OS: Towards the oneness (Part 3 - pg 7)

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

awwwww that was a fab end to a fab os!!!!!!!

loved it - awwwwwww the wild lover hahahah had me daydreaming

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesome .... 👏

write another soon!

love

Sana

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Wow!! You captured Maan's longing so amazingly....!! Wonderful...absolutely wonderful!!

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Shweta13

@Shweta13

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

waiting to see this passion in maan , please give ideas to CV's... many things can be done without harming her .............lovely OS enjyed erery bit of it.

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siroilily

@siroilily

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Beautiful os* clap clap clap* 👏 If d cv shows even 10% frm dis lovely os, hamari toh baat banjayengi 😍

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namitasin

@namitasin

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

This too is awesome just like ur other os. U r simply fabulus. Keep giving us that kind of gr8 os.

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Desigirl144

@Desigirl144

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Awesome job! :) I absolutely loved it! 😊

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alu5123

@alu5123

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Awesome, you have summarized their journey till now so well.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Nice part

Loved howevr Maan is in psoition his 1st priority is Geet's care

Love him for that

Their love for each other is fab

Geet's inocence n their nok jhok was sho shweet

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

*sighs*... after a very long breath Im writing this piece...

I did love all the other fics and parts of this fic but the finale part has been the most special.. love does not need lust necessarily to bind two souls and that is very much so shown by you in the form of MG coupling...

adored it, loved it and very much relived and smiley after reading this...

I must say you have found a permanent PM member for your fics and writings cz I seriously like your creativity... hoping to have some more from you ahead too..so keep up the great work and Do write more!!!

CHEERS TO TOWARDS THE ONENESS!!!

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