Maaneet OS - Dine and Dance Under a Starry Night

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Dear Friends I wrote an OS to bring some closeness between Maan And Geet as their lives have taken a lot of turns with busy life and any other parameters they are not able to get time alone.

I have written two more OS if you like you can read them and comment

Maaneet OS- My desi Cinderella !

Maaneet OS- Cravings @ 12 am !


Assuptons :
The location is New York City ! Rick and Daisy are Maan and Geet's close friends. Khushi is Maan and Geet's princess daughter. Khushi is a sweet name and I think many like the same giving loads of love for Maan and Geet

It was a warm night in New York. Maan and Geet Khurana were getting ready to go on a date. Khushi was about 2 now so they didn't have much time alone. Khushi was at the stage where she was starting to talk, pick up everything and wouldn't want to be away from Mommy or Daddy for more than a second.

Tonight, they made a plan. They already knew that Khushi loves Rick and Daisy exactly like they are her second parents and she wouldn't mind a bit being with them for a couple hours than with her parents.


It was quarter to 7 when Rick and Daisy knocked at the Khurana's mansion's door. Geet was just smoothing out a wrinkle on her dress with her hands when she heard the knock. The royal purple dress accented her figure perfectly. Maan watched his wife with a huge smile as he let his eyes wander over her body.

"Daisy, Rick!" Geet exclaimed as she opened the door and embraced her best friend, Daisy, and then her other close friend, Rick. "I'm so happy you guys decided to watch Khushi. We can't thank you enough." Geet said joyfully as her husband came over and greeted them. "We'll play golf and chill out for this." When Maan said that she glared at him, but he playfully teased , she noticed and the group laughed.

"It's not problem, really Geet. And why wouldn't we want to watch our godchild?" Rick said gratefully as he pulled Daisy to his side and kissed her cheeks and because of that, Daisy couldn't stop smiling.

"By the way, where is that godchild of ours?" Daisy asked happily and I looked around for the bouncy, jet black-haired girl.

"She's playing in her room and watching TV but she's going to be really happy to see you both."

Maan told them with a charming smile and went toward Khushi's room. Before they knew it,

Khushi was running toward Rick and Daisy like there was a big, gigantic pile of candy in the middle of the floor. She jumped into Daisy's arms and then into Rick's.

"Daishee'Ick!" Khushi said while she giggled and her black curls bounced around. Daisy tickled her stomach and she fell down and rolled around and they all started to laugh. "You're a little giggle bug, aren't you?"

Maan and Geet stood there, proud of their daughter and Rick got their attention again.

"Do you guys have reservations? You guys should go now." he told them with a polite smile.

"Darn, we do. Well, we better go. Thanks so much you guys." Maan said, just remembering the reservations he booked.

"Anytime, Maan." Rick told him and patted his shoulder.

Geet bent down to kiss Khushi and Maan did the same. Daisy told Khushi to wave bye and she did with a smile and blew a kiss to them both. Maan and Geet both caught it and placed it on their lips.

Maan held Geet's hand as they drove off to a restaurant named, 'La Italia'. The restaurant was beautiful.

Maan made got a special seat for him and his beautiful wife. The table was on a balcony and it overlooked the river and the city.

"Maan this is'.wow." Geet couldn't believe her eyes as she looked out onto the city. The moon reflected off of the water and the water looked as if it shined. It was clear skies during that time.

"Amazing maybe?" he asked her as he pulled out her chair for her. She thanked him and sat down.

"Yes, it's exactly that. I can't believe this. You didn't have to do this, Maan." Geet told him honestly as she took off her coat and he put it on the back of her chair. A waiter soon came in.

"Hello, welcome to La Italia. What would you like to drink tonight?" the man looked over to Maan first.

"Whatever the lovely woman desires'" Maan said romantically and it made Geet laugh. At that moment, the waiter looked over to Geet.

"How about red wine?" she asked and looked over to Maan nervously. He nodded and the waiter smiled and walked away.

"I just'can't believe you did this for us, Maan. It's so romantic." Geet said in a bubbly voice and Maan grabbed her hand and they twined together.

"I planned it to be romantic. It just wouldn't be the same inside then it would be outside. Besides, the weather is nice too and I want to give you a great night since we barely get to do this." Maan told her with a wink and looked up at the moon.

"It's very thoughtful of you."Geet said with a sweet smile upon her face. "This is going to be a great night."

Soon, the waiter came back with a bottle of red wine. He poured wine into both of their glasses and asked what they wanted to order. Maan and Geet both ordered spaghetti, their favorite meal. When the waiter left to place the order, Maan held up his glass.

"Here's a toast," Maan started to say and caught Geet off guard. Geet then lifted her glass. "Here's a toast to our life, our wonderful, baby girl and our wonderful friends and family."

"Cheers!" Maan and Geet said at the same time and sipped on their red wine.

Soon, they got their spaghetti and enjoyed the nice, scrumptious dinner. Soon after, Maan and Geet took a moonlit walk by the river.

"Maan, this night has been one of the best nights of my life. Thank you so much." Geet said happily as they held hands.

"You're so welcome, hon. I enjoyed this night as well." Maan said with a huge smile.

"I don't want this night to end, to tell you the truth." Geet said truthfully and hugged her husband; their wedding rings glinted in the moonlight.

As they walked out they were hand in hand and Geet leaned a bit on to Maan's arm..

As they walked , Geet removed her Stilettos and held it by her fingers..

They walk outside, the grass damp with dew beneath their bare feet. The stars glow like embers, as if the sky has burned up and nothing but sparks are left. A gibbous crooked crescent hangs low in the sky;the last thin shard to appear before the nothingness of the new moon. What little moonlight there is filters through the tree branches, casting purple grey shadows over everything. A warm summer breeze rustles the leaves.

They found a beautiful iron bench on the lawn which ran along side the river.

Geet took her place there, and Maan joined her and snuggled closer placing his hand around her shoulder. She placed her head on her shoulder and they both looked up, the sky had transformed into a beautiful bed of stars , but yet the moon shone on them making a beautiful spotlight.

"Lets dance Geet ", Maan whispered .


""Are you serious?" But there is no music and here you want to dance??", Geet stepped back and looked at his face.


"Never been more serious in my life Geet." He said putting my hands around her neck. And grinned...Then turning again to Geet


"O yes look up ", he pointed to the sky...She looked up , he asked her to think of the constellations as musical instruments...


Maan identified saxophone, the clarinet forming constellation.

Geet struggled to spot an instrument , but finally she aid "See Maan there is a guitar also..."

And as they continued the keyboard and the drums were spotted effortlessly.

"See I told you we got an orchestra , and look there we have our singer..singing there ", he showed .

She ended up spotting a musical stage in the starry night .. Maan got up and kneel down one knee

Looking towards Geet he placed his right hand out and said" May I have the pleasure of dancing with my lady love"

A smile ran across Geet's face.. She placed her hand on his and got up.

He walked her to the middle of the lawn..

[Music starts]

Ooh baby, I love your way, everyday
I wanna tell you I love your way, every way
I wanna be with you night and day, ooh yeah



He drew his hand out and she gently placed her hand into his right hand. The warmth of his hand felt very nice on her and as he watches her smile.


Geet placed her hand on Maan's shoulder while Maan traces her waist line through her dress The gaze which Maan gave her made her blush and turn red as a beet..They started their slow dance with steps back and forth.


They swayed with the music back and forth with his right leg in between her left and they went in a repetitive manner.

Shadows grow so long before my eyes
And they're moving across the page
Suddenly the day turns into night
Far away from the city
But don't hesitate 'cuz your love won't wait



They did their slow waltz as Maan gripped held her waist as she placed her hand on his shoulder.


Ooh baby, I love your way, everyday
I wanna tell you I love your way, every way
I wanna be with you night and day, ooh yeah



Moon appears to shine and light the sky
With the help of some big glitter's
Wonder how they have the power to shine, shine, shine
I can see them under the pine
But don't hesitate 'cuz your love won't wait


He takes her hand in his, and laces their fingers together. She looks up at him, her pupils large and dark. Her gaze holds him, silently daring him to look away. In response, he tightens his fingers around her spine, her heat suffusing them through the fabric of her dress. She doesn't miss a beat as she leans back, trusting him completely, her hair spilling across the lawn. Her body forms a graceful curve. She slowly pulls herself up to meet him, not once taking her eyes from his.

Ooh baby, I love your way, everyday
I wanna tell you I love your way, every way
I wanna be with you night and day

But don't hesitate 'cuz your love won't wait

He released his hold on her and she spun like a top around him and got back to the same position. Then he held her by he waist while she placed her hands on his shoulder and they went back and forth with her right leg between his and they swayed again with the music.


I can see the sunset in your eyes
Brown and gray and blue besides
Clouds are stalking islands in the sun
Wish I could buy one out of season
But don't hesitate 'cuz your love won't wait

She left his shoulders and went around him while his hands followed her face by holding her head around and finally he held her by her shoulder while she placed her hand on his waist and their heads collided.

He pulled closer and Geet leaned in. Immediately her senses went haywire. His hand on the lower side of her back was crushing her against him, while Geet had her hand on his head crushing him closer. It began with such force Geet couldn't breathe, but that didn't matter Maan was all she needed.

Ooh baby, I love your way, everyday
I wanna tell you I love your way
I wanna be with you night and day

Ooh baby, I love your way
I wanna tell you I love your way
I wanna be with you night and day, yeah

He counts the vertebrae in her back while their shadows mirror their movements alongside them.

They are as one, fused together in their silent dance.

Parting a little Geet looked up at Maan..He raised his hand slowly up to her neck then her chin, leaving a trail of goosebumps along the way.
"How about we focus on the things we can control."


"Like what?"she said smiling."Like kissing you." he raised his eyebrow.

And within a few seconds his lips captured hers and they closed their eyes to sink in the feeling.

He pulls back only when breath becomes a necessity." I love you," he whispers, cradling her face in his hands. She smiles. "I know you do."

"I love you too.Maan " She looks up at him with twinkle in her eyes .. "I know that.", he acknowledges.. as he continues tracing her face again with his index finger....

He slides his arms around her waist and she leans against his chest. She can hear the slow steady beat of his heart, the rush of blood being forced through veins, the steady sound of breathing corresponding with the rise and fall of his chest.

Geet looked up again as she leaned in for another passionate kiss, Geet decided that she definitely loved to dance'"Thank You for this wonderful dance " she said..."Your Welcome Honey "smiled Maan holding her by the waist.

The night went along and the two people in love Maan and Geet enjoyed dancing under the stars.


No sooner they drove back home to be hugged by their darling Khushi..


"Papa I want you to make me sleep", she said as he lifted her in his arms.


"Sure sweetheart", Maan kissed her while walking to her room..


"See papa Twinkle Twinkle little stars , I can see a lots of stars.." she pointed outside..


Smiling at that innocent angle he kissed her forehead and sang holding her hand "Twinkle Twinkle little stars won't you shine on us as we dance!!!"


Geet who watched this bonding and dancing had a tear roll down her beautiful eyes.."Thank You babaji" she said with folded hands looking out the starry night


Indeed she had a wonderful husband and beautiful Khushi....


Dinner and Dancing under the stars , Geet and Maan that night slept in each others arms looking at the starry night and the musical constellation.



Thank You for reading.. I hope you liked it. Do comment ! The Starry Night Indeed made a beautiful one !😊

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maankigeet4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwww...tht was so sweet and cute....i really liked it..nicely written :)
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So sweet............awwww.......it was so dreamy😍
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awwwww...tht was so sweet and cute....i really liked it..nicely written :)

Thanks a lot for appreciating..
I hope I brought a smile on your face !!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was beautiful and wonderful,.....truly a prefect family...And Khushi is a cutey 😊.....
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Originally posted by: ManEetkiDeewaNi

That was beautiful and wonderful,.....truly a prefect family...And Khushi is a cutey 😊.....

Thanks a lot for appreciating..
Yeah Khushi is a sweety !!
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Thanks a lot for liking my OS

Just thought of bringing some flavor to Maan and Geet's life 😉
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That was beautiful😊!! lOved it🤗!! Great work👏!
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Originally posted by: mrs.MSK_GurTi

That was beautiful😊!! lOved it🤗!! Great work👏!

Thanks dear you r most welcome !! Just thought of writing some for their busy life 😆😊
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aww cute OS

each OS is getting better and better.. thats why you should write more!! lol

keep up the great work

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