mg os-recovering from their loss.update.pg 2

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GUYS THIS OS IS WRITTEN BY MY FRIEND ANVESHA...SHE DOESNT HAVE AN IF ACCOUNT SO I AM POSTING IT FROM MY ACCOUNT.ILL FORWARD ALL UR FEEDBACK AND COMMENTS TO HER...

RECOVERING FROM THEIR LOSS
Note ' I m writing it after geet's miscarriage. There is no dev, and maan never had any accident.

It has been over a month since geet had her miscarriage, she is in depression. Maan tried everything to bring her back to life but all went in vain. There was no improvement in her condition so dr. suggested change of place. Hence currently maan and geet r in Mauritius in a beach house which maan owns. Its their 2nd day in Mauritius and maan kept on trying to distract her but no use. Maan being man of less words kept trying to talk to her but she never gave any response.
That evening maan was searching for geet but she was no where in the house, his heart beating fast in fear just then he saw her heading towards the ocean. Water already crossed her waist and she kept on heading towards it. Seeing this maan ran towards her shook her in fear and anger "GEET GEET ye tum kya ker rahi ho" this brought her back to reality and then only she realized she was about to drown. She didn't said anything jst tear falling from her eyes. The mere thought of anything happening to his geet filled Maan with anger which soon was replaced by anger. His patience gave up and he shouted GEET tumhe kya lagta hai mujay humare bacchae ko khone ka dukh nhi hai, magar main vo dukh kabhi dikha nhi saka janti ho kyun tumhari wajha se ' soochta tha agar main kamzor pad gaya toh tumhe kaise sambhalunga. Lekin tumhe uski koi firk nhi tum sirf aapne bare main soch rahi ho apne dukh k bare main .. tumhe meri koi firk nhi hai ' kabhi socha ki mujh per kya ghuzarati hogi tumhe iss haal main dekh ker ' nahi na".

After saying all this he left frm the place. Here when maan left geet realized that how much pain he must have gone through. She was remembering how much he was attached to the baby. She remembered his reaction when they saw their baby for the 1st time and all other moments .. This made her upset now ans she started searching for him but he was no where in the house " dekha vo mujsay itne naraj hai ki bina bataye hi chale gaye. Per geet galti teri hi hai, tu itni swarthy kaise ho sakti hai. Tu apne dukh k aage unko kaise bhool gayi, ye kaise bhool gayi ki unhe kitni taklik ho rahi hogi'.."

AFTER 5 hours '.
Maan came back to home, he was guilty for being rude to her and was thinking of how to say sorry to her. When he entered the house it was pitch dark, there was a table lying in center decorated with candles and there lay a note "maan aap ghar k peeche wale beach main aa jaiye AAPKI GEET"
He went to the beach and was surprised to c it decorated with candle and a table set for 2.
Just then he saw geet coming in beautiful red saree and once again fell in love with her'.


Precap .. Geet said sumthing which maan never thought his shy wife would say ever '''




THIS IS PART ONE...PART TWO WUD BE COMING SOON...😊
next part..pg 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update..
looking forward 2 reading the nxt part..i wonder what geet said??
update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great ...gud one...but not 2 much of storyline is revealed...so cant say anything...😃😃😃😃😃😃...plz continue...😳😳😳

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I liked the Start it is good & refreshing . 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely.. cont soon:)
waiting eagerly for the next part
Ankita:)
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hey its cool ... do continue ... and pm me too

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part 2..enjoy!!!!!

Maan saw geet and was mesmerized by her beauty. He headed towards her, for few seconds he was not able to speak anything but then geet brought him back to reality saying "maan". Coming back to reality maan remembered what he has to say "geet I m sorry. Maine gusse main…." But was interrupted by geet who suddenly brought her hand on his mouth "nhi maan mafi toh mujay aapse mangni chahiye … main aapne dukh k aage aapka dukh aapki takleef sab bhool gayi thi ….. maine ye bhi nhi socha ki maujy iss haal main dekh ker aap per kya ghuzarati hogi …." By now she was in tears and could see intense pain in maan's eyes too "maan aap bhi usi takleef se ghuzre hain, per kabhi use dikha nhi saake andar hi andar ghutae rahe … mujay maaf kerdijiye maan."

Now maan very gently removed geet hand from his mouth "geet mujay maaf kerdo maine tumse iss tarah se baat ki …. geet main janta hu ki ye aasan nhi hai per hume age badna hoga .. humare bacche ko toh main kho hi chukka hun per ab tumhe nhi khona chahta .. itni himmat nhi hai mujmay. Tumhare bina mera koi wajood nhi hai." Geet holding maan's hand said " haan maan hume aage badna hoga .. main aapke saath jeena chahti hun .. hum anpi zindagi ki shurwat fir se kerenge" ….. with that maan and geet hugged each other .. strengthening each other, consoling each other …. After few moments maan said "muajy bahut bhook lagi hai .. kuch khilaogi ya aisehi bhooka rakhne ka irada hai" in response to this geet playfully hit maan and then wiping her tears took him to the table she has already set .. they had their dinner in silence both looking deep in each others eyes promising a new life for each other.


Now it has been a week since then and geet has recovered a lot rather she is back to normal .. within this week maan and geet not only came more close but they enjoyed themselves a lot … they went for shopping, explored whole Mauritius, saw corals, played in the beach with sand and waves … maan taught geet to make Italian while geet taught him to cook Indian.
It was the evening of 7th day when maan told geet that he has to go to Cape Town for two days he asked geet to company him but she denied and he didn't forced her.
Next morning maan left and it was only afternoon and geet was missing him real bad but she did not called him as she was not willing to disturb him. All this while she was thinking of all the moments with maan .. when suddenly she remembered the time after wedding when he was running away from her and she trying to seduce him it was then she realized about his needs his desires. It was not that she didn't want him but right now she was thinking about him only him .. " vo humesha apne se phele mere barre main sochte hain, per ukni zarrorato ka kya, ukni bhi toh kuch icchae hongi uska kya, vo shayad kabhi aapne bare main nhi sochegay per mujay toh unke bare main socha chahiye"
And sumthing came to her mind which made her blush heavily………..



Precap .. Geet said sumthing which maan never thought his shy wife would say ever
Sry guys bt its remains the same as it was becoming too lengthy

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey update soon

and send me pm
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Originally posted by: piya27

hey update soon


and send me pm

😊..will try n pm...
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continue soon. plz add me to ur pm list

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