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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

cuteee...and great first attempt..keep writing hun :)

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rickks
Waah waah...livin upto your name "Dhak Dhak" hai na😊😊...But here our heart was going dhak dhak..It was beautifully written shivu....It was 😉so cute(Hormonal Swings)

☺️ some body say dhak dhak😆

thank you viji😃

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@roseinbloom

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

I need to read more now!

You're a master at this. Do continue and pm me whenever you write something pleasee 😃

Love,

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh
I need to read more now!

You're a master at this. Do continue and pm me whenever you write something pleasee 😃

Love,

Z

<3

😆 thank you babe.....my first OS ever......on this forum and that too on Maaneet........i am glad you liked.....i will continue whenever i get more ideas and will pm u😛

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Thank you all!!!!! Very much, i am glad that you all liked my OS....

will write again, if i have another unique idea!!! thank you all!

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-sann-

@-sann-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Twinnie...dill khush kar ditta tussi.....

jai ho....fab...fab....& u know...u rock...right....

shirt up...pant down...

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VirIka4ever

@VirIka4ever

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Very Interesting storyline ... please update soon ... Can you please add me to your PM List? Please and Thank you

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EBasso

@EBasso

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

WOW meri chupi rustam!! haaye... my heart was pounding faster than steam engine!! it was soo sexy! I could just picturize the whole scene on maneet in my head dear! I fell in love - wait no lust 🤣 just kidding.

well if this was ur first attempt and you hadn't even proofread it - you did a damn good job daadi!!! you are a daadi at this. why haven't you written more. I see every day what you write and I see it in you. too bad i didn't think to ask u this before now! you have a knack for weeding out bad from good and you have a very unique vision.

I loved the fact that I am reading your OS 4 months after you wrote it and it still feels so fresh. It's as if it can be used even now! Oh I wish I get to see this scene in the show some day.

write MORE gurl!! you've left me craving for more!

Compete for the tell-a-story contest!

You'll get my vote for sure!