her grandmother's head.

'What happened' asked Meera who sat down with her sisters. Pari lay down on her sisters lap and Geet put her head on Meera's shoulder. For them Meera was the strongest. The best sister. The one who can keep the world afloat if she wished.

'I don't know, But Meera di, grams lied to us' Pari sniffed. Meera looked at her confused. 'what do you mean?'

'She suffered from 2 heart attacks. Those chest pains were causes of that. She lied to us that she was all right' Pari said. Pari being the only college going girl at 18 lived with her grandmother. Geet lived in a student accommodation in Birmingham and Meera worked at the head office in Manchester. Pari explained that Grams (there grandmother which they called her grams )had another stroke. Geet and Pari had fallen asleep.

'Grams please you have to get well' Meera sighed. The machine started bleeping. Grams was having trouble breathing. Meera ran to get the doctor. Pari and Geet had woken up.

'Grams Grams' Pari and Geet cried.

Grams tried to say 'danger, key, box' she said as she opened her fist. The machine died out. Grams had passed away. Pari and Geet and Meera cried. They had lost there grams.

The funeral was arranged two days later. Pari took the key. She wondered what grams meant. She went into grams room after the funeral. Meera and Geet were in the living room, Geet had decided to transfer her university here. Meera had been transferred to London as well. Geet and Meera didn't want to be alone anymore. They all needed eachother.

Meanwhile Pari walked in grams room. She had tears in her eyes. She then saw a box. The key matched the lock on the box. She opened it. Inside was a old book and a letter addressed to all 3 of them.

'Pari, I always knew you would be the one to snoop around my room and find this box and letter. ' Pari smiled and laughed and 'Grams you knew me well'

Girls, my precious girls. I tried all my life to keep you safe. Tried to keep you away from your destiny. But one cannot run from it. If your reading this letter, then it means I'm no longer here with you. Girls, you are not normal girls. Geet you are an angel. The most powerful angel ever. Pari, you are a half witch and half anger. And Meera my darling Meera, you are the strength. You are powerful in itself. Your life is now in danger as now I'm gone your protection is gone. You were protected by a motherly charm so that you could not be found. But alas its gone. You 3 are the worlds most powerful beings. You are there to save innocents and the world from evil. But mind you Evil will come looking for you and your powers, its your duties. Make me proud girls.

Grams.

Pari then opened a book which released there powers. 'Powers of the witches and angels rise calls across that reach the skies come to us and be near come to us and settle here' Pari read. As soon as she read it the whole house shaked. Geet and Meera were in bed. But a white pure light came over them and Pari and then vanished. There destiny had been sealed. A new fate awaited them.

In the other side of town a young witch was getting ready for bed. She just turned the lights off when she heard a noise. She walked towards the noise and was shocked.
He appeared in her room magically not a door nor a knock. With one swift movement and a wave of his hands he locked and boarded all the doors. Shaina a witch with the power to deflect (if someone tries to throw something at her she can put her hand up and it will not touch her and if anyone throws fireballs at her then the fireball will not touch her). Shaina turned scared and saw him standing in front of her.
'we can do this the hard way or the easy way' he another
'i call upon the ancient powers to remove the darklightet from our midst. He will be gone and will turn mist? Shaina said a spell.
'really a spell did you think that would work on me, come on Shaina I thought you were clever than that' he laughed
'Maan' she whispered. The most powerful darklighter. Shaina had read about him. He walked up to her calmly Shaina was rooted to her feet. He stood behind her and put one arm around her waist bringing her back to rest on his back. He took his athame out ( a knife to kill witches and take there powers) He traced the knife from her forehead to her stomach.
'please' she started
'please don't hurt me' he mocked. He laughed he kiss her neck and stabbed her.
'don't worry dying is not hard' He smirked and dissapeared.

UNDERWORLD

The Head Demon's office.

It was a horrible place to be. There were human parts in one corner. They were often used for the Head Demon dinner for organs were needed for demon spells. The Head demon lay at the bed One human girl was under him as the head demon made love to her. She was one of the human girls that the Head Demon captured.. She was a pure human girl originally but the Head Demon had lusted after her and lured her.The head demon would often seek out the best looking human girls to make love to and relish as he had most fun with human girls even though he had a sexy hot queen demon. The girl now was under his clutches. She was stuck there with no escape as the Head Demon made love to her. The head demon would keep the most purest girls with him and torture them with his love making. After which he would drink there blood as this made him stronger as pure blood always did. Love making with them was a hobby and he loved torturing the girls. He had just finished making love to the current girl and was about to drink her blood when a knock disturbed him.

