Harlequin romance Vs Motorcycle Dude (OS)

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ok...i just read this crappy M&B recently so I can understand Maan's emotions...

Geet was right in hiding the novel wasnt she?

The left handed thing was pretty funny. ;)

good work again

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imshveta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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In the Madhuri Dixit way , ' pErFECT'

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sri_4
Good to see ur OS so soon Sookie
Loved it as usual..😃
Though i have no idea about Harlequin romance and now i don't want to know after googling it..😆

One; Geet was just not any other woman.Two; Geet was definitely not any other woman to fall for his random charm.Three; Geet was left handed. 🤣
That's not true", he recovered fast."What? Knowing the woman you are hitting on is a lefty or a righty?"🤣

"Okay, let me correct my statement. Every straight woman, that is.""I am straight. I rarely hunch my back."🤣
"So who do you like?""The likes of you"😳😍
U know what i like in Maan n geet..even after they scold..fight with eachother..throw tantrums like kids..atlast they both know eachother so well at the end n they sort it out....which makes them perfect mis-match..😆☺️
Sri:-)

Yeah! I am on a roll. Only because I had some time on my hands last night :-) And nothing else to watch 😆 It's kind of fun writing this stuff since all this is based has a tiny shred of reality in them. They are mostly conversations which happen at work.

Thanks for the comment!!

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jasw

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanks for the PM, Sookie! Good one!

I have full sympathies with Geet! I still have this hobby and my hubby always raises his eyebrows! He raised it higher when I told him I used to read it concurrently with Thermodynamics in my college days! After all it also deals with heat, energy and mechanical work! 😛

Fantasy and Reality can go hand in hand!😊

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome....................this Maan and Geet are so very interesting and not once u leave me unhappy.......................thanks for the pm...............

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -afsha-
That was fab
geet n her antiques

It looks lik she is the boss n Maan is her worker hehehehehe

I jus loved it

Thank you afsha! :-)

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ninand
hilarious to boot.. ! harlequin romances.. ohyeah.. i remember.. though I would ascertain that I do not look at the cover art 😆... used to tell me in exactly two-words words what I am about to read and fantasize about- B**sh**... 😆

Its hilarious again, how tightly wound hes around her little finger... its like sitting and reading an A.G.Gardner all by yourself on a lazy afternoon, chuckling and talking to the book, about the simplest whims and habits, looking around to share a chuckle but then , not really..😃

its intriguing how far gone hes into his fantastic world.. conversations-unto-conversations about her, with her, nudges me to think if in your mind they ever so conventionally meet...

Your OS'es bout them seem more dreamlike than one is lead to believe.. love them.

ps: thanks for the pm.

😊 I felt real nice when I read this comment. But why do you find these dreamlike? Cause most of the conversations are taken very much from real life. 😆I work with bunch of whack jobs who work like their chair is on fire and have eccentric tastes in movies, music and books.

But yeah, I do see your point. The comfort that the two seem to exert is almost dreamlike which is practically non-existent in media now. Or so I think :-)

Thanks for wonderful comment. See you soon with new one :D

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

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This is brilliant Sookie !!!!!
...totally hilarious and calm so relaxing !
You write on such abstract thoughts and they are awesome...the conversation you spun
take you to a different world and its so amazing..the way you've portrayed the
relationship between these two !

I'm at short of words.....but in short it was wonderful :)
Keep writing you are one of those writers whose writing I enjoy a lot 😊

Take Care,
-Fatima

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

😊 I felt real nice when I read this comment. But why do you find these dreamlike? Cause most of the conversations are taken very much from real life. 😆I work with bunch of whack jobs who work like their chair is on fire and have eccentric tastes in movies, music and books.

But yeah, I do see your point. The comfort that the two seem to exert is almost dreamlike which is practically non-existent in media now. Or so I think :-)

Thanks for wonderful comment. See you soon with new one :D

The reason for this being dream like is simple actually. These are your excerpts from real life, yes... but you learned them from a bunch of people.

In your ffs , like I said, Maan is constantly in a state of wonderment, albeit unknowingly most of the times, as he goes on discovering Miss Handa, who's in a perpetual state of obliviousness to an enamored Maan.

Their incidents are least affected by outside factors... infact in an environment quite ideal for leisurely contemplation of the simple and the whimsical.

I assure you even I am in love with Miss handa, but you show blatantly and in a better way thru your OS'es😆.. He only marvels at her antics, sniggers at her naivete, plays mischief, quells his dislikes/irritations of her many habits, spins stories and lies through his teeth😆...

Even between two people as congruent to your characters as possible , a thread as unobligingly connected yet consciously non-existent cannot remain for long... cuz every single incident cannot be gratifying or indulgent.

Maan is in a very comfortable state and both have not been shown grappling with any complex emotions... in terms of equilibrium in Chemistry- its a closed state.

and,umm... like a newspaper comic strip... maybe Blondie(nowhere close but thats the only couple I can think of right now😆)

got carried away, and dont even know if I got my point across😆

lts just that I dont see you taking Maan Geet through an entire FF, from beginning to an end.

thats why its dreamlike.

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago