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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
I hope you realise that writing another chapter for both of them has made me even more confused!! Lol

I gotta rush and get some revision done so apologies for the short comment but I think I'll go with 'The Courtesan'. Although I won't be disappointed if you choose to write either of them :)
Thank you for bearing with us and our indecisiveness! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Hey but chapters are really good but.., i still pick The Gangsters Mistress (:

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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
can you please continue this voting process till eternity and actually complete both the stories in the mean time...🤣😉

i have never been so confused in my life...😕


so bracing myself...i announce..." the courtesan"...😊

both the parts were lovely...please give it a thought if you could manage both...😃

love you...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_



OMG! It's SAZ. *Samira does a belly dance around Saz whilst she's busy doing her moonwalk-bhangra-moonwalk-bhangra dance*. My dear lover, did I ever mention how much I love your use of slang and formal language whilst praising me. 🤣

Alright someone hold me! I feel as if a gigantic rock is about to explode from my butt! I cannot breathe. Your so bloody funny! 🤣 You waited for the ugly pedofile mustache man whose mustache almost covered his entire face to break into a maar dala dance sequence? 🤣🤣🤣 A penny for your thoughts woman!

Okay so I haven't watched the movie 'Dangerous Beauty' but the title sounds compelling enough. 😳 I might youtube the trailer before renting the movie out. ROFL. Saz, did you purposely include the hidden message that the movie has a happy ending, so that I should encourage mine to conclude happily also? 🤣 I swear, from all the praise I assumed you were going to choose 'The Courtesan' but my darling, you are always filled with surprises.

I had this GUT instinct (funny that I mentioned gut, since we have a known relationship of having our butts threatened to be blown off from all the hysterical laughter) THAT you will like 'The Gangsters Mistress'. Do not ask why or how, I just have a 'Saz Sixth Sense'. OMG I just used the technique 'assonance' 🤣. Brings me back to the good old high school days 🤢. Yes I'm attracted to the dangerous side. I have a thing for 'bad boys' 😍.

Oh god I love you! You literally had me in tears whilst reading the comment. You claim that I am funny? *Brings a mirror* Look into it! You are sooo hilarious! *clutches flying butt again* 🤣.

Hmm let me end this long comment with a nod of my head. I agree, Edwards paleness and wacko scientist hair did not settle well with me. Oh his cheesy lines make me puke in remembrance. Damon all the way baby!

PS. I threw the King and slave concept away because I realized that I needed to do historical research to be more specific and accurate with the dates. 🤣 The notion of having to STUDY for a FF, turned me off. Completely. 😆

Thank you for your super awesome comment !
xoxoxoxox

oh...
now after reading both ffs i like both of them
plus the one were geet marries maan and finds out he's gay
so as u told me to pick one
i will pick
The Gangster's Mistress
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
OH MY GOOODDD😲😲😲😲😲
SAMMMYYY I HATE YOU!!!!😡😡😡😡😡
😭😭😭😭 I can't choose between the two!!!!


I totally like how the The Gangeter's Mistress is going...😉😃 Bad boy Maan and it seems Geet's character is going to be hilarious!!! 🤣
Yet on the other hand i like The Courtesan because i like a story with a girl who's got a sad life 😭 and then a rich handsomde dude, *cough*Maan*cough* comes in and practically saves her...🤣
WHHHYYY SAMMMY! WHYYY *sobs harshly* 😭😭😭😭
*heads moves from one story to the other, like watching a tennis match* Maybe eenie meenie moe? *eenie,meenie, minie moe...ermm...hows the rest of the rhyme go? chado forget that! 🤣🤣🤣
I just...have to go with...The Gangster's Mistress!!!! 😃
NO WAIT!!!
The courtesan! 😃
NO! the Gangsters Mistress😃...no... the courtesan 😕...no the gangsters mistress 😕...ah crap I'm doomed...😕😕😕
Have I told you lately, I hate you for your freaking brilliance??? 😡😭🤣🤣🤣
Is there any possible way you can write both at the same time?

You'd make everyone HAPPYYY!!! including moi! 😉 🤣🤣🤣
And btw girl...Damon and Elena...😉 its getting intense in that aspect...*whistle innocently* 🤣
*EDITED*
Final decision...The Gangter's Mistress!!!! 😃
And then afterwards...The Courtesan!


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Okay seriously though...

The Gangster's Mistress...I keep re-reading the first chapters you posted for each FF...and I can't wait for the next chapter for this story more then the next chapter for The Courtesan...😳
Edited by Zee89-Maneetfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
sorry double post! 😳
Edited by Zee89-Maneetfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Okay Samira...If u want only one name to begin an FF...I'll stick with THE GANGSTER'S MISTRESS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
heyyaaa...*waving maniacally*
nah u don't know me so don't bother checking her friend list or racking your memory.regarding me,,,,🤣

so now getting down to introductions<yes i do introduce myself whether someone want/like it or not>
my name is richa *okay now i am feeling like a 1st grader*
n i am kind of your secret admirer...🤣😳
okay now dnt worry i am not going to propose you or something...i am straight and desperately in wait<if u notice.if rhymes with straight😎> of my maan ,armaan,luke<step up 3D>, edward, and all the romantic and breathtakingly characters that exist. <sigh>
so when i say i am your secret admirer i mean to say i am hopelessely in love with your writing abilities...so much so that i even read all your OS <my point here that though they all were highly depressing and sad> and cried too <yes in all three of them, thankfully irrevocably your and the devil and the wallpaper had surprisingly a happy ending otherwise i would have accused you for my depressed state which would have finally leaded me to a psychologist and then parents would have barred me to use internet etc etc...oh sorry i got bit distracted there ...anyways finishing with my introduction speech lets move on to the real purpose *rubs her hand*

okay...first of all both are great ,how i wish you write both of them <dreams off for a while>
<comes back> but i know that won't be happening<why why why!!😭>
so my vote goes to...THE COURTESAN...
now i am not going to give you a detailed report of why i like this one <dn worry itz not because it not worth analysing or something it just that i am almost disabled at analysing anything...my analytical intelligence sucks!!> just that i like its feel a tad bit more ...though i wouldn't mind even if you choose to write the gangster's mistress...😳


but whichever you choose to write plz plz plz <yes i am almost begging on my knees> continue soon...


Edited by richiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
The gangster's mistress 🤣🤣🤣 I dunno... i just find it more inviting this time 🤣 Oh god... it is so hard to choose 😳 I'll go with any one you begin with... but i like the gangster's mistress 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now... I m so confused... But if u had to choose go 4r concept- 2 plz.

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