'your lucky sweety, you have a few more seconds alive'

'Sir Maan is here' A minion said. The head demon looked at him and told him to make Maan wait. He walked up to the girl and said,'Now honey where were we?'. He said as he drank her blood. The blood gave him more strength. He then threw the girls body into the fire and walked out.

'So Maan all done' asked The head demon.

'yes Sir, and here is here power' Maan replied giving him a bright ball. 'Thank you Maan. That witch was killing to many demons. If we want to get a hold in the human world then these witches need to die' He said sitting down. 'Sir I understand' Maan smiled.

A telepathic voice then connected to the head demons. Maan wondered what was wrong.

'Maan' The head demon said.

'yes Sir,'

'New news. The old witch, Savitri Handa has popped the clogs. Her daughters have now got there powers. They are the most powerful beings in the world.' The head demon said.

'So what do we do?'

'well they only have come into there powers. I doubt they know anything. But two of the girls are not that powerful anyways. But its that girl.'

'what girl'

'MINION, bring the pictures' The head demon said.

The minion bought the photos. He saw the 3 girls. All were pretty. But one girl stood out the most. Maan looked at her and fell for her at the photo.

'This girl, Maan.' The head demon pointed to Geet photo.

'she is very powerful. She has a protection charm too. So since you are half human, you have to get close to her and then find a way to kill her. It has been said she will be the reason for our doom so work hard'

'yes Sir'

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

Kahiin to Hoga

PROLOGUE

With anger in her eyes she stood at the door step of Thakur Madhav. The two men conversing there stood up shocked. Madhav had a slight smirk on his face. The second man was standing there confused. She was wearing a green and red salwaar kameez her hair was opened. Maan who was standing there was gobsmacked by her beauty. But then he saw her anger and tears as she began to walk with determination to him. She slowly walked up to them and slapped Maan on his face.

'so your Maan Singh Khurana' She angrily said through her teeth. She raised her hand to slap him again when he held it. Madhav was a bit agitated seeing Maan's hand on the girl.

'Sir jee let her go. She not in her right state. Geet go home' Madhav quickly interrupted trying to ease the tention. He knew Geet was angry.

'No Madhav Ji, because of him my father died. His company built that dam. My father worked so hard and….' Geet started and fainted. Before she dropped on the floor Maan held her. Madhav was jealous as he was engaged to Geet. Maan looked at her in his arms like she was meant to be there. But then again no one had the guts to slap Maan Singh Khurana.

Madhav grabbed Geet from Maan and picked her up and took her into another room of the house. He came back to a fuming.

'Mr Madhav that girl, how dare she slap me? I came here on your insistence and she slapped me. I want to…'

'Maan Ji, maaf kardo. She is my fianc. She recently lost her father her only support. She blames you because he died at that dam.' Madhav said. 'don't worry I'll speak to her'

Maan left but for some reason he felt like there was more to the story. Geet father dying at the dam. No police record or related death of it. And if he did die then how? Where is the report.

Madhav walked into his room and smirked to himself 'kyun sasur ji, I told you I'll marry your daughter. She herself had agreed to marry me. You had to die for no reason'

Madhav then walked into Geet's room and fanned her face and ran his fingers down her face and arms and thought 'Geetanjali Handa soon your mine.'

CHARACTERS

Geetanjali Handa. 19 years old. She had just returned from the city finishing her education back to her village. They are a middle class family. She is sweet and bubbly and loves the whole village. She is the epitome of innocence and beauty.

Mohinder Handa: father of Geet Handa. A school Teacher by profession. He is the wisdom and the wise man.

Naintara Handa: Step Sister of Mohinder. Money greedy. Really rude to Geet.

Madhav Thakur: Richest man in the village. At age 26. Obsessed about Geet. (Works with Naintara to get Geet)

Maan Singh Khurana: MD of Khurana Constructions. Cold Ruthless not to mess with person. Wants perfection.

Savitri Khurana: Maan dadima

Vicky Khurana: Younger brother of Maan. Really sweet.

Part 1

VILLAGE

A young girl was walking down the streets of her village with a bunch of flowers. She was smelling them and smiling. Her duppata was flying in the air with her hair opened. She saw some children playing and joined them in there games when she heard a voice.

'Geet betiya, your father is waiting for you' An middle aged uncle who was one of the habitants of the village and the milkman for the village called her.

