New FF ideas! VOTE now = ) UPD: Page 12 IMPORTANT - Page 7

Heyyy.
I really liked both of the ideas. But, if I have to choose only one then it would be 'The Courtesan'. It just sounded a bit more better. And please do write the other on too!
~Jassi

i liked numero dos. aka number 2. lol

both are awesome...😍

OMG NO WAYYY!!! ARE YOU FOR REAL??? AAAH!!!!

*Saz busts out with Moonwalk-Bhangra-Moonwalk-Bhangra*

YOU FREAKIN-RIDICULOUSLY-INSANELY-BLOODY OUTSTANDINGLY-BREATHTAKING WRITER!! SAMMY... YOU'RE ACTUALLY GIVING US MORE OF YOUR AMAZINGNESS?? WOOOH!!! This is Actually so crazily exciting!

About Time too mate!

UFF!! I'm loving them both already but don't worry, I'll vote for one 😉 in bold letters tooo! 😆


OK, I have to admit Sammy, the opening to The Courtesan is a tad more fantastically written. Like many, I've actually been so in awe of your writing ever since Irrevocably Yours of course. Again, you've showed your skill with words, detail and painting in the opening to T.C. my friend - you create images so awesomely, and you write exactly the stuff I love to read. The Courtesan is written SO freakin wonderfully! It's SO intriguing - heck the title had me wanting to scroll down to it, and then scroll all over the writing with my mouse too - sucha demented perv right..? I fell in love with every word you've written!

When I read the title, first thing that came to mind was... Surprisingly not Devdas and his Chandramukhi + that ugly dude with the fat mustache who loses the bet to her, and never ends up wearing the fat-belled-"ghungroo"(supersized-anklets)! I was waiting the entire film wondering when that creepy looking guy was gonna do some "maar daala" steps.. never happened but... oh well! Where was I Sam???

Oh of course - the FIRST thing that came to mind was the movie Dangerous Beauty (It's brilliant). It's set in Venice, based on a real life courtesan (methinks anyway). It is sad in places, but baby check this out... it surprisingly had a HAPPY SHMAPPY ending So, DO watch it! Although the title reminded me of that, what happened in your writing did not - the opening to the story is just wow! I can imagine everything so vividly, I love every detail and I can't wait for you to continue it!

Coming to the first one... The Gangster's Mistress - want a bit of honesty? I knew from the title's that I'd be going for this one 😆. I'm a sucker for "dangerous" Maan. He's just mega hot like that... his arrogance in the second one was brilliant too cos it was just like his character. Even though I prefer the style of the other one, I'm biased towards the Maan in this one.. 😳 The characters tickle my fancy a tad more - I'm in love with both the concepts, so it ultimately, (shamefully) came down to Maan. It's not like you won't write both, it's a matter of what one we want to read First right? Well DEFO I'd LOVE for you to write this one first...!

I know a simple vote is all you care for right now, but please. Let me have my say lol. The Courtesan has hints of a sad life for Geet, not that The Gangster's Mistress doesn't make me consider what on earth musta caused Maan to become a criminal but yeah... all I know is, they've both got a haunting CREEPy side to it and I'm working out which one shall disturb me less, and what Maan will be like, and what Maaneet's relationship will be like. I can't help but imagine it to turn into something profound in them both, you LOVE writing depressing stuff dont ya lol so... lets go with something I can only assume won't hurt me too much 😆

Now I'm annoyed and wished I didn't write out my thoughts, cos I feel like changing my mind... 😕 but then I wanna stick to it. Oh, I will leave my vote as it is! I don't even mind whichever you start first cos they're both by YOU which means they'll undoubtedly be addictive, loveable and just So Damn Exciting!

Write fast!! And ohh... Sammy... I think you deserve a "Worlds Most Hilarious Chic" cos you're just too funny. TOO TOO FUNNY! Yeah your writing sure deals with ridiculously heartwrenching themes, but girl... you can make a person laugh as bad as you make them cry!

Let me end this comment on Damon. *SNAP* Even I have the biggest crush on Damon but do Not watch Vampire Diaries... that man is crazy sexy, and the only vampire I can ever fall in love with. What can I say Twilight books / movies / pale Edward are just not for me - but Damon, oh bring on that yumminess!! Love him. and... LOVE YOU!! xxx

A Fat P.S.
Yo, what happened to writing a master slave style ff on Maaneet - I'm sure I've put it a little more than bluntly than what the concept initially was but yeah... King Maan? Where'd ya throw that concept away too?? I did NOT just imagine it. . . .

hope you get writing sooon!!!

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If I hadn't known you for soo long I would think you only wrote depressing tales but first impressions count so I always remember the way your FF used to have me in fits of laughter to begin with before it became a tear jerker in the end

I can't believe you aren't watching TVD omg Sammy, your missing out on special damon moments of magic 😡😆

I prefered the Courtesan, I liked Geet's attitude with the coin incident and can't wait to see how Maan falls in love with her

WT* my comment looks long 😕

I AM VERY SORRY. IGNORE. AND FOCUS ON BOLD LETTERS.


*Excuse my blabber mouth too*.

Beautiful writing in both ff openings love 😊


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if possible continue both😊
liked the second one more...

OMG yay ur gonna write another ff... ahh im dyin with happiness now lol 😆 i wud luv 2 read both but since ur asking which 1 to start first i'll go with the Gangster's Mistress cuz it looks pretty cool and i wud luv 2 c geet stalking maan "THE GANGSTER" lol... both the ideas were pretty good & refreshing but i am eager 2 read the gangsters mistress.. Plz start it soon...i cnt wait 2 read it.. 😍 & THANK U for starting a new FF... 😃