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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
cuteee...and great first attempt..keep writing hun :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rickks

Waah waah...livin upto your name "Dhak Dhak" hai na😊😊...But here our heart was going dhak dhak..It was beautifully written shivu....It was 😉so cute(Hormonal Swings)

☺️ some body say dhak dhak😆
thank you viji😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I need to read more now!
You're a master at this. Do continue and pm me whenever you write something pleasee 😃
Love,
Z
<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

I need to read more now!

You're a master at this. Do continue and pm me whenever you write something pleasee 😃
Love,
Z
<3

😆 thank you babe.....my first OS ever......on this forum and that too on Maaneet........i am glad you liked.....i will continue whenever i get more ideas and will pm u😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you all!!!!! Very much, i am glad that you all liked my OS....
will write again, if i have another unique idea!!! thank you all!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Twinnie...dill khush kar ditta tussi.....
jai ho....fab...fab....& u know...u rock...right....
shirt up...pant down...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Interesting storyline ... please update soon ... Can you please add me to your PM List? Please and Thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW meri chupi rustam!! haaye... my heart was pounding faster than steam engine!! it was soo sexy! I could just picturize the whole scene on maneet in my head dear! I fell in love - wait no lust 🤣 just kidding.

well if this was ur first attempt and you hadn't even proofread it - you did a damn good job daadi!!! you are a daadi at this. why haven't you written more. I see every day what you write and I see it in you. too bad i didn't think to ask u this before now! you have a knack for weeding out bad from good and you have a very unique vision.

I loved the fact that I am reading your OS 4 months after you wrote it and it still feels so fresh. It's as if it can be used even now! Oh I wish I get to see this scene in the show some day.

write MORE gurl!! you've left me craving for more!

Compete for the tell-a-story contest!

You'll get my vote for sure!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a wonderful OS i must say.....I hope u will continue it.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you goldie for the lovely comments....
and thank you jyoti!

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