'Ji kaka I'm leaving now' She wished the kids goodbye. And started to walk home.

She was walking slowly in her own world when a jeep stopped right infront of her. Out stepped the Thakur Madhav. The richest man in the village. He was the youngest Thakur in the village. Everyone looked up to him as he was the leader of the village. He was seen as a god. He jumped out of his Jeep and smirked at Geet.

'Rasta rokne ka matlab' asked Geet annoyed. She hated Madhav a lot. Madhav was obsessed with her and her beauty. He would be hook or crook marry her.

'I'm only stopping my to be wife' He said as he stood infront of her. 'You don't seem to have time for me'

'wife.. in your dreams. That will never happen neither I nor papa will allow it and I don't have time for cheap people like you'

Geet smiled fakely and then moved around him to go home when he held her hand.

'I didn't say you could leave' He stated. Geet was his and he owned her. She turned to him and slapped him hard.

'Ainda se yeh yaad rakna ke mera rasta mat rokna' She said furiously as she walked off. Madhav stood there fuming.

'Whatever happens Geet, you will be mine and I will make sure of that. So what if your father says no. I have power in this village. Just a few more days Geetanjali Handa, you will be Mrs Geetanjali Handa Thakur' He smiled as he rode off in his jeep.

DELHI : KHURANA OFFICE

A young handsome man started walking through the lobby of his office towards his cabin. His staff meekly greeted him which he ignored. He sat in his office and called for Adi and Sasha

'Adi Sasha, what is this the dam in the village, I have had letters from Mohinder Handa from that village that the dam was not built properly. There is a risk of flooding and people dying'

'Sir, we don't know. The company which supplied the materials was a different one recommended by the Thakur himself'

'hmm I think I shall have to go there myself' Maan said as he got up.

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

The Resident

PROLOGUE

I am running, as fast as i can, he is right behind me. I don't know where to go. The whole house is locked. The windows have been boarded up. I can still hear the rain drops on the window pane. The whole house is dark with only one light. I keep running trying everydoor. He is walking slowly towards me. His slow footsteps telling me how close he is. I run to the edge of the hall way and find a set of stairs. He see's me decending. He speeds up his walk. He yells

'You can run but you can't hide'

I'm so scared so scared what will happen if he finds me. He knows that I know that there is no escape. He has planed everything clearly. Doors's shut. Windows boarded. I run down the stairs and i notice a door. The door has light day light on the other side. Without wasting any time i run towards it. I feel relief, that my life is going to be saved, I am out of this horrific odeal. But as soon as I'm nearly there i trip over a stool. It hurts, the pain in my leg is too much it hurts so much. But i get up, limping towards the door. I reach the door and touch the door knob, when i am held by the waist from behind my back. I feel myself going weak. The door is fading. I realised he has drugged me or something.

I then wake up, my eyes are blindfolded. I feel cold air on my skin. My hands are tied. I realise I'm naked. I hear the door open. I still have no clue who my assiliant is. I have no idea who this person is and what and why has he brought me here.

I plead with him 'please let me go' He hears nothing. I hear him unbuckle his belt. I feel frightened as i am aware of what is going to happen next. But what he does horrifies me. I feel a cold metal aganist my skin. I realise its a knife. He places the blade of the knife near my arm. I feel a pain. Blood gushes out. I cry in pain, He then licks my blood my arm. I feel his warm tongue. He does the same to my other arm. He follows the same routine on my legs. He then does a small cut on my hips and licks and kisses the blood there. I hear a noise. I realise he has put the knife down. He held my legs apart. The next thing i realise, is a pain in my lower body. I realise, he has entered me and is making love to me. He picks up the knife again. I am dying in fright. He makes love aggresively to me. I want him to stop. I am in so much pain. After a while, he seems satisfied. He lets me go. He then moves away. I feel him dressing me up. I am fully covered with clothes again. He then slaps me hard and yells

'I told you I warned you but you never listen'

'And then, then what happens' asked another voice in the room.

