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she's broken into a million little pieces...the final blow has made her crumble to such a state that even she doesn't know how to put things back together again...she is stuck on pain...and she builds a wall around her...high enough so that even the "wanted" intruder doesn't get in...he's broken with out her...he'd throw a rope around the moon and bring it down to her...if it meant that she would shine bright for him again...he'll hurt himself..he'll make his body feel the pain he caused her...if that meant that it would take her pain away...but they're both in pain...they are just not whole with out the other...and they will continue to hurt until they put the pieces of their love together again...he won't let go even if she struggles to break away...for he wont let go of the air he breaths..."if you hurt, i hurt"...they both cry out in the end...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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o my my lovely.......wonderful.......touchingšŸ‘
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wow...so short but so poignant.....šŸ‘šŸ‘..how can u express soo much using just a few words...!!
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lovely dear love ur indirect analysis
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Sargeanttttttttttttttt <3!
You've done it again!! Loved the last line .. it really sums it up .. they cry together in pain .. because they're both in pain ..
Even if they're at two different ends of this world .. they'd experience pain together as they are connected .. bound into one soul!
Loved it as usual :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yet again, lovely piece of writing!
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lovely one dear 😊
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So Beautiful Syl......You've put so wonderfully....the pain and anguish both are going through!
Though she is in pain.......she is aware of his pain too and prays for his safety......that is the beauty of their love!
Love you for bringing it to us in such lovely words!šŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: mgdg_2010

o my my lovely.......wonderful.......touchingšŸ‘

i'm glad you liked it ren...thanks!
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Originally posted by: eveline

wow...so short but so poignant.....šŸ‘šŸ‘..how can u express soo much using just a few words...!!

i was actually a little scared because this is one of the longest pieces i've written...šŸ˜† ...i'm glad you liked it...

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