3Idtz - Kamina Laya Tattu,-Dev Geet pe Lattu!! - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: killerkinrul

yup i agree he is rrealy good hope this show has found the villian they always needed who can act cruel , dangerous but at the same time charmer also

banao banao ji



Yes its almost done...Tum comment toh karogi na
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ale poochne kya baat hai karungi zaror karungi
why u ask thi question Vij
but i hope ye accident track jaldi se finish hojaye within week so i can relax a bit more
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: killerkinrul

Ale poochne kya baat hai karungi zaror karungi

why u ask thi question Vij
but i hope ye accident track jaldi se finish hojaye within week so i can relax a bit more



Oh yeah that reminds me did u read the Valentines Day Special, Story me and Shiv wrote???

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Posted: 14 years ago
nope
where is link to dedo mujhe
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is what Shivi wrote

Hotel throws a Valentines bash for all of the couples staying there.....and Geet wants to attend the party.....but Maan ofcarse does not want to....as he is sadu and because of dev out on loose.......
But after much thought......Maaan goes and tells dev flat out to stay the hell away from him and geet at all costs.....and with the hopes that dev would follow his orders.....he listens to geet and tells her to get ready.
She wears that beautiful chiffon peach pinkish sari.....aray the one she held in her hands a few episodes ago....
while tryin to put on the sari.......she pokes her self with the safety pin and starts to bleed........maan is outside still waiting.......wonders what is takin her sooo long...
geet comes out of the bathroom with her sari half done....lookin for a band aid.......as her finger is bleeding......maan sees her and cannot handle how mesmerizing she looks.......
and flat hot tummy completely revealed.....her back revealed with a cute blouse on....where the doris are also undone.......
he looks on...as she is wandering for a bandaid....finally maan snaps out and notices that she is bleeding.....
so he runs to her....and tells her that she cannot even put on her own clothes without hurting herself...and at this rate he will have to put her clothes on her for her....
and she looks at him lovingly.....and says....I don't mind.....naughty naughty geet eyes😉
and maan says really?? Suddenly geet chokes on what she just said...and gulps hard.....maan holds onto her pallu......and pulls it off
Geet whispers as to why he pulled that off....it was done correctly....and maan whispers back....sayin that he can do the pallu better☺️

And then from here i continued


Maan puts the Pallu on Geet's Left Shoulder Undone , goes behind her and and takes hold of the sari to do the front pleats, he does the pleat his hand swiftly moving about, geet stands with bated breath as Maan does her pleats, and he tucks it once done, making Geet gasp at the touch of his fingers.......Maan notices this, and plans to tease his wife more.....His takes the dori of the blouse next and runs his fingers on her bare back before tying it in a knot.....his action makes Geet flex her muscles and she whispers his name......Maan gives his million dollar smirk....😳

Maan then with swift actions does her pallu and pins it up.....Once done Maan from Behind kisses on her shoulder and the nape of her neck, tiny pecks showering one after the other, Geet who no longer can take this, turns around and hugs him with all her love and passion closing every inch of Gap in between them.............

Then it was Shivi's Turn again

After the tight hug........they both let go of each other.......tryin to lose themselves in each other......geet handles herself....and moves a bit away.....but maan is done....😉 he sees her finger which is still bleeding......he takes her finger and puts the finger in his mouth.....and sucks on it.....☺️
geet looks at him........tryin hard not to allow him to melt her.........she pulls her hand out.....hesitantly.......as she too was enjoying it.....
she turns around shows him her back.........she needed a bit of air......she inhales and exhales.....slowly trying to control herself.......and whispers to maan......thank u......cause he just put the sari on her....
but she felt him closing in on her....as she can feel him breathing on her back........he slowly touches her back again....and then her doris.....fixes them a bit......and then slowly he brings his face closer to her back....teasing her as if he will kiss her there......but alas the man knows how to tease well.....he slowly tickling her back...playfully brings her hair from the right shoulder to her back.....and fixes her hair.....
brings his face closer to her ear......and now his lips are touching her ear....and she can feel his warmth....he smiles naughtily....cause he knows what he has done to her........but he slowly kisses her ear....then whispers......you are lookin gorgeous.....and now ur sari is on as well.......so madam if u r ready shall we go for the party???😳😳😳
geet's eyes are closed....as she cannot handle him this close......and she some how handles herself.....and moves away again...
yes yes....shall we....still unable to look at him.......maan grins evilly....and naughtily........puts his hands on her waist....and starts to lead her out of the room.....
Geet's heart keeps skipping beats....as they make their way to the party😍

And then again my turn

They walk into the Hall....Decorated with Roses, and Balloons, Candles etc....and makes their way to one of the tables....Maan Holds out the chair for Geet to sit , Geet takes the cue and sits down, she looks around the room, struck by the grandeur and the beauty of the decorated Hall...

She Notices Couples Dance in the Center of the hall, swaying their bodies along with the soft romantic Track that was being played and could not help but think about her first dance ever, at Mr.Chopra's Party

Maan notices the change in her expressions and is about to ask Geet to dance with him, when his Mobile Flashes "Dadi Ma" since it was from home he knew it would be inappropriate if he did not answer it, he shows the Mobile to Geet which was flashing Dadi Ma's Name and mouths" Main abhi aaya"...

Geet nods her head and Maan gets up to leave the Hall.......

The Track that was being played comes to an End and the hall gets filled with a thunderous round of applause's.....

The event Organizer (Not Dev) comes to the center Stage to make an announcement, that on this occasion of VALENTINES day, their next program for the evening would be the girls/Fiances/Wives speaking out their hearts and proposing their guy/Husband etc out loud 😉

He then goes on to say, that the one on whom the spotlight falls first would make the start.....

The Lights go Dim, and the spotlight falls on the spot where Geet was siting , thus choosing her, Geet gets a little tensed, and becomes Uneasy.....

The event manager and his partner announces that they have got their first Victim and the crowd splits into laughter, they go up to Geet and asks her "Aap Akeli Kyu Baiti hai Aapka Valentine Nazar Nahi aa raha"

Geet " Unka Phone aaya tha, isliye bahar chale gaye"

EO : Koi Baat Nahi Is event ko ek alag twist de dethe hai...and the three have some talk (Its all Hush hush to us)

Maan enters the Hall, which looks dimmer than when he left, suddenly a spotlight falls on Maan....

And Geet Calls Out "Maan" her voice booming in the hall

Another Spot Light is shone on Geet 😳

Maan stands there mesmerized seeing the love of his life look breathtakingly beautiful

Geet goes on to say " I LOVE YOU, Main aapse bohat pyaar karthi hoon, ek pal ke liye nahi, ek din ke liye nahi, Zindagi bhar ke liye "...Will you be My Valentine?"

Maan Walks up to Geet, takes her hand kisses it, and says Is Janam mein hi nahi aane wali har Janam mein main sirf tumhare valentine rahoonga Geet "I love you "

They Hug.....Music fades in....

Tu Mile Dil Khile (For a change these two are doing the Lip Sync)

Maan

Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoonga zindagi bhar
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Geet
Pyaar kabhi, ho marta nahin hum tum marte hain
Hote hai voh, ho log amar pyaar jo karte hain
Jitni adaa, utni vafa
Ek nazar pyaar se dekh lo phir se zinda kar do
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Maan
Haan tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Geet
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoongi zindagi bhar

Both

Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Shivi's again

After the dance.....maan can ask the baby if he/she is okay........and if zyada dance to nahin ho gaya....And geet can look at him with soo much love and see how much he cares for the baby.....and we can have dev look from the side.......😉

And then again my turn

Maaneet go to their Room, Change into their Night Suits and head towards the Bed, Geet is going to take hold of Maan;s hand like she always does before going to sleep, when Maan takes Geets Hands in his and says "Thank you Geet" Meri Zindagi ithni Specail Banane Ke liye, Har Pal, Har Lamhon ko Yaadgaar Banane ke liye....

ANd then for the first time we see a change in MSK's Character (Another Layer of his character Gets revealed ) when he goes on to say that he loves her too much that he cannot even think of life without her and starts talking about Death , when Geet puts her hand on his Mouth, to stop him from talking further and says "Jab Himdono saath hai, toh kuch galat nahi ho saktha hai, aur agar kuch galath hua bhi, hum dono milkar use teek karenge"

She Moves Forward gives a Kiss on his Forehead and says" Good Night "

Maan also says the same and they fall asleep....

Next Day, Morning.....The sun seeps into their Bedroom,....Geet opens her eyes slowly, looking at the window from where the sun rays were seeping into their room, she Get up, Prays to Babaji and is about to leave the Bed when she fees something tucking on her dupatta, She looks back to see Maan holding on to her dupatta sleeping like an Angel...Her Angel"

She goes close to him and blows on his face, Maan makes a frowning face and turn to lie down straight......She decides that she would not wake him up, as he was in Deep Sleep, and decides to move out of the bed without making noise....when Maan, holds her by her wrist and pulls her back, and she falls on him (Like the Outhouse Night, when se goes to pull the blanket)


Shivi's again

As she falls on top of him.......Maan rolls on the bed....and the ends up being on top of her.......his eyes closed.....still in half sleep..........he sleeps on her chest like a kid.......
Maan- geet so jao na.......we r on break after all.....u have no work to do....so why wake up so early!
Geet smiles- maan get up......
she nudges him........but he doesn't get up......he is just chillin and sleeping......holding her tightly........
finally out of no where......he again rolls on the other side....and now she is on top of him........
and then in his sleep he says....ha yeh position bhi theek hai.....kyun baby??
Geet- nahin papa.....yeh position bilcool bhi acha nahin hai...momma ko yeh position se ulti karne ka mann ho raha hai...(geet smiles)
Maan- ha ulti......kya???
His eyes open shocked.....he gently moves her off of him....and he looks at her concerned........and geet starts to laugh...
Maan- oh to mommy papa ko ullu bana rahi hai?
geet yeh tumnay acha nahin kiya......now expect the unexpected.....be alert today....as you will be shocked....he looks at her...angrily....
Geet- oh really aisa kya karne wale hai aap?
maan- did i just not just say expect the unexpected??
he growls off of the bed.....and runs into the shower.
Here geet reallys starts feels sick...especially after the rolling on the bed and all......and has to throw up.........she knocks on the door feelin uneasy..
geet- maan i need to use the washroom......can u open the door please?
Maan hears geet but does not answer...
geet- maan i really need to use the sink....please i really have to throw up...
Maan- yea right.....u already used this trick.....
Maan wraps the towel around him and opens the door......sadly it was too late.....as soon as the door opened.......she threw up right on him...
Maan looks at geet in the same expression he gave when geet spilled coffee on him!!!
Continue someone please😉

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And that was our SCREENPLAY for 14thFeb 2011, where we got the Dumbest V-day Episode ever

Edited by rickks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Preetu there is nothing as a Link, we wrote it on the 14th Feb Thread......Now here i have pasted the entire thing for you😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Viju dont worry V Day na sahi we will definetly see Maneet Romance in near future for me Valentine day is daily if you love somene MANEET are totaly and madly in love so i hope and finger crossed will definetly see maneet romance after this accident phasad so no tension
About your story wowwwwwwwwwww Both take me to some other land where no negativity exist only love so sooooo superb mindblowing love it love it😊😊
so romantic😳me dead if they show 50% of this🤢
awwwww naughty😉passionate😳lovely yaar and that song is my fav romantic number its so romantic love you both
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: killerkinrul

Viju dont worry V Day na sahi we will definetly see Maneet Romance in near future for me Valentine day is daily if you love somene MANEET are totaly and madly in love so i hope and finger crossed will definetly see maneet romance after this accident phasad so no tension

About your story wowwwwwwwwwww Both take me to some other land where no negativity exist only love so sooooo superb mindblowing love it love it😊😊
so romantic😳me dead if they show 50% of this🤢
awwwww naughty😉passionate😳lovely yaar and that song is my fav romantic number its so romantic love you both
👏👏



I know Preetu...But u see at the end of the Maan and Geet are mere characters, Puppets at the Hands of the CV's, We adore them love them and some even worship them......But these characters are so much loved because the script of the show earlier was one of a kind and when u have amazing actors like GC and DD who breath life into the characters, to make the script and story look stunning on screen we automatically fall in love with them.....So u see more than the acting its the script....which is important by at least .01 percent.......If they are not given such scenes toh defo we will never be able to see them romance right and no matter how much u argue ki they are fantastic actors at the end of the day they need a script to aid them???

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Posted: 14 years ago
yup i agree a good acting needs a good story , a good chemistry needs a good scenes,a good characters need a good sceenplay with Characters like Maan and Geet which are soooo diffrent from regular lead characters of any show and actors like Gurti to play Maneet they can creat Magic and wonders and i hope they do that atleast now
and one more thing you know my gut feeling is saying that AAM Track is going to end soon then they will focus on Maneet and dev story and i hope they do well as now they have a good actor in Dev character aswell who can becam very bad at times and sweet also
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is the Link PREETU....jao jaake Reply do😊

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1617520#39272422

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