'I wake up scared frightened from the dream. I mean like Doctor, what is this, I have this same terriyfying dream nearly everyday, of me being tortured by an unknown man'

'Geet I think its your vivid imagination, or maybe a movie or a past event that may be similar'

'but doctor you known me my whole life, I've never watched a scary movie, and never anything remotely similar has happened you know me doctor, i mean bua'

'Geet I know but there is another explanation'

'which is'

'That maybe its a premonition of your future I mean there is no proof or scientific evidence but it has known to occur that reoccuring dreams could be a premonition'

'No Bua, Why would that happen to me, I mean look at our family, there me mum dad, you Deepak your son and then there that stupid neighbour of ours not so beautiful manju aunty. And then we have my marriage fixed with Dev as well in the future. My life is so perfect and full of life. you guys love me so much that i have never seen bad ness or evil in the world'

'I know Geet, but next week you and Meera are going alone to Delhi from chandigarth. Dev will be coming a week later with Yash. Your stepping out into the world alone for the first time.'

'I know bua chill, I'm Geet, nothing can happen to me. I'm not going to be alone Adi bhaiya and Pinky bhabhi are in Delhi too. I'm only going to do my internship'

'yeah but Geet what is this, you want to live on your own not with adi and pinky'

'Buaaa, the company Khurana Constructions are giving all interns a apartment to stay. I'm not alone. Meera is next to me. And then Dev and Vicky will be on the other boys floor so nothing going to happen. I'm simply a resident for a small while there maximum 6 months. Then my degree is finished by completion of internship. Then we are back and I finally marry that idiot Dev'

'Geet, well okay then'

Meanwhile, In Delhi Maan Singh Khurana awoke from sleep. He was the owner of Khurana Constructions. He had worked so hard to make his company the best in India and the 4th best in the world. He had everything in his life planned except one thing which was marriage. His grandma wanted him to get married. Even his cousin Dev was getting married to Geet. He had breakfsat made small talk with his grandma. He read the newspaper which had news of markets stocks and shares. He also read other news such as political news. He saw another news that some well known girls are missing and there are some girls bodies found. He was disgusted that people are dying missing and no one does anything. He then sighed and left to Khurana Constructions. He knew in one week new interns are going to arrive then he called Sasha to his cabin to give details of the new internship.

That evening, in another secluded hut far away from both the above areas, was a man angered by his truth being revelealed to Anjum. Anjum loved this man so much. She had doubts on him. But she knew him for 10 years.

'Please'

'Please what Anjum, you were about to tell my family everything werent you'

'No I swear I wasn't. please you need medical help, I know you didnt hurt these girls intentionally'

'Intentionally, I did. You know why' He grabbed her by the hair and took her to a number of ICE COFFINS. It was freezing cold.

'Look she has the perfect hair,' He dragged her to another coffin 'She has the perfect skin'

'She has the perfect nose' And so on.

'These girls have some perfection about them. Thats why they are here, I froze them so there perfection does not wither with age and time'

'What about the other girls you killed??'

'They were horrible. As in they had no deceny. If girls have no decency then they should not live.' The man said, turning to Anjum. But Anjum had run to the door. The man laughed and locked the door with a button at his fingertips.

'Please' She turned around and said to him as he walked towards her. 'I love you' She said. He laughed and said to her

'I know you do Anjum, but i never saw you in that way. You were just my best friend for last 10 years. But seeing that you are my friend and all and you do love me let me do you a favour'. He picked her up and took her to a dark room. He tied her hands with chains to the metal bed post.

'This is your new home from now on... when i feel thirsty I'll come to you. And look the chains long enough. to reach the bathroom shower, and that small kitchen. And here there a tv for you as well so you don't get bored.'

'Please don't do this let me go give me my life back'

'so what you can take mine away'

'please i beg you'

'okay i promise i will let you go but let me quench my thrist first'

'meaning,'

'if you want me to let you go, you have to let me make love to you'

Anjum opened eyes in shock.

'Think love and set free or...'

'Okay'

'wow your a great friend' He then made love to her in the most aggressive way. Anjum cried in pain. After he had finished he let her go.

'Can I leave now' Anjum asked meekly.

'What set you free?'

'Yes'

'Off course why not' He came close to her and then Anjum thought she saw something in his arms and realised it was an injection with nothing in it. Air bubbles she thought. Anjum was studying to be a doctor and she realised that Air bubbles in the blood system via injection can cause immediate death.

'Please no please no'

'stay still this won't hurt a bit'

'No please '

'Your going to be a special ice coffin for being the most perfect friend'

'you promised you will set me free'

'and i am from this life'

With that he injected her. Anjum struggled and then died. The man picked her up washed her body. And then froze her in an ice coffin. He then put flowers around the ice coffin and with ice he wrote best friend and moulded that on to her coffin.

'will miss you Anjum'

He said as he left the room...

