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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Asolutely lovely 😍

Darn Sharmi - your FFs are so much more interesting than the serial these days 😆 😆 😆

I wish the CVs would get "inspired" by this.

You brought out the relationship between Maaneet so well ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Jhan 🤗

Thanks Jhan. In fact the reason I am spinning out the OSs these days are that the episodes are so blah! So, I help myself with my OS. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra
loved t...wow it was...👏

Thanks Shreya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kadydeep
Ek Dum Jhakaaaas........⭐️👏

I loved the part where he says he relives his childhood which he missed as a child through her........

Write something about Mann-Dev meet from their POV's...... I would love to read it......

Thanks for the idea Deeps. Will definitely try to think something up. 😊

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Originally posted by: hinalshah
wowwwwwww loved it n the letter was awesome

Thanks 😳

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Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Aww..that was awesome....

Thanks Dhara 😊

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Originally posted by: sindu555
wwoww just wwoww ....

it was awesome .... oye CVs sharmi kay OS say hi acha acha idea le lo .... that letter Maan wrote was simply amazing ... so simple yet so deep..

thanks alot hun!

keep writing

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Sana

Thanks Sana. I am entertaining myself these days since CVs have decided to inflict AAM on us. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh
Wow. 😍

Where does this creativity flow in you? All of your OS's so far have been so original and different and something that I would never have thought of .. and frankly have not seen being used anywhere else. That is why it's so refreshing to read them.

Lovely OS. It really accented their relationship in a new manner. My favourite part was Maan thanking her for giving him all those memories he was deprived of as an 18-year old boy himself.

I would love to see something like this happening in the serial as well!

Thankyou.

Z

Just like Maan had hopelessly fallen in love with Geet, I had hopelessly fallen in love with Maneet 😊. There is a parallel Maneet world in my mind, which has survived the recent assaults by CVs. 😆 This comes out in the OSs.