Devil's Den: Dev ke liye Mandir banwayenge, Haan! - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
@Jyo go ahead, I would love to listen what positive spin you can put on this one😍😆

@Shonuu...kafi sara cake khaya kya, too much sugar will do that to you😆

@Medha....you are right SARCASTIC -R-US welcomes Setfree😆

@Setfree...dude, you wooed the MOd🤓Oh Boy! I remember😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Pixie..
Perfect analysis with perfect touch of logic..👏 and fun...😆
@Shreyaa...
you said it....
Annie is ladki ke naam pe dabba🤢
@Zee...
Sridev's dance 😆
@rest of all..
me too loved that sponge-sister scen...😉
and the way Maan showed his hatred towards Dev...👏
it was lovely to see Geet was feeding Maan and treating him like a kid...😳
Manisha-Romeo was refreshing...😃
And disliked AA scene...😡
Lastly me liked the epi...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
what nagin dance ru guys talking about?
Shomu happy birthday to your niece, shouldn't you be spoiling her?
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Posted: 14 years ago
jyo m waiting for ur take...
n hw come u asking to post?😳
BINDAAS post kar...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here is my take...a serious one...trying to balance out some important issues today😊

Before doing my normal Episode take...I just want to mention few points which r hindering the progress of the story despite getting a promising promo😊

1)AA-Track👎🏼...CVs should now get this fix in their head that Arjun-Annie track is NOT working whether they introduce Manav or Nitya....its going in circles and nobody is really interested to see their so called peppy love story especially after Arjun slept with Annie🤢...A girl going gaga behind a guy who first slept with her and then even blackmailed her is giving absolutely ridiculous message to the viewers which is one of the strong reasons why this track is not working👎🏼..And their scenes merged in betweeen Maaneet scenes r breaking the flow of the episode
2)Pregnency track which is standstill since 10-11 months now without any progress...this is somewhere is diluting the Maaneet romance and whenever we see a track like accident ,question always arises about logic since Geet is shown pregnent with a flat tummy since 11 months now...ok if we take cinematic liberty and count the months as per TV Calendar even then its almost 8 months now but her tummy is still flat....They cannot hv CON because of complications but she can travel in bus and trucks and can also take so much pressure and tension in her mind regarding various issues does not make any sense anymore😳
3)Making Mockery of Justice is another weak point which sometimes hinder the basic plot..like for example...Dev and NT hv gone scotfree and Dev even gets to romance Meera as his consolation prize after screwing up Geet's life./..and now Arjun first sleeps with Annie to get his revenge but the same Annie goes gaga over the man and tries to win him again😕 and if that was not enough then another chick is coming to romance....But Maaneet r always suppose to suffer because they r the main leads na😕...
4)Unclosed loops and parallel tracks which r questionable...there r several unclosed loops which r yet to b closed but I doubt whether the writers even remember their own creation properly🤔...People r still waiting to see MSK ka past related to Sameera...People r still waiting to see Vicky's existence in the show....People r still waiting to Khurana family ka history regarding Dev-MSK as real or step siblings...People r still waiting to see Geet getting justice and Dev-NT going behind bars....People r still waiting to see Sasha getting exposed in front of MSK....Instead of solving these issues we get a Arjun-Annie non-existent track out of nowhere...Why ?If parallel tracks were needed then why can't CVs utilise the likes of Adi-Pinky romance or bring Vicky-Sam in the picture who were already introduced in MSK's talks to Dadi when the series started...Why CVs need to bring aliens like Annie out of nowhere as parallel track ??...
Hmmm so these r the problems which need to b wiped off asap and we get our GHSP series back on track😊
Now coming to today's Episode...it was not bad..what made the episode look bad was the unwanted interruption coming from Arjun-Annie ka track
Story moved today because we get to see Geet's self-talk and dilemma regarding Dev's secret and she discusses it with Dadi👍🏼...yes we might complain that whole episode she was just thinking about Dev ka issue and going with the guilt..but think about it...if we din't get to see this guilt or self-talk coming from Geet,then we viewers would hv complained saying where is Geet's self-talk,...why she is not telling the truth to MSK...what is stopping her from telling the truth...So CVs today fully justified why Geet will hide it from MSK...its because Dadi wants Geet to hide this fact and she is putting extreme pressure on Geet which was clearly shown in today's episode😊...So the purpose of today's episode was to show the reason why Geet will b hiding this fact from MSK....They also showed MSK's extreme anger related to Dev's name to justify the future track where MSK's insecurities will come out....So story moved from Geet as well as MSK's POV.....Only if AA-Track was not put in between,we would hv grasped it more😊...
Things which I liked today r...
  • Maan-Geet scenes were cute...the way she pulls his cheek and feeds him soup were very cute😳😳..Also I loved how Geet is treating him like a baby😳...
  • MSK's portrayal of disgust whenever he sees something which reminds him of Dev's existence...this sort of gives a clear visual of the future track😈
  • Geet's dilemma and her talks with Dadi which justifies why Geet is forced to hide it from MSK...
  • Dadi's manipulative ways which might look irritating and unfair but thats what will progress the story ahead in the right direction for the drama element😊
  • Justification given about those goons who belonged to some politician👍🏼...
  • Precap which makes us curious about tomorrow...Is it all planted by Dev😈 or is it a genuine attack on Dev ??😈...Is Dev the culprit or the Victim ??😉....To know more watch GHSP from mon-sat at 9.30pm😆
Turn Offs
  • Arjun-Annie torturous track which has no head or tail🤢
  • Sloppy editing work👎🏼...
  • Flow of the episode was not proper ...again looked as if we r watching two different serials
  • Manisha part was not so convincing today😕
I won't rate today's episode because I feel today's episode if we look at only Maan-Geet's part only sets the tone for future track since MSK's insecurity and Geet's dilemma was the only purpose of today's episode...so will see the rest of the week now to judge how this Dev track will b played out🤔
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Jyo.....plz do give your verdict & some tukkas too.....the den needs something to get it going....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pennu 🤗
Geet brought napkins home from the hotel, I've heard of ppl taking toiletries home from a hotel but not napkins, that even exceeds MSK and his cheapness 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
My take. Page 1