CHARACTER SKETCH

The Handa Family (Mostly taken from Saasural Genda phool)

'Hi I'm Geet. I'm 21 ive just finished my couse in Architecture. I am a sweet loud bubly girl. I will always fight for my rights. I love myself and my family the most. I love being modern but i love being traditional too. You know papa likes me to be traditional at home. So let me introduce you to my family. Waitt my over protective, lovable jovious and amazing family should i say so lets start with number 1 who is...

1. Bari Ma.Shaila. age 45

A sweet lady, always cares for her children. Her favourite is her daughter in law Suhana and niece Geet. she is really sweet. There is nothing wrong about her. She loves everyone dearly. A perfect woman. A house wife

2. Bari papa Rudre

A man who is over protective of his family. He is ACP of the police. He loves his family a lot. He is a sweet person always caring. He always is strict but is caring attitude. However he had passed away due to cancer.

3. Mum.. (Rano) 42

Geet's mother. Over emotional always crying over little things good or bad. really sweet. loves her children a lot.

4. Dad.. (Alok) 43

Geet's father.. A protective father strict at times. He has to be strict as he now runs the household. He cares for his whole family. He loves Geet a lot.

5. Inder Bhaiya...26

He is such a sweet brother. Love him a lot. He is Bari Ma son. Him and Elesh Bhaiya and Ishaan Bhaiya is a trio.. when they are together they are not double but triple trouble. He is my eldest brother. Always there for me.. and overprotective.. He loves me a lot. He for his father works as a ACP. MAybe thats why is is protective. But he jokes around a lot.

6. Rajni Bhabhi.. Inder bhaiya wife.. 25

She is so sweet and an amazing cook. no one can cook better than her. Inder bhiya and Rajni bhabhi have an amazing jori.. they are amazing.

7. Elesh Bhaiya.24.(barima son) Dnt even ask about him. He is so dopey.. And always does wrong things. He gets told off by papa all the time. He is Bari ma son.. But he is the joker of the family.. last time he got in trouble for well .. he ate Ishaan bhaiya ras malai that radha bua kept for him seperate. he is always hungry and steals and does silly things.. But i love him and he loves me too.he has a job no not as a clown but as a bank manager

8. Disha Bhabhi Elesh bhaiya wife..24

A wonderful bhabhi and another amazing cook.. She and Rajni bhabhi and Suhana.. wait i should say bhabhi na. have amazing bonding.. with me as well. we are the fantastic four..

9. Ishaan Bhaiya..23

He is soo innocent so naive but he loves me a lot. He works in an office. He always gets picked on by my other brothers. But Ishaan is the brother i am closet with and can share anything with.

10. Suhana Bhabhi.. age 22 Ishaan wife...

My best friend since we were kids.. Suhana is so loud and Ishaan is so quiet.. I have no idea how they fell in love!!! But love happens right.. so it happened.. She is my best friend and we love eachtoher a lot.. She knows my whole life.

11. Radha Bua..age 38 my bua my lovely bua.. I can share problems with her all the time in confidentiality especially medical probles why because she is a doctor and she knows how my family will over react... (Radha bua does not have a husband as he passed away when i was really small i dnt even know his name but no one talks about him)

12. Deepak.. age 20...my youngest brother.. He still is at college.. He is so like me.. he is best friends with vicky.. He also gets teased by my older brothers.. I am protective of him especially from that Manju aunty our neighbour who wnats to marry her daughter babli to my brother.. No i'm his sister and me and Suhana have decided to find him a bride.. and guess what.. we already have someone in mind

13. Dadaji.. 64 Hamari Shah Jahan.. the desi Romeo. loves his mumtaz... juliet a lot

He is a wonderful grandfather. love him a lot. and he loves his mumtaz a lot.. Still at this age.. love is still alive and kicking

14. Dadima... 62... Hamari Mumtaz desi juliet.. Loves dadaji a lot.. But both still argue

15. Meeti.. Meet the darling of the family, my niece Meeti age 5.. Rajni bhabhi and Inder bhaiya son.. So cute so amazing i love her..

