New FF- Tanhai--Chapter 1 Pg 4(updt 9th Mar'11)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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First up abt my earlier short story well i wrote the entire remaining stuff but my document was lost and i seriously didnt have the energy to write it out again so planning to drop it for now ...and most of the readers ne how must have forgotten abt itšŸ˜†......Coming to this one ......Well it is a FF for starts ...and we'll see how it shapes up and the kind of feedback i receive will matter 😈...As for updates ...well u'll get one every weekend for sure .....



Prologue

A man in his late thirties came out of the black Mercedes as it came to a halt in the porch of the JW Marriott Hotel

,Sir You are finally here 'I thought u wudnt make it in time

Adi ' U know how the Mumbai traffic '.. 'said the man only to be interrupted by his driver( a reasonably old man)

Humare hote hue Maan baba kahin late pahunche'yeh nahi ho sakta Adi Saab'

Pls kaka 'aap kabhi nahin manenege yun sabke samne to mujhe baba na kaha Karen ,,,,2 yrs and I will turn 40 '..38 yrs old ko baba kaun kehta hai--------Maan said with a faint smile

Main jab tak zinda hoon aap mere liye Maan baba hi rahenge 'said the old man as he made his way to the driving seat

Sir 'lets go '.said Adi

Adi and Maan started to make their way thru the packed hotel lobby '.to be occasionally no rather quite frequently be interrupted by one media person or the other asking Maan some questions or the other

Sir ,One question pls '.Sir 'Are u happy being Maan 'the writer or was living as Maan Singh Khurana better?

The expressions on Maan's face hardened 'and Adi noticed the often seen discomfort when someone tried to intrude into his past

Sorry ..no questions will be answered '.pls ask this when the question time starts at the end of the ceremony '. Said Adi

Adi took Maan by his hand 'Sir , I think we need to head in here '..he said cheerfully '..Sir ,cmon u can atleast smile a bit today ''u are being honored as Maan ''yr book is a bestseller and today CM Deshmukh has asked all to gather in yr honor

Adi , someone shud learn exaggeration from u really '.u r making me sound like Shakespeare or something '.really u and kaka always ready to massage my king size ego '.said Maan giving Adi a half smile

The Ball room was beautifully set including the stage '.and Maan and Adi were asked to seat themselves in the front row .Majority of the guests were already in 'and the others were making their way in

After abt 10 mins 'the host for the evening arrived '.she began by welcoming all those present and then began calling on stage the dignitaries for the evening

Ladies and gentlemen '..Our first guest for the evening the honorable CM Mr Deshmukh and his Wife Mrs Deshmukh, State Minister for Culture Mr Rane and last but not the least definitely the Owner of Khurana Industries our sponsors for the evening Mrs Geet Dev Singh Khurana

Maan froze in his seat for a sec hearing her name ..Adi u never told me this was being sponsored by KI '.he said 'though his eyes were invariably fixed on her as she made her way up the stage stairs to take her seat .She was there right before him 'clad in a salwar suit with the Dupatta covering her head ''.like always

Believe me Sir I didn't know 'else I wud have told or wud have made an excuse but Sir now that we r here we cant make a fuss specially when Mr Deshmukh is arnd'..said Adi

But Adi '.said Maan

Sir Pls 'this event is in yr honor 'how can u possibly leave mid way 'what will I say 'said Adi

I don't know u got me here so its yr ''.Maan was interrupted with the hostess announcing'..

And Ladies and Gentlemen now pls put yr hands together for the author of the best selling and Award winning Novel '''Life Beyond''.Mr Maan'.Can we pls have u on stage Sir

Maan was zapped 'and Adi begged him to go 'and finally he started to walk towards the stage '..each step weighing a hundred pounds ''and each pound squashing his heart a million times '.

Once on stage ...the CM came forward to greet him but even when he shook hands his eyes travelled beyond to where she was '.and time froze as their eyes met all over again and the feeling was similar to the one he had felt a decade ago''''''.



Let me know ...what u guys feel abt this one 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome šŸ˜›..... maan is writer (something new)...... y is geet dev singh khurana😭......(even if she is dont make dev be alive)....... can she just be geet?😳 .......... well let see how story progress......... do PM me šŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mrs. Geet dev singh khurana?????? Hope dev is not alive.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow interesting so Geet married to Dev & Maan is author let see how yu unfold the mystery pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn pls do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice .... am curious ...

but i seriously hope that Dev is dead .... 😈

add me to the pm list

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome intro.
maan is writer n geet is married to dev.
cant wait to read more.
do continue plz.
add me to yr pm list.
thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hammad and Iman....awwwwwšŸ˜...sorries got distracted with your avi...it's beautiful..
Geet dev singh khurana...she is married with the jerk...
well we don't know if he is one in ur FF...
Will be waitng for more....superb start
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

awesome šŸ˜›..... maan is writer (something new)...... y is geet dev singh khurana😭......(even if she is dont make dev be alive)....... can she just be geet?😳 .......... well let see how story progress......... do PM me šŸ˜›

I agree...........plz make dev as dead.........& Dev and geet's marriage a mistake or an accidental affair................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply awesome start...
plzz add me to PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Komalika- Thank you and u want Dev to be dead ...well all i can say wait and watch ........

@Aditi- Dev is not alive ...well all i can say wait n watch ...it abt Maaneet after all

@sharmake- Thankyou

@sindu- Thankyou

@shah10-Thank you

@ansah-yesssssssssssssss maddy and Iman šŸ˜.........my current favs...n thankyou for the comment

@9stroneserials- Wait n watchšŸ˜†


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