AMAVAS MAANEET part 12/pg 21 14TH July

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@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

awesome story dear...

happend to read all parts
loved it

Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

fabulous ss . the way u wrote is awesome . being a girl i cannot forget if man who loves me do these dreadful thing . pyar dikhane ka tareeka cannot be imagined . mere sab rongete khade ho gaye hai when i read those scenes so imagine what she must have suffered . can maan will erase thaose painful moments no na???,so , happy ending to banta hi nahi . even though he is remorsing but uski saza geet jab degi .

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

beautifully written.
ok as for ur question
I have dual mind
first may be it's not easy
it's very tough
but any one want to repent whole heatedly then one chance may be he .
I never support what maan done but it's like u can give happy ending but before that maan should repent and geet should give punishment for his deed.
at the end when maan prove his love, his worth for geet then u can give happy ending
at the end of the day it's ur choice

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

I never read the actual story but can understand
and yes reality is different
but when u already wrote a sad one make this happy one
just little suggestion nothing more
sorry If offend u.

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SIYAHI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
I never read the actual story but can understand
and yes reality is different
but when u already wrote a sad one make this happy one
just little suggestion nothing more
sorry If offend u.

Thanks dear this will be happy one...the sad one made lot cry i will not make anyone cry

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: DILIBADAAT

Thanks dear this will be happy one...the sad one made lot cry i will not make anyone cry

thanks dear and welcome dear
grt , I'll wait for update.
oh ok give me the link of sad one also want to read that also and here happy one

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SIYAHI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

thanks dear and welcome dear
grt , I'll wait for update.
oh ok give me the link of sad one also want to read that also and here happy one

actually i have pulled the sad one out as it is getting published 😊

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@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

i love happy endings...
bcoz life cant be wht we think... its always hard thts why we dream for happiness...

fictions r to make impossible.. possible... i am sorry for the girl who died...but in fiction u can change ones fate which is impossible in reality../
n hence i prefer happy endings rest ur wish

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

nice part...Maan is seeking forgiveness from Geet...
he has realised his mistakes and paap so maybe Geet forgive him and give him a second chance...
the original one was so sad...i dont like sad endings...so make this one a happy ending one dear...