And meet my neighbour

16. Manju Anuty... Me and Suhana have daily argumetns with her.. She is NOT BEAUTIFUL let me tell you now

17 Babli.. her daughter.. does anyone name there daughter in town babli ? And she wnats to marry deepak NO WAY..

18. Meera age 20.. Same as well my close friend after Suhana.. and she is younger than me but.. u know it works right we met in uni .. She started education early i started late.. But we are good friends and i have a match for her in deepak

Vicky age 21.. Don't know what he does all day besides tags along with Dev.. I mean how am i meant to have a decent convo with Dev without him cropping up.// he is coming Delhi with us.. he a close friend of Dev but sort of friend of mine dnt know him that well.. He is a flirt but still no girls give him a chance maybe he might find someone in delhi

Meet my fiance Dev..22

19. he has been my close friend after Suhana since we were kids.. Our parents saw this as a perfect rishta and decided why not.. Dev was fine so was i.. and now we are engaged.. Suhana Dev and me..

21. Naina . Dev mum a wonderful aunty and will be a wonderful MIL

22. Daksh.. Dev's dad..

So you meet all my friends and family.. So here is where I leave you and meet you on 20th May and part 1..

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Hi I'm Maan. I'm 25. I am a no nonsense kind of guy. I hate girls because they cheat. Maybe not all girls do. But they are weak. They always need someone. I don't like to display emotions they make you weak. I am a work aholic the only things that happen or matter in my life is my work my dadi and my sister.

Anjali age 20.. my wonderful sister opposite to me.. She loves to have fun hang around but she is serious. She is studying to be a doctor.. I am over protective of her.

Dadima.63

My only support my mother father guide all in one. She has brought us and Khurana constructions up.. ever since my father and mother died. One thing i hate about her she wnats me to get married. NO not happenong Dadima..

So you met my family

i have a few best friends and close friends

Karan.24. He is not serious about life but does make an effort and makes me smile at times when i do/

Anjum..22 She is a wonderful woman. She is a detective i salute her for what she does

Adi he works with me.. He loves Pinky but he has not told her yet.. He is so scared.. he needs to talk up be loud

Rohit..24.. He thinks i need to chill out.. chill out what does that mean..

And Pinky..22 she is anjali best firned and like a sister to me.. But she is sweet and is full of life.

Part 1

Amritsar Handa House.

'Hurry up, Geet is coming' yelled Ishaan. The house was chaotic. Geet had gone for a one month cruise with her friends after her college. The family now knew that Geet is on her way home. When and where and how she will come? That was always a surprise. She might come today, or tommorow or next week.

'yeh ladki bi na,' Bari ma said as she was helping Rano in the kitchen making Geet's favourite food.

'Liken didi, if Geet doen't come today' asked Rano. Barima looked at her and smiled. 'Rano Geet ko tu janti hai. wo kabi bi tapaq parti hai'. They then here a crash outside the kitchen. Rano and Barima run out. They see Ilesh on the floor and a broken set of cups. Disha is looking at him angrily. Rajni and Inder looked at eachother and then at Iilesh. Suhana and Ishaan looked at the mess and rolled there eyes.

'Phir se Illesh' asked Radha bua.

'Dekha, appne. yeh Illesh ka bacha. Pata nahi aisa kaam kyun karta hai' Inder annoyed with the mess.

'forget all this. Geet didi will be here soon and we still havent sorted her room out' said Deepak walking in with 3 shopping bags. Suhana ran to help in.

'Deepak your my favourite Devar' Suhana pulled his cheeks. Everyone again went rushing and started cleaning. Illesh was told to sit in a corner and not to do or say anything. Dadaji and Dadima came in and saw everyone working hard.

'whats happening' asked Dadima

'Geet is coming' yelled Rajni cleaning the house.

'aacha thats why everyone is running scared' said Dadaji.

'Geet is coming, Its the best news ever' Dadiji exclaimed.

Meanwhile, in Delhi, Geet had just boarded a train back to her Amritsar. She had just said goodby to all her college friends and promised to see them soon. she smiled as she thought about her family members. 'I'm sure that Suhana and Ishaan bhaiya and Deepak are ordering the whole family' Geet smiled as she looked at the photo of her family and smiled with a tear drop out of her eye.

Handa House

'Papajiii, We are so dead. Geet hates that colour' Suhana frowned with worry on her head. She rubbed her temple. She grabbed the pain and threw it out the window. She didn't realise where it landed. She didn't care. All she cared was about her friend. She grabbed the purple paint and started painting the walls. Alok helped her. They finally finished.

'INDER BHAIYA Not like that, like this. God this is Geet we are talking about my best sister. She doesn't like to sleep facing the wind' Ishaan yelled as she gave orders to Inder who with the help of Deepak was rearranging the room.

'Rajni bhabhiii Disha Bhabhi, please come here. These guys are uselss take over and sort the curtains bedsheets out' Suhana yelled.

Train

Geet smiled and looked at the photo's and thought

'I bet by now some mishap must have occured' Geet smiled.

Amritsar Handa house.

Rano and Barima and Radha bua had just finished cooking when they heard a very familar but annoying voice.

'INDER KI MAA ISHAAN KI MA' Manju aunty had come. She had paint all over her. All the residents came running into the hall. Suhana started laughing. Everyone tried to tell her to be quiet.

'Manju aunty, what sort of make up is this? you should have asked me. This is no fashion sense' Suhana laughed at Manju. Ishaan pleaded with her to be quiet.

'waa bhai waa Look Rano look at your daugher in law. How she is badmouthing me. I'm guessing that because of her the paint is on me. I was walking on this beautiful street and this paint fell on my beaitiful face'

'Beautiful, have you ever seen a mirror. A mirrir never lies. Your brainless and ugly' Suhana yelled.

'Dekha ishaan, Suhana on my face is badmouthing me'

'Nahi Manju Aunty. Im not badmouthing you, I've insulted you' Suhana smiled in victory.

'Suhana please be quiet.' said Rajni. 'Manju aunty please go and get cleaned up. Geet is coming' said Disha. Manju eyes widened.

'Geet is coming, I'm going' Manju ran out. Geet and Suhana together were trouble for Manju and hence she ran away.

The rest of the morning went in preparation for Geet's arrival.

AMRITSAR Station

Geet got off the train. She breathed and took in the air of Amritsar. Her home town. She was back to be with her family. A coolie came up to her.

'Didi apka samaan' Geet smiled at him. It was a pulley back. She didn't need any coolie.

'Bhaiya no need. But here you go' Geet gave him 100rs. He smiled and blessed her. As she was walking, She knocked into someone. He dropped his phone and a file. She looked up and the guy looked at her.

'I'm really really sorry i wasn't watching where i was going' Geet said. She picked up his file and phone and gave it to him.

'I'm really sorry again. I hope your phone is fine' Geet asked apologetically.

The guy checked his phone. 'yes it is thank you Miss'

'Geet, anyways nice meeting you Mr I have to run' Geet smiled and ran out. The guy watched her as he saw her help a old woman find a seat. and then a blind man cross the street. He followed her and saw her play football with a little while with the kids on the roads. He then saw her put her hand on her temple in worry and saw her run into a nearby taxi.

'Beauty with innocence he whispered'

Meanwhile, outside Amritsar hotel, a business man emerged from the building. He walked into his car. He was on the phone talking to a delegate. He asked the driver to start driving as he spoke to some.

'Yes tell your boss, that if the contract is not carried out, Then Maan Singh Khurana knows how to deal with traitors and frauds' This person, was a hot business tycoon with a high sense of morality.

'Driver how long'

'Sir will take 2 hours'

'Okay' Maan said as he took out a laptop.

Geet jumped off at the mandir. She told the taxi driver to wait. He smiled at her. Geer ran up the mandir and prayed and thanked god for her life and everything she has. She walked down the stairs when a woman stopped her.

'Jii' asked Geet smiling. The woman reached for her hand. She inspected her hand and said

'your life partner will meet you today, This taweez bind it on him' She gave the taweez to Geet. Geet was confused She met her life partner when she was a child and he was Dev. Then. She didn't want to throw the taweez away so she put it in her side bag. She then sat in the taxi.

The taxi driver was actually a kidnapper of beautiful girls and would sell them to highest bidders of the trade. He called someone. Geet who was busy in her own world didn't know what was going on.

'Hello, yes I've got one. Perfect no scratch nothing. Come on more than that. not less than 2 lakhs then you can have the girl' Geet looked at him. He had a weird smile on his face. The guy then took a turning.

'Bhaiya ji, this is the wrong way we were meant to go left'

'your not going anywhere' Geet looked at him in shock. She grabbed her small pulley which was next to her on the seat and her handbag was over her shoulder. and jumped out of the car. The taxi driver saw what Geet did and stopped the car. His men were 2 meters away and saw her escaping. Geet started running with her bag but it was too heavy to pull so she threw it on the ground. And ran. She then saw a car in the distance. She screamed for help as she ran.

Maan's car had broken down. There was nothing nearby. He decided to sit in the jungle and catch up with some work when he saw a girl running towards him. He saw some hooligans after her. He picked up a knife. Geet ran into him and bashed into him as she tripped over a rock. Maan steadied her. She didnt realise the taweez had gone around his neck. He did not either. She saw the guys behind her and then

'please help me please help me' She thens saw the knife in Maan's hand and then fainted.

Maan then had a confrontation with the guys. The guys then ran off. Scared as they saw Maan aim the knife at one guy and thew the knife past one of the guys face which landed at the guys left on the tree a bare miss. The driver helped as well. Maan then attempted to wake Geet up. He told the driver to get some water. He walked to his work area to gather it up when Geet awoke. She saw him and hit him over the head.

'So your the leader of that gang huh, lets see how you touch me' Geet screamed at the man with a stick in her hand. He was busy rubbing his head.

'aah what?' He asked confused.

'I'm not scared of you, let me tell you I have a blackbelt in karate' Geet showed her moves. Maan just smiled at her antics. Not only was she innocent and cute but she was headstrong and damn beautiful.

'Are you mad? My head' He cried out in pain on his knees.

'Your head, I've only hit you on the head, next i'll hit you where it hurts if you try to touch me again' Geet said raising the stick above his head.

'Are you mad?' He asked again looking at the fiery girl standing over him whlist he was crouched down on the floor. Just then a car arrived. The man who was Maan's driver got out.

'Sab ji,' The driver exclaimed 'are you alright' He went to see him. Maan yelled in pain. The driver got up and stood infront of Geet.

'What are you doing?' He asked confused at her.

'oh so your also part of the gang! Should i give you one as well?' Geet threatened with the stick near the driver's face.

'wow your amazing, sabji saved you from those goons and this is how you repay him' The driver explained the facts to Geet. Realisation hit Geet as she widened and then squinted her eyes. She dropped the stick on the floor.

'Kya' She meekily stated. Maan looked at her amused at her expression. From a tigress to a mouse in mere minutes. 'You saved me from the goons' She asked looking at Maan. He gave a annoyed look which showed how irratated he was and got up.

'Yes, I did a big mistake that i saved you' He said pointing at her irratated. 'Now someone save me from her' He told to the driver. Guilt then hit Geet.

'woh I'm sorry' Geet fumbled with words. Maan just looked to the other side. 'I hope it didn't hurt. Maan looked at her amused. He doned a sarcastic smile

'You hit me with a stick and then ask if it hurt. Of couse it didn't why would it hurt me' He said sarcastically. Geet looked at him guiltily and lost and then Maan screamed at her

'Paagal hogayi ho, off course it bloody hurts' He said touching his head again.

Geet fumbled and didn't know what to say and she stated what she thought

'you had a knife in your hand and i thought you were the leader of those goons' Geet looked at him with hope that he will forgive her.

He looked at her and walked up to her annoyed and stated

'from what angle do i look like a goon?' Geet looked at him from up and down and then said

'Urm yeah its true.But the point is that even goons do fashion now adays and so i thought' She said and then picked up a bottle of water and asked him to drink it. He looked at her irratated.

'Leave me alone please, I was in the middle of an important phonecall and you you' he threateningly pointed at her. Geet gulped.

'Come on lets go' He said to the driver. The driver looked at Geet and asked

'sir what about her' He turned around and looked at her. She looked hopeful

'is there a mental institution nearby we will drop her there' He replied sarcastically smiling at her.

Geet's mouth turned into an 'O' She then deserved that.

'Okay i said i'm sorry what else should i do? fall to your feet' She asked.

'You know i wouldn't mind' He smiled at her. Geet looked at him shocked.

'urhh just please drop me at the taxi stand I will go home from there' Then realisation hit Geet.

'My money my bags oh my god' Maan looked at her amused. 'Kya ladki hai' He thought

'Excuse me where my stuff' She asked poking Maan.

'How am i meant to know' He asked.

'Oh great, the goons have it. If you had to save me could you not save me with my stuff?' Geet asked.

'Oh I've had it. I;m going my way you go your way and pray we never meet again' He went and sat in his car and gestured the driver to come.

'If you want to come then come other wise just stand there' He told her. Geet reluntantly got in the car.

Maan then dropped her home. 'Pray we never meet again' He said.

'Like i would want to' Geet rolled her eyes. Maan smirked. As Geet walked away.

'hmm beauty with spirit' He said as he and the driver drove off.

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

i love the uncharmed one...i fact i loved watching charmed...so i really like this one...i wished geet had the power of freezing...neva mind...kz am loving it...plzzz start the uncharmed one...n plz add me to ur pm list...