SoulMates to PlayMates! O.o yeS! ;) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thk u all.. ill comment to each if i get my lapy bk.. thks Jyo n geets..

patni me ill look out for ur reply.. bye all.. n thks agn for reading.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A love not ideal,
A worship not perfect
I am myself, and you are yourself
And yet- we become HUM..together-in every sense
KISS KISS ne hume saath ya alag karne ki koshish nahi kari
CON CON successful hua?
NONE- haan! Maan ki hui Geet aur Geet ka hua Maan
Always together in soul...and tonight together in bodies


I'm you Geet..and here are my feelings...
Hold on tight patidev....your patnidevi is going to reply!

Originally posted by: mi7chimes



O.o yeS yes its an O. S.
😆


Two different humans,

humans coz they choose to worship eachother..

(gods donot worship, toh mayb 'em selves),

two different individuals,

two different personae,

with ofc a different set of ek head, ek naak, ek muh,

do aankhein, do kaan, do haath and do leggies...

but one in soul.

Yes tey r indeed SOUL MATES!!

evidently more tightly bound than by Fevi Bond..

they are glued by destiny, passion, affection,

lust, spontaneity, respect, trust, togetherness,

guarantee, and most importantly love..


all for ETERNITY or as tey say till death do 'em apart!


So its more than just destiny, that their union of body

ill break all that is law!



now hold urself tight coz its Practically Their S. R.☺️



Back home after some late hours,
piled away amidst work tours,
a promise i could not keep,
to whom, i now have to sweep!

Greeted by blunt silence,
with nonchalance i could sense,
in eyes that swiftly turned away at once,
unlike otherwise, when held in mutual trance!

I slid my arms across her waist, bare,
in as warm an embrace i could steer.
But with sweat slithering down my mane,
she turned stone in cold, in disdain!

I withdrew, though not in defeat,
as her smile i shall never forfeit.
Placing by her side a single red rose,
i headed for the showers, a quick douse!

Gelid, as it hailed on my torso,
my thoughts were cornered now,
as she left me again, to mull over her beauty
that was beneath her skin, i could see!

Shrugging out, slipping into my pyjamas,
timidly soaking up i appeared myself! alas!
as she lay in pretence i am sure, aloof
i chose to not tread over the roof!

Humid, though with an arid hue
a sturdy sneeze was in queue
Her eyes unable to delude anymore
petrified like by the spell, like never before!

Drifting across to halt in a starkly polished poise,
with warm allure evident in those deep eyes,
she rumbled over my neglect of self,
and attended, as to an elf!

My senses soon ran berserk,
unable to comprehend, the stroke!
as her little twigs wandered down my physique,
as i urged for that sixth one, like a psyche!

Be a man, came a hasty cue
and i pawed to wipe the dew!
with her eagerly tapping at will,
a zealous greeting, pacing up the hill!

Together, we played into the night,
a blissful glint in the moonlight!
and as we wrapped up empty by the shade
every peck flashing past, a promise was made!

- Maan Singh Khurana

-Ress~ 😳






Late late, yet again.
how many hours I have spent waiting in vain
you come all hot and bothered
and expect me to hug and love you without pother

A lovely rose he left for his rose,
and went to take a cool soak
I waited for him to come back..
of course, I pretended to be asleep and slack

And then he came, all wet and hot,
oh how could I delude myself or him of my stomach in a knot
He came close, and I went closer
Unable to move my eyes, unable to resist

I went to him then, and called him to me,
he complied and I treated him nicely
our hands entwined and our lips
we became one and took an ecstatic trip

we laughed and played the entire night
with intense love and playful delight
every breath was music to the lovers
every kiss a promise made forever

Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haan patni i am still here.. Holding u tight and waiting.. Btw patnidevi 🤣

edit: u wrote..😲 Patni u r fast! Lol.. I had kept u waiting so long 48hrs i took to pen it down .. But u in reply.. I love u..
Btw tell me what promise..? Lemme hear how u read me..
Edited by mi7chimes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A promise of a lifetime...
a promise of love
a promise to trust and cherish each other
a promise to protect, to hold me forever
Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Excuse me but I'm sitting here with my mouth wide open!
That was absolutely amazing!!!! 👏
The language, the rythm, the feelings were so beautifully combined. And you rhymed all the way through!!! Wow!
It was such a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us all! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic 👏Res and Geetu 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

A promise of a lifetime...

a promise of love
a promise to trust and cherish each other
a promise to protect, to hold me forever



A promise to wake up in those very arms!☺️ 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Too good Res 😃 , loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Doc !!!! 😲

U completely shocked me... As if i dont u at all... where was all this hidden or it coming bcos of ur upcoming recent happenings 😉 Haan !!!!!!!!!

Awesomeness... 😍Gal.. keep it up...
Edited by purvimeh - 14 years ago
mi7chimes thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: purvimeh

Doc !!!! 😲


U completely shocked me... As if i dont u at all... where was all this hidden or it coming bcos of ur upcoming recent happenings 😉 Haan !!!!!!!!!

Awesomeness... 😍Gal.. keep it up...



pooooo itna shock math ho... agar kuch husa toh.. treatment toh mujhe hi karni hai na... 🤣 n yea u know me well enf.. n i am the same... this is just random 😆 n has nothing to do with anything in the past or present or for tat matter future... related to any living or NE character! HAAN!!🤣🤣🤣

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