Episode Analysis

Things that worked for me

1. Geet approaching daadi with her concern about Dev's condition - Geet does not trust Dev. Somewhere she is also not buying his "I have changed. I intend to do good" form. She knows he is upto know good and voices her concern to the only person who can help her, daadima. And daadi's assurance that she is around if something goes wrong. Well done. Geet's concern is genuinely just for Maan and how he will react when he finds out about Dev lending him blood. She does not care about Dev. And daadi will help her out if it comes to that.

2. Maan and Geet's masti. Geet pulling Maan;s leg is always cute. So was this scene. Again daadi's words are to be noted. Geet and Maan always fight but don;t need anyone to help them sort out their problems. Before anyone can interfere, they sort out the issue on their own. This time will be no different. There is a silver lining behind every dark cloud.

3. Romeo and Manishaa are any day better than Arjun Anne romance. Even if they act silly, I enjoy them on screen.

4. Dev beaten up by gundas. Again for helping Maan. Well, the stage is very interesting. Like I said yesterday, Dev might not be bad afterall. He might turn grey from this point onwards - Seeing Maan's hatred towards him despite his efforts to save him and help him, witnessing Geet's concern for Maan when he is also injured and there is no one to care for him. It is interesting to note that during the initial days of this show, when Dev cheated on Geet and went back to Canada, he always complained about how Maan got everything and he always got just left-overs. Indication that Dev has always been very jealous of Maan and Maan's achievements. I think that is what will turn him grey again.

5. As much as I hate it, I kind of understand daadi's concern for her other grandson. She is a mother. Irrespective of what her son did, her concern that he might be in trouble is justified. But in the event that he does something wrong again, she will support Geet and Maan. She knows they are right and her love for Maan is greater.

Things that did not work for me

1. Are we to assume that Adi knows that Dev donated the blood? That wasn't clear to me.

2. Adi initially hesitated to help Dev but eventually agreed. Why? Just because daadi asked? Why can't he have an opinion of his own. Irrespective of how much he respects daadi I would have expected that his love and respect for Maan and Geet would make him decline her request. I was upset when he agreed. I hope at-least he tells Maan about it in due course.

3. Arjun - Anne and everything to do with them is despicable. I don't know what else to day.

4. Maan was dying yesterday and is all fine today? It could have been made more realistic. Maybe him being wheeled out on a wheel-chair etc. The accident seems like a joke each passing day.

5. Khurana's are RICH. They are billionaires. Why are they getting napkins from hotels?

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Posted: 14 years ago
@Parm....Howdy🤗

@Window

A sweet melody did she croon
It did indeed make me swoon😆


@Zee...awesome take "nagin" is apt😆


@Golden...you broke pinky swear of Page3 and Later club but its arright all for a good cause😆

Edit

@Pennu..........howdy🤗




Edited by Geekgod - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Parm: Please read point 13 of my take on